Troubling, yet also touching. KB at her finest.

There are a few missing gaps, but not enough to damage the efficiency of this story. If season 3 had been the last one, this would have a been nice first half to its finale.

Okay, first of all, I think the only reason the fire started so quickly was because it was Miss Parker who was lighting. In real life it takes a little more time to start a fire (at least to me), but it was probably a case of ignite or being shot. You don't mess with MP.

All kidding aside, this was a nice piece. I'm not much of the sappy and shippy kind, but I do enjoy a good story. The writing is good and efficient, but not as perfect as I've read in other stories. Still, for fans of JMPs, it's a must.

Without giving that many reasons to laugh, this was a funny story. I don't know if this makes any sense, but that was how I felt reading it. I liked it.

This was one of those stories that I've been planning to read for years but, somehow, never found the time to do it. Like the saying goes, "better late than never#. I had no expectancy regarding this story (I remembered reading good things about Callisto5 but that was it), so I was able to dive into it with a fresh mind. And I have to say, aside from some stumbles in ponctuation and phrasing, it was pretty good. The general idea was good, well developed; the character were all portrayed - the bit of Alex being the actual twin was quite interesting. I really hope this is the worst that Callisto5 has to offer.

I liked the way the story begin. It poses several interesting questions, like what happened to Jarod, or who took Miss Parker. The characters are also well written. The only thing wrong so far is the usage of verbs: some sentences mix present and past perfect, which can be confusing sometimes.

A more thorough review will be given at the last chapter.

Amazing insight. A bit disturbing also. Could easily fit into Season 2, when we were discovering stuff about Lyle.

The is a saying in Portuguese that roughly translated to English is something like "He who sees the face, doesn't see the heart". There'll probably an official translation for this, but I'm too lazy right now to go look for it.

Anyway, I think Sydney has a lot to atone for. He may not be as guilty as he claims himself to be, but that doesn't excuse him from all the things he's done. This piece captured those feelings perfectly. It was a very good read.

I have to stop reading this. I didn't want to, but once I realized this story doesn't have the end, I honesly couldn't see the point. I am truly sorry, but this story is too good to not know how everything wraps up. It's easier to leave it now and hope someday it will be finished.

I liked the way this was written, but I have a few qualms regarding some of Mr. Lyle's behavior. Though it's assumable that he may grieve the loss of his mother, I don't think he would react so drastically - embrace the bottle, so to say.

In any case, as Lyle uses a nice-guy facade to hide the fact that he's a monster, so can he use the monster facade to hide the fact that he has feelings for some people.

There are some stories that make me ignore their every imperfection, because of the way they are written. Form over content may not be the best way to appreciate a story, but it's nice sometimes. This story has both. I liked it.

I'm always suspicious of the quality of a story that supports itself on some passages from an episode or two. I've seen some writers who think that transcribing a bit of dialogue here and there, and writing some extra scenes is enough. It isn't. And this story is a good example of how the original material can be used as a starting point and then developed.

Jarod and Thomas relationship was well explored. I appreciated the way that Thomas acted as a sort of involuntary anchor between Jarod and Miss Parker and Jarod forced himself into great lengths to turn away. It was a good story about friendship and sacrifice.

Another thing I enjoyed was the sequencing of the scenes and the dialogues (monologues included). If we didn't know, we could almost mistake the original stuff from the fake. In a manner of speaking.

The question of language was a moot issue, in my opinion. I'm not an English native either, but I've read fics written by some who are and their grammar and syntax, not to mention spelling, was apalling. Fortunately, that doesn't happen with most of them.

Forgot to tell this: I'm curious about where you intend to take your story. So far, aside from some typos and syntax, I'm enjoying the plot. You might also want to pay some closer attention to the way your characters behave. At times, they seem too erratic and imature for their age, not to mention their personality. All this considerered, be sure I'll give you a full review once this story is finished. Have fun!