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Familiar Faces by Trish
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A trip to the bookstore turns into a reacquaintance.

Categories: Season 4
Characters: Debbie, Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1044
Read Count: 2247
[Report This] Published: 16/05/05 Updated: 16/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Familiar Faces

Ahh! How clever of you! That was perfectly written, loved the dialogue and how beautifully you built this story up to that wonderfully climactic ending. And no reviews? Insane. You should have tons of reviews. This is Perfect!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/05/10
Foiled by Trish
Rated: G starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Miss Parker gets a little fencing practice in and a fustrating surprise.

Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1357
Read Count: 2070
[Report This] Published: 16/05/05 Updated: 16/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Foiled

Excellent! I love your use of fencing, descriptions, everything. Great job!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/05/10
Hell To Pay by Trish
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Jarod's been shot and it doesn't look good, Parker has some thinking to do regarding her favorite lab rat...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Other Centre Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11971
Read Count: 54509
[Report This] Published: 16/05/05 Updated: 16/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Captivating beginning. I really feel for Parker and Sydney.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 3: Part 3

Haha, I love this line: "If you tell him I said that, I'll deny it and make sure your remaining days here on earth a living hell. Do you understand me, Syd."

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 4: Part 4

Where did the chapter disappear to?

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 8: Part 8

Aha! Jarod confessed his feelings- very unexpected.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 10: Part 10

Nice chapter and very fitting lyrics for the Parker/Jarod dynamic.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 11: Part 11

I love the inclusion of Nicholas- very underused and quite a looker. *winks*

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 12: Part 12

Oh, darn. It's unfinished- aside from that, it was a great read but I would love to know how the story ends.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
In Thine Enemy's House by Trish
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: (Sequel to Whatever it Takes) When Miss Parker returns to the Centre she finds an old friend has joined the team in the search for Major Charles, the Clone, and Jarod but this woman may have something to hide.

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Angelo, Brigitte, Broots, Catherine Parker, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Other Centre Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3765
Read Count: 1934
[Report This] Published: 16/05/05 Updated: 16/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: In Thine Enemy's House

Oh wow, this one is begging for a continue. Great read so far.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/11
Summary: Jarod investigates the murder of a teacher.



Categories: Season 2
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3307
Read Count: 1627
[Report This] Published: 16/05/05 Updated: 16/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Lessons

I like it! This reads with such ease and is much like an episode, with spot on characterisations & an interesting plot.  I have to admit, wonder boy working in the car wash is my favorite part, so real and a little more like the average joe. I hope to read more from you!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/10
Whispers by Trish
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: it short, brief and quick...

Note: wirtten for the TP 2001 Movie Challenge

Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Ethan
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 557
Read Count: 1552
[Report This] Published: 16/05/05 Updated: 16/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Whispers

Oooh, I like. The mystery and suspense - so Pretender-ish! Great job!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/09
Summary: "I love you."

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 660
Read Count: 1908
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

This is such a lovely story and so perfectly written. Oh, and Tommy and Parker will forever be my favorite pairing. So, so tragic and so sad that it ended the way it did, but such a beautiful love story. Simply amazing.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/01/11
Douleur by Lorna
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Quand les éléments ressemblent au chaos qui règne en vous à la perte de l'être aimé...

Categories: French
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 222
Read Count: 422
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: pas de chapitre

C'est tout simplement magnifique!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10
A Moment in Time by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Angelo thinks about what happened during Bloodlines.



Categories: Season 2
Characters: Angelo
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 292
Read Count: 2396
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Moment in Time

That episode was so touching but yes, Angelo had his one moment in time- out of time and what a moment it was. Great job, 24.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Whiskey Lullaby by leochick
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jarod gets a frantic phone call from Miss Parker, asking for his help. Will he help her? Please read and Review. FINISHED!



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Ethan, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5733
Read Count: 5276
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What do I think? Well one, this an excellent tragedy and you were true to the characters. Maybe Jarod is alive and is messing with her head..still trying to help her but in this case, he went to the ultimate extreme...and so long as he's "dead", he should be far enough under the Centre's radar.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/09
Pressure by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Miss Parker is in a lot of pressure to bring Jarod back.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 965
Read Count: 1418
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Pressure

Great job, 24. It's no wonder she has an ulcer!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10
Summary: What goes through your mind when you find out that something you held dear was a lie?



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Miss Parker, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 530
Read Count: 2331
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Not-So-Storybook Ending

Well, you perfectly expressed what I was thinking and what could have gone through Parker's mind when she realized that it wasn't "fate" (as Tommy had put it) but Frankenboy that led Tommy to her. It sickened me to learn that Jarod had interfered to that extent in her life. And I've always believed that there was more behind her tears (during the phone conversation during which Jarod confesses that he "lit the torch") than just despair, regret and the fact that Jarod had done such a kind thing. As matter of face, Jarod seemed more cruel than kind imo to manipulate her life, her love life and future and dangle in her face happiness- something she could never have. Perfect!  You should have so many more reviews.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/11
Summary: An extraordinary circumstance brings Jarod and Miss Parker together, but can they stop fighting long enough to survive?; also available as PG-13 Version here

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13137
Read Count: 3230
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: My Favorite Mistake

Again, great job.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/11
Summary: A conversation between two lonely people during New Year.

Ms. Parker/Thomas Romance and Jarod/Ms. Parker friendship



Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1055
Read Count: 1570
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Distance Between Two Hearts

Ooh wow, that was nice, spot on dialogue, characterisations, and the over all atmosphere was beautiful.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/10
Don't Look Now by Mareen
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Miss Parker is dying



Categories: Season 3
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Drama, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1003
Read Count: 1937
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Don't Look Now

Oh, wow, I love this. "Don't look now"

"So I don't."

That was fantastic!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Summary: Response to Tiffany's "IT WAS A DARK, STORMY NIGHT" Challenge

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1020
Read Count: 1726
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Thunder Strikes on a Dark Stormy Night

That was wonderful! And no, Jarod probably doesn't want to know about Parker's vast *ahem* experiences. Well done! I enjoyed this so very much!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/09
Shattered Lives by Nicky
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod finds Miss Parker on the verge of committing a desperate act. Will he be able to save her?



Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2057
Read Count: 1684
[Report This] Published: 18/05/05 Updated: 18/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part I: Shattered Mind

Aww, so sad and quite plausible. She could have very well been with child and the trauma of the gunshot could have resulted in a miscarriage...so tragic.

Still, it's sweet that Jarod always tries to put the pieces back together.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/10
A Hollow Feeling by 24
Rated: PG starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod gets sad news from his father.



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 902
Read Count: 2875
[Report This] Published: 18/05/05 Updated: 18/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Hollow Feeling

Aw, poor Jarod but it's very telling that she let him go. You write these characters well.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/04/11
Summary: Jarod is found by Miss Parker and crew. He tries to escape, but something happens. This is a challenge response from the pretender challenge group.



Categories: Post Pretender 2001
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 710
Read Count: 3761
[Report This] Published: 18/05/05 Updated: 18/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Dark and Stormy Night

Oh wow. That was incredible, flowed nicely and was brilliantly constructed. Very clever to end it the way it began "dark and stormy night." Awesome. Also, I want to add that I read your bio and I truly hope that this year is kinder to you.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/11