I really loved your story! The description of MP and Jarod's feelings was great and detailed, I loved the way you made them think...

Thanks! 

This one was very nice, I loved the first chapters with Miss Parker's phone calls, they were sooo funny! And the happy ending is lovely and sweet, even if without a kiss. It's full of hope for the future. Nice job!

This was pretty nice, so sweet. I loved it ;)

thanks for sharing!

I loved this! The first part at Ocee's is amazing, it looked like an AU fan fiction, I didn't understand it was a dream at once. And I also love Sydney's thoughts and his conversation with J. Lovely...

I think we all wish he would have done exactly what you tell us in this fic...

I read this fic twice, and I must admit it's a bit shocking ;) This Jarod is way over the edge, even if he succeeds in winning Parker's heart. I agree with the fact that him making love to another woman is a bit too much, but of course he has to move on with his 'tests'. Anyway, this story is original and different, I loved to read it! Thanks.

A Very nice one to be read. I loved the part with Jarod injured and Parker at his side, that was touching! Thanks!

I hadn't read this one yet, because I'm not very fond of stories where Jarod and Parker have dozens of children, so I was a bit diffident. Then I came across chapter "Connections" and I read its final lines. It was amazing, so I decided to read the whole story and it was totally worth it. Your Jarod is always so sweet and full of regrets, while you always picture a very compassionate Miss Parker.
The thing I like the most in your stories is the way you describe the children and their bond with Jarod and Parker (I'm thinking about Charlie in Stumbling toward Nirvana or Teddy in Veil of Contentment).
With four of them here, it was a hard time for you, but I love the differences in their behaviour. JR is my fave and the scene with J dancing with Catherine really broke my heart, I was actually crying!
And even if in this story you didn't give so much space to Parker and Jarod's relationship, it was lovely to see her signs of affection for him. Like when they held each other.
You're always the best, Phenyx. Thanks for writing such beautiful fan fictions.

Ok so I came to this one almost by chance, and I found it AMAZING! It's the first time I read a non-centre story that I love so much. Parker and Jarod feelings were so real, and she was very sweet indeed! 

I love almost every line, even if the part I enjoyed the most was the one J and Parker spent driving alone, while reaching Blue Cove...The shopping part was lovely, and also Jarod behaving as a child, not knowing how gorgeous he is ;)

So thank you, you deserved a ten cause this fic is great!!!

With a nod, Jarod answered. "Parker is the only constant in my life that I have ever been completely sure of."

I liked this story, it reminds me a bit of "Next", the movie with N. Cage. The concept was beautiful, even if the scene with Jarod getting crazy was really hard to read and accept. Poor Jarod! Anyway the last chapter is very very sweet and beautiful, the tub scene, the picnic and the ice cream. Lovely!

I don't know how I could have possibly missed this one. AMAZING! Ahah the first part with the wedding is really funny and I loved the way you describe their feelings, as usual. I've always hated zoe and this fic is really appreciated. Just a silly girl like her would leave Jarod the day of their wedding, Ahah!

Thanks a lot!

It's the second time I read this fic and I must admit Chapter 9 is really difficult to "digest". Anyway, this is a nice story. It's different, special. Mercedes is a weird character: at times you love her, at times you want to kill her. But I love the fact she makes Parker open and realize that she loves J. And don't worry about the ending: Jarod told us once: "sometimes the destination isn't as important as the journey!"

I love these parts:

***

Parker glanced away guiltily. “Some things just aren’t for sharing,” she whispered.

***

“I didn’t know,” Mercedes admitted. “It wasn’t until I told him that you were gone, and saw the resulting look on his face, that I realized it was over between us. Hell,” she added with a shrug. “It never really started.”

***

“It’s been a difficult situation,” Mercedes admitted. With a smile she added, “But then, things have never been easy for the two of you.”
“There’s the understatement of the century,” Parker smirked.

I read this story a couple of times and I still like it. Parker might seem a bit cold and detached, but that's just what appears on the surface... I like the fact that in the end you made them become "a couple", and I love both Ethan and Broots' advices to Jarod.

Here are the lines I loved the most:

*** FUNNY

“Oh no,” Jarod said. “Not at all.” The pretender glanced up at Sydney, a sly grin spreading across his face. “Well...” he continued. “She does bother me in a way. But it is not the way that you think.”
Sydney smiled. “You find the sexual attraction to be distracting.”
Jarod’s head nearly spun around in shock. Wide brown eyes stared up at Sydney in a wonder that bordered on fear. “You know about that?” he cried.
The psychiatrist did his best not to laugh out loud. “Anyone who has ever been in the same room with the two of you knows about it.”

*** VEERY SWEET

“It’s cold out here, Parker,” Jarod scolded. “Go back inside where it is warm.” Casually leaning forward, Jarod kissed her as he pulled the fluffy edges of her robe more snugly around her. The aura that Ethan could see around his sister suddenly brightened to a blinding intensity and wavered outward until it encompassed the man holding her.

*** LOVELY

One did not need to be an empath to see what thoughts were running through Jarod’s head. Ethan knew that his brother was remembering the hundreds of moments that had occurred between him and Miss Parker in the last eight months. Moments when she had saved for him the last slice of dessert or slept on a miniscule corner of mattress so that he could have more than his share of the bed. How many times had Ethan seen Miss Parker leave the last three bites of food on her plate, only to nonchalantly pass them to Jarod? How often had she perched on the corner of the couch to watch some senseless film for the hundredth time, while Jarod sat contentedly on the floor with his back propped against her legs? This had not been the first time Parker had risen early to see Jarod off on some new adventure. Ethan knew that it would not be the last.

I went through this yesterday night till very late. I loved it, there were many lovely conversations between J an MP, and I liked the fact she surrendered in the end. And Te fact she's worried for her age is very real. I read a few fanfic where she had one or two children but maybe we don't remember that she's already 40-42 at the end of the IOTH!  ;) Thanks, nice work!