Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4089
Read Count: 1361
I almost can´t say anything. This is so sad. I liked it so much. Poor Parker.
Reviewer: Little Angel Signedbrilliant! I´m still lmao!!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedHey, that´s wonderful though it isn´t chistmas time :) and very sad...!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedReally nice! Liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Very sad. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you.
That is very well done!! I´m not sure if you meant Jarod or Sydney, but it doesn´t really matter. It´s very beautiful and so true!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedVery lovely! I liked " ...along with my hopes and thoughts of making the world a better place..." and that he has failed the people around him. That´s it what Syd is worried about. Good work!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedWell done! Right, Sydney is the mentor of both, especially of Jarod, and I´m almost sure if Sydney would be dead, Jarod would leave forever...
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedWie immer nett, mal einen Einblick in Parker`s jugend zu haben. Bin gespannt wie es weitergeht!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedSuper! Ich hab ganz ehrlich schon lange nicht mehr etwas so gutes gelesen!! Vll sollte ich echt auch mal wieder an meiner FF weiterschreiben =)
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedGefällt mir wirklich. Mal was anderes Lyle so "lieb" zu sehn, könnt ich mich dran gewöhnen. LOL Bin schon gespannt, was noch kommt!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedGroßes Lob! Die story ist Klasse und das ganze Drum-Herum passt perfekt! Und alle sind so lieb zueinander :)
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedNach dieser vollen Dosis muss ich echt sagen - Klasse!! Echt super, wie du Ashley beschrieben geschrieben hast - die Kleine ist ganz schön gerissen =) ! Auch die ganze Story mit Baby Parker, Ethan und vorallem dem viel zu gutmütigen Lyle ist super, mach weiter so! Mach weiter so!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedGroßartig! Bin schon richtig gespannt, wer der Blonde ist! Miss Parker als Mom hast du echt süß beschreiben =)
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedOh mein Gott, das ist wirklich so traurig! Aber genau so würde ich mir Jarod in dieser Situation vorstellen.
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedAh, I think it`s Miss Parker maybe Broots. But it can be also Sydney!! :) Fit`s perfectly to all Centre employees LOL
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedSehr schön geschrieben! Auch wenn es traurig ist =)
Reviewer: Little Angel Signedahh - man kann so richtig die Traurigkeit und die Trauer raushören! Gut gemacht!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedKrass!! Ich bin echt völlig weggetreten. Deine Art zu schreiben ist Klasse!!! Mach unbedingt weiter, ich brauch ne Fortsetzung! Grüße, LA
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedAh! It's more beautiful in english! Good job!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedSchön! Damit hat er bestimmt ein Stück ihres Vertrauens gewonnen. Aber es ist da zu Ende - oder schreibst du noch weiter?
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedVery beautiful and so cute!!
Reviewer: Little Angel SignedJust wow! Really great point of few!
Tough I don't like too see it as an affair, between Catherine and Raines
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Well, the affair was one plausible solution to the problematic parentage of Miss Parker and Lyle. Actually the simple idea of an affair between the evil Raines and the angelic Catherine is so repulsive that I'm probably the only one who dared write such an horror. LOL!!! SHAME ON ME !!! No girl in her right mind would bed with the freak. But in a certain way this is not that irrealistic : why would Catherine have trusted Raines to save Ethan, if it wasn't for some previous intimacy between them ??? She could have asked Sydney given his personnality he wouldn't have refused to help her. And at the time the affair might have taken place, Raines was at his best without his oxegen tank and his wheezziinng breath. "gotcha grin" ( :
Sorry, I have to respond =)
You're probably right, I can't think of anyone who would dare to write about an affair between catherine and raines!
But don't you think she trustet him because of something else?? I don't know why she trusted him - he hit her! - but it wasn't love, I'm sure. Don't know why she didn't ask syd for help. Maybe then she'd be still alive... *sobs*
Author's Response: Well, intimacy doesn't always mean that love is involved. Anyway Catherine is dead, I sometime wonder if the inner voices a
Author's Response: re useful, their warnings seem quite difficult to understand. If she had someone to fear it definitely was Raines and the voices didn't do their job. But Miss Parker is still very alive, and I'm sure that she would love to kick Raines ass. And to tell you the truth so would I.
I loved the first part, about parker being shoot and how she died in jarods arms. Really beautifully written!! But I'm not sure what to think about the second part. Maybe it's just that I can't imagine what jarod would do...I don't know. But as I said, I like it though =)
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