Characters: Debbie, Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1044
Read Count: 2247
To whom shall I ship them?
Ahh! How clever of you! That was perfectly written, loved the dialogue and how beautifully you built this story up to that wonderfully climactic ending. And no reviews? Insane. You should have tons of reviews. This is Perfect!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedExcellent! I love your use of fencing, descriptions, everything. Great job!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedCaptivating beginning. I really feel for Parker and Sydney.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedHaha, I love this line: "If you tell him I said that, I'll deny it and make sure your remaining days here on earth a living hell. Do you understand me, Syd."
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Aha! Jarod confessed his feelings- very unexpected.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedNice chapter and very fitting lyrics for the Parker/Jarod dynamic.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedI love the inclusion of Nicholas- very underused and quite a looker. *winks*
Reviewer: Mirage SignedOh, darn. It's unfinished- aside from that, it was a great read but I would love to know how the story ends.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedOh wow, this one is begging for a continue. Great read so far.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedI like it! This reads with such ease and is much like an episode, with spot on characterisations & an interesting plot. I have to admit, wonder boy working in the car wash is my favorite part, so real and a little more like the average joe. I hope to read more from you!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedOooh, I like. The mystery and suspense - so Pretender-ish! Great job!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedThis is such a lovely story and so perfectly written. Oh, and Tommy and Parker will forever be my favorite pairing. So, so tragic and so sad that it ended the way it did, but such a beautiful love story. Simply amazing.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedC'est tout simplement magnifique!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedThat episode was so touching but yes, Angelo had his one moment in time- out of time and what a moment it was. Great job, 24.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedWhat do I think? Well one, this an excellent tragedy and you were true to the characters. Maybe Jarod is alive and is messing with her head..still trying to help her but in this case, he went to the ultimate extreme...and so long as he's "dead", he should be far enough under the Centre's radar.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedGreat job, 24. It's no wonder she has an ulcer!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedWell, you perfectly expressed what I was thinking and what could have gone through Parker's mind when she realized that it wasn't "fate" (as Tommy had put it) but Frankenboy that led Tommy to her. It sickened me to learn that Jarod had interfered to that extent in her life. And I've always believed that there was more behind her tears (during the phone conversation during which Jarod confesses that he "lit the torch") than just despair, regret and the fact that Jarod had done such a kind thing. As matter of face, Jarod seemed more cruel than kind imo to manipulate her life, her love life and future and dangle in her face happiness- something she could never have. Perfect! You should have so many more reviews.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedOoh wow, that was nice, spot on dialogue, characterisations, and the over all atmosphere was beautiful.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedOh, wow, I love this. "Don't look now"
"So I don't."
That was fantastic!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedThat was wonderful! And no, Jarod probably doesn't want to know about Parker's vast *ahem* experiences. Well done! I enjoyed this so very much!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedAww, so sad and quite plausible. She could have very well been with child and the trauma of the gunshot could have resulted in a miscarriage...so tragic.
Still, it's sweet that Jarod always tries to put the pieces back together.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedAw, poor Jarod but it's very telling that she let him go. You write these characters well.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedOh wow. That was incredible, flowed nicely and was brilliantly constructed. Very clever to end it the way it began "dark and stormy night." Awesome. Also, I want to add that I read your bio and I truly hope that this year is kinder to you.
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