Hi
jacci [AT] pretendercentre [DOT] com
Pretender Jarod's a prisoner of The Triumvirate. This is the sequel to Conflict Zero.
Tell those beta's of yours to hurry up. I want next chappie
:d
Jarod is captured and returned to the Centre. Part of the Guess Who/Guess What Challenge
mnnn, he lets himself get caught so easily. There must be a plan here which hopefully will see the demise of wheezy and a few others.
Author's Response: all some come clear in due time! Thanks for the reviews Jacs!
It is getting very good now indeed, can't hardly wait for the next one. Hurry hurry!!!!
Author's Response:
While you are waiting for the next chapter to be returned from the uber fab trio of beta's *cough*,may i suggest a crossword to keep you occupied? Wouldn't want anyone to start shooting heads because of the induced insanity? That would be no good.. almost like living in a canon. I'm sure even your metal brain filled with the woes of maths students everywhere can handle the left brained requirements of the crosswords.
Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Wow, wow wow!!!! I just love how you took my humble story and invested it with such flair. Kudos!!!
I am also deeply honoured beyond my ability to express here, and touched, for reach the stars you did indeed.
So poignant and sad for poor Zoe, but how else could it possibly end for them? Surely there could never be any real hope for them?
Nicely done and I am just so tickled at your tribute :D
Author's Response: Thanks Jacs! That means a lot, esp. knowing you aren't a 'shipper. But your story was truly a inspiration and this is the result. I look forward to your next chapter. Maybe it will inspire me to continue with this story. :)
Ohh that was just so cool. Poke Manoline for sure into a sequel, it is a definite must see.
Author's Response: Thanks Jacs! See what you have inspired? I have to give Manoline a lot of credit for putting up with me bouncing ideas off of her. And yes now she needs to do the sequel!
I read this one a long time ago, can't remember where i found it originally, but i do remember i liked it very much. So glad you found your way here to Missing Pieces and it reads just as good the second time around.
Reviewer: jaccione SignedI just LOVE what you have done with this. It is completely awesome and the potential is now unlimited.... yay you
Author's Response:
Ohhh lookie at all the fun toys here!! This is soo cools! Okay I am babbling...I am sooo happy to have kudos from a real Pretender Super Fan, wow that's sweet!
PS I couldn't resist the urge to keep Sleepyhead Alive!
PS x's 2 - Who's next?
Reviewer: jaccione SignedOhh sniffers.
Perfectly done, I could actaully hear their voices and almost picture it. Wondered what episode they cut that scene
from?
I just love what you have done with my Sleepyhead. This was a fantastic chapter indeed. And fitted so perfectly in. Just brilliant.
Reviewer: jaccione SignedNice indeed, fallen and perhaps with broken wings too.
Author's Response: yeah, definitely with broken wings
Wow, you managed to do something good with that damn scrolls. Yay you!
Author's Response: yay me then :)\r\nglad you like it. somehow thought I had to make something with that. glad it worked out
Hard to imagine them playing chess, or are they the pawns?
Author's Response: methaphorically speaking, jacs ;)
See Manoline's comments, agree 100%.
Was great
;d
Author's Response: Thanks Jacs! It was fun. :) And I laughed every time I pictured Broots.
Oh that was so sad and so nice at the same time.
Author's Response:
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Hi Jacci!
Thank you so much.
Anna
Reviewer: jacci SignedI am very sorry to hear of the sad loss of Steve, our thoughts are with his family in this very sad time.
Jacci
Reviewer: jaccione SignedIt is looking more and more like a case of mistaken identity now. Apparently there is a Steve Pantovich that is still very alive and well and active in a number of websites and I have been contacted to be informed of this. This Steve is an only child, and spells his name with a h at the end rather than without.
It is still a sad loss for the Pantovic family and our thoughts are with them
Reviewer: jaccione SignedThis was an awesome continuation of the Sleepyhead saga!!! I loved it.
Reviewer: jacci Signed
Where is the rest of it??????
That was most excellent
Wow Jacs! I'm flattered by your comment "excellent". (blush) But the rest??? Who said there was going to be more! I'm doing good just to link the damn stories! (laughing) Yes, I know you created a monster by telling me how to include pictures. Ha Ha.
Oh a most intriuging start indeed!!!!!!
Author's Response: YAY! I got you to read and review one of my stories. I should use Sydney in the summary more often. *grins*
Thanks for reading and reviewing... more will be coming shortly.
Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Oh that was most intriguing. What i liked most was how 'in episode' it was. Have to rush to work now but when i get hom e will be checking out next chappie.
Reviewer: jacci SignedPoor Jarod, I fear for him and Rainses isn't going to listen to Sydney's posturing. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: jacci SignedOh how bold was that escape!!! So improbable that it probably had a really good chance of working. Glad to see Sydney has finally done the decent thing.
Reviewer: jacci SignedYay you, that is great Sarah, I loved it. Fantastic job!!
Author's Response: That is a grand compliment coming from the SL-Queen, the starter of all of this. Thanks Jacci :)
I liked this very much. It easily could have been a dream Jarod was haunted by and i like the kind of 'reverse hood' effect. I wonder if the black sack was made from silk.
Author's Response:
Thanks Jacci! And thanks for all your help getting it posted.
The sack should have been made from silk. That's how I pictured it, but I forgot to actually mention that. I need an editor!
Reviewer: jacci Signed