Penname: RaChell [Contact]

Real name: wouldn't you like to know!

Member Since: 08/05/05

Membership status: Administrator

Bio:

The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.

Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.

Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.

 

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Unglamorous by Nyias
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Unglamorous.

Categories: Anything/Miscellaneous
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #04 Anything

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 112
Read Count: 2185
[Report This] Published: 20/05/05 Updated: 20/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Unglamorous

LOL!  So Jarod, so funny and well done!  Loved it!

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/07
Fly On the Wall by Wandering Spirit
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Someone knows all the secrets and has been watching all along...

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 596
Read Count: 1795
[Report This] Published: 20/05/05 Updated: 20/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Fly On the Wall

OhMyGawd!  This is great!  I agree with Kris, this is a delightful story and you should have had tons of glowing reviews!  I love it, it's so funny and twisted and it was quite a surprise to find out who was 'talking'. (laughing) 

Excuse me now, my sides hurts from laughter and I'm in pain from giggling so much.  I need a tylenol or two, thank you!  :)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/05/07
Ocularis by Sezzie
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: It was something akin to drowning.

Categories: Miss Parker's Eyes
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #18 Miss Parker's Eyes

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 101
Read Count: 2335
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Wow!  I really like this!  Intense and so few words.  You should have tons of glowing reviews for this one!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/07
Scar-ology by Sezzie
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: The many scars of Mr Lyle...

Categories: Tattoo
Characters: Lyle
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #19 Tattoo

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 114
Read Count: 1689
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Really intense and yet so few words!  Nicely done and very gripping.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Silent Faith by Sezzie
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Do you trust me?

Categories: Trust
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #05 Trust

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 104
Read Count: 1908
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Nice little slice of excitement!  You can almost feel the tension and adrenaline rush.  Nice job.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Upon Further Revision by Sezzie
Rated: G starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Missing Scene - Bloodlines.

Categories: Missing Scenes
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Drama, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #36 Missing Scenes

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 229
Read Count: 1829
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Not sure I completely understand this but interesting none the less.  

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/07
Sold by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: I wondered why Major Charles and Margaret never heard Jarod cry out and knock over his lunch box. This is why.





Categories: Prequel
Characters: Jarod's Family
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 631
Read Count: 1513
[Report This] Published: 22/05/05 Updated: 22/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Sold

Excellant!  Very good!  I never would have thought of this. 

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/07
After Hours by chopsticks
Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Broots overhears something after hours that he shouldn't, and winds up in a predicament he could never imagine!

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Broots, Lyle, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 996
Read Count: 2755
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: After Hours

Cute!  you can almost see Broots shaking and turning a pale shade of white.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Monday Morning Oasis by Deb Patrickphile
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Syd finds a little something that makes his day more bearable.



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 540
Read Count: 2330
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Monday Morning Oasis

Deb!  I had no idea you wrote fan fic!  What a delight to find your stories after all this time.  You really did a great job and you kept everything and everyone in perfect character.  You should have written more and you should have let people know!  :)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Ode to the Centre by Deb Patrickphile
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A little ditty written in November 2000. Rated PG for use of one word only, but then I'm tougher than most on ratings

Categories: Poetry
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 696
Read Count: 2193
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Ode to the Centre

WOW!  This is great!  I love it and you did a great job forsomeone who hates to write!  You missed your calling indeed!  :)  I'd give a extra ten smiles if I could.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Alone by Deb Patrickphile
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A very short ditty dealing with Syd's feelings and thoughts after losing Michelle.



Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 257
Read Count: 2082
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Alone

Deb, this is so sweet and perfect!  How nice to find it.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
The Dream by Becci B
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A nice little simple Halloween fantasy

Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1196
Read Count: 738
[Report This] Published: 25/05/05 Updated: 25/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Dream

What a delight to re-read it after all this time!  So glad your story is here.  Nicely done BecciB! :)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Illusions by Becci B
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A lonely night alone leads to passion . . . or does it?



Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Vignette
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2291
Read Count: 1242
[Report This] Published: 25/05/05 Updated: 25/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Illusions

What a joy to read!  Loved it!

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
A Buffet to Remember by A Price
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The Hard, Fast, Short, and Sweet

Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 487
Read Count: 2958
[Report This] Published: 26/05/05 Updated: 26/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Buffet to Remember

Oh I remember this one!  :) (blush)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Sand In My Shoes by Leni Ba
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Freedom in its purest form.

Categories: Song Titles
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #02 Song Titles

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 198
Read Count: 2058
[Report This] Published: 26/05/05 Updated: 26/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Loved it!  Nicely done and very cute. You can almost see the grin on jarod's face and hear the waves.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Dream by Mandy
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: None given.

Categories: Jarod/Zoe or Miss Parker/Thomas
Characters: Jarod, Zoe
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #10 T/MP or J/Z Pairings

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 117
Read Count: 2296
[Report This] Published: 26/05/05 Updated: 26/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Very nice!  I really enjoyed this.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/07
I Asked The Moon by Eligyah
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: None given.

Categories: Song Titles
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #02 Song Titles

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 141
Read Count: 2151
[Report This] Published: 27/05/05 Updated: 27/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Very tender yet also sad.  Makes you really think.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/07
Thoughts by Eligyah
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: None given.

Categories: Hope
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #03 Hope

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 143
Read Count: 1911
[Report This] Published: 27/05/05 Updated: 27/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Interesting point of view of this episode.  nicely done.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Your dream by Chris
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Just my thoughts about their love.

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 145
Read Count: 1505
[Report This] Published: 27/05/05 Updated: 27/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Nicely done and in so few words.  very sweet and tender.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Does Familiarity Breed Contempt? by KB
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: When Miss Parker is injured, she and Sydney seek help from a somewhat unwilling source

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Other Centre Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1474
Read Count: 2718
[Report This] Published: 28/05/05 Updated: 28/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Does Familiarity Breed Contempt?

Nicely done and Interesting.  the only problem with the story is that it feels un-finished.  

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/04/07
Announcing the engagement ofr30; by Rising Sun
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Parker and Jarod are engaged?

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 674
Read Count: 2376
[Report This] Published: 28/05/05 Updated: 28/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Announcing the engagement of…

Very sweet and cute.  Nice concept and very enjoyble.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/08/07
Challenges by Rising Sun
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Jarod must play a game of poker to gain freedom.



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 743
Read Count: 1931
[Report This] Published: 28/05/05 Updated: 28/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Challenges

LMAO!  This one is a real jewel.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/08/07
Pretender Payback Part 10 by Danielle SmileyFace
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: If you've ever wondered how The Pretender characters would react to fanfic writers and the situations we put them in, this is the series for you! This unique round robin series (written by many different authors) started on PretendFic by Katherine Bruce (though she had no idea she was starting anything!). Then Danielle : - ) was greatly inspired and wrote a little sequel, and the rest quickly started to come into focus.

Categories: Pretenderpayback
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 387
Read Count: 2501
[Report This] Published: 28/05/05 Updated: 28/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: New Light Story

Cute!  But then you always were a good writer who came up with the most unusal things.  BTW did you ever get that square ring? 

Author's Response: Now that I'm back into my account, I can respond properly (not sure if you get a notification that an author responded to your comments?)...  Haha, thanks, RaChell.  Yes, I did get the square ring while my sister was up in VT at college, and I loved it dearly.  Then a few years later, I threw a piece of gum out the car window once, and the ring went out, and I wasn't able to find it.  Jarod hasn't returned mine to me yet.  But I haven't littered since!

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Crusing Hollywood by gbarton
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod and Miss Parker are cursing Hollywood and get lost.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 626
Read Count: 1613
[Report This] Published: 30/05/05 Updated: 30/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

Wonder where this idea came from?  ;)

Author's Response: I don't know. ;) You tell me.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/07
A Night of Fun and Games by gbarton
Rated: NC 18 starstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Miss Parker is a little late on Jarod's pretend but they have fun anyway.

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 642
Read Count: 2101
[Report This] Published: 30/05/05 Updated: 30/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

MP.jpgWhat can I say?  Great as always Gena!  Oh and I suppose you think you deserve a ten for this one too!  ;)


Author's Response: Of course. ;)

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/07