To whom shall I ship them?
Centre
Action, drama, a little romance, danger and a wonderful happy ending! This was great, Vania. I hope you will write more and share your talent with us. Say "yes". *smiles*
Thank you so much for taking the time to review this little piece. I was overjoyed to read your kind and insightful words. :) Maybe it will encourage me to write again soon - it's been so long. Thanks again!
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That was very well written and so like our dear Parker (and her rapier wit) to give him that particular item. You explored the softer side of their relationship without "getting all mushy" and you did it perfectly. A definite 10.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Long live the Centre! Great job.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Poor Sydney. You captured him, his misdeeds and regrets beautifully.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Ooh, so close but..not cigar! Tragic and wonderfully written!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Bravo! (Again)
"I'm sorry. But that doesn't really matter anymore."
Love it!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Very nicely done and again, you conveyed so much with just a few well chosen words. Great job!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Oh my...that was just so poignant. Deep.
Hope.
Excellent writing style and wording. You say much in so few words. Great job!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Aww, poor Broots, being a parent can't be easy I guess but being a teenage girl is very difficult. (very difficult) I'd love to see a sequel to this, Parker dispensing her own advice to Broots. Loved this story!! Great job!!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Oh wow, you killed her. (sobs!!) But it's such an amazing story, so well written. Beautiful. Another wonderful fic!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Perfect.
"...destined to look into each others life but never touch." - That is so true, such a great line that really summarizes their existence.
Oh and "foolish dreams" ..loved it. Again, great job!!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed OH YES! I love it! And that last bit, it's so telling, profound, and just wow.
"Either...or... He won't let that happen to them."
Incredible writing.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Bravo!! That was very nicely done, succinct and well written. Nice references to Greek mythology and I love the way you entwined the two together so perfectly. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed This is amazing and sad and is really quite profound. Poor Margaret. I always wondered if she peeked in to gaze lovingly at her children during the night and I have chills now from imagining that she did indeed check in on Jarod every night- except the one night that he was taken from her. You conveyed so much in so few words. Very lovely, Vania.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Oh, no! No, no, no! *reminds self that's it's only fiction* This- tragic as it is- is amazing! "..and it broke him." Wow! Excellent, excellent.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed I can't believe I've never stumbled across this before. It's brilliant. "Tsk tsk"---- Jarod can be such an enormous pain in the ass. Awesome read and another new favorite.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Haha, she could use a nice dose of tolerance. Good job!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed This piece is actually quite benign and light, And I like it! If anyone is insane, it's the people who started the madness. (no, not the Centre but the creators of the show.)
Insane or not, it was intersting. Raines the Tiger, Jarod the Fox, etc. and though even I have toyed with dozens of happy endings, I have to agree. If the Centre really stopped chasing Jarod, it just wouldn't be the same.
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*chuckles* Funny. I've never read this before but it was quite enjoyable and light.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Oh my, this is an incredible read and one which, for me, has multiple interpretations and I confess, I find it very thought provoking.
Aww and that last bit - "Mama?" Absolutely heartwreching.
Great job!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed *gasp* Okay, so in case no one has noticed, I'm not a P/J shipper, not really a fan of "annoying-boy" at all but I love this fic! I love it. This one is begging -screaming- for a continue. Perfect, perfectly written, perfect depictions, dialogue. Perfect. This is a definite favourite, can't believe I've only just stumbled across it today. Amazing job!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Aw, that was too cute. She does need to lighten up a bit. Great job with this. I bet he still doesn't "grow up"... *grins*
Reviewer: Mirage Signed lol! Y2K compliant Jarod. That was a fun and short fic!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed *still laughing*
"You don't have to tell me. You really, really don't have to tell me."
I loved the "hung like a hamster" bit, that was hilarious, so hilarious!
Haha!
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