JMP shipper.
My first Pretender Fanfic ever is Her Secret.
What readers won't have to worry about is if a fic I have started will be completed. They always will be. I don't start posting anything unless the story is done and is going through a beta. So more than likely my fics will be short probably no more than 10 chapters and will probably not involve Centre lore.
"Trolls are just vile creatures with delusions of adequacy far above reality." - a quote from a good friend
"Trolls think they are Something, and don't get that the rest of us think they are Something Pretty Sad" - a quote from another good friend
PretenderPart two of The Return series.
Damn Mirage, I love your writing style I really do. It draws the reader in even if they don't want to be.
More please, because we know you have more to write and say!
Thank you, KSPretenderFan for reading and the lovely review- it's much appreciated. I haven't forgotten your stories, by the way; I'll be reading soon.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedAaaach! Cliffhanger! What's she going to give him? What? Holy Mackarel, you sucked me into your story again!
More! Please! More!
Cliffhanger she says, after the ones she writes? Evil. Thanks for reading and reviewing, KSPretenderFan. You'll find out, you will. More is on the way. Thanks again.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedEverything you ever wanted to know about Jarod's allergy to pistachios. When he found out and how. And why Miss Parker is aware of it.
This was a great read! Thanks so much for sharing.
Thanks KS! I'm still waiting for othe reviews on Mind Rain 😉
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedHehe, I have to do some catch up. It's so long, haven't gotten back to it. Need to stop twittering, tweeting, whatever. It takes too much time!! =)
You're so right!!
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A crime scene, a chance meeting, two people transcending the lives chosen for them. Jarod POV. S.M.U.T.
*sigh* Damn Mirage! I mean DAMN! Awesome, wonderful, more! Who would notice typos amidst all that heat? Well done!
Hi and thanks, KSPretenderFan. Someone did notice a typo heat or no heat, darn it and now I have to correct it. I'm glad you took the time to read and review. I know you're busy with your own fics and I will be reading your update soon. Thanks again!
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedJarod locates Angelo's family. But they have secrets of their own. *AND DONE*
Off to a good start MarieL. I'd like to see where this goes. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedSo much information, so interesting. Please continue. I'm intrigued. Thank you for the update!
Thanks for reading, stay tuned for more!
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Wow! I mean whoa nelly! That was quite awesome! "Xander. What the hell kind of name is that anyway." Hehe, reminds me of Pretty in Pink. "Blaine? That's not a name, that's an appliance!"
Loved this update. You gave us a lot, but still held back! Update soon please! It was a rockin' kick-a$$ chapter!
Thank you for reading and reviewing, KS. That old OMD tune is playing in my mind now. The Duckster! That boy had outstanding taste in music and couldn't quite contain himself (but hey, it was Otis Redding!). He was broody and stalker-ish, and extremely intense, and oddly Roland Orzabal-esque *wonders if he lip syncs Tears for Fears' tunes*; his taste in music however more than compensated for his quirks/hair. :)
I'm glad you liked the update and will try to add more soon and perhaps Jarod will take Mr. Redding's advice and try a little tenderness. Maybe. Thanks again.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedOMG Mirage, you are brilliant! You can blame your muse, but I blame you for being brilliant and an kick-a$$ writer. The muse can give you ideas, but you put those down on paper! I love that you showed that MP chose her own path to forge within the Centre. That, though not altogether completely altruistic, it was the lesser of two evils.
I loved the "code" of abused little girls. That MP saw Nia as an innocent and thus gave her a pass. Right-on!
More please.
I am not brilliant. I certainly don't feel brilliant, KS. But you are brilliant and just so incredibly kind with your reviews. I'm so happy that you are still reading. More is in the works. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
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Thanks so much for the update! "Mama bear has awakened." Indeed she has! Can't wait for the next installment! Soon, hopefully, if your muse cooperates!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, KSPretenderFan. The next installment is in the works. Thanks for your patience. :)
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedJarod wakes up in another world... OUR world...
Entertaining read! Thanks for sharing. Congrats Onisius on the book cover!
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedShe's blaming the drinks...
This was wonderfully written. I'm echoing what Kate Parker said that it was "beautiful in it's simplicity." Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedThree Centre children. One wants freedom, another one wants a life and the last one wants power. In the end, it's up to them to reach their goals.
I'm with Nath. I am intrigued and didn't notice poor grammar whatsoever. Please continue.
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In 1996 a television series known as The Pretender splashed onto the scene as NBC’s highest testing series concept since Bonanza. For some 12 years since its premature cancellation, legions of worldwide fans have patiently awaited for its return.
Now, in the form of a fully original, mystery thriller novel, The Pretender - Rebirth marks the exciting return of Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney and the nefarious, clandestine activities of The Centre.
In 1996 a television series known as The Pretender splashed onto the scene as NBC’s highest testing series concept since Bonanza. For some 12 years since its premature cancellation, legions of worldwide fans have patiently awaited for its return.
Now, in the form of a fully original, mystery thriller novel, The Pretender - Rebirth marks the exciting return of Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney and the nefarious, clandestine activities of The Centre.
Steve and Craig, that first look into Rebirth was both intriguing and exciting. I certainly can't wait for the book to come out. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedThe Tower had a Plan B when Jarod escaped, but seven years after being stolen from her family, Elizabeth finds herself at a turning point. Can a new friend show her a way out of the Centre's grasp?
Chapter Three: In which our young genius goes sneaking about, resulting in quite a knock out punch.
Awesome update! More please, this was awesome.
Your wish is my command- enjoy!
And thank you thank you for the review!
Your wish is my command- enjoy!
And thank you thank you for the review!
Your wish is my command- enjoy!
And thank you thank you for the review!
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedWhen you care enough to send the very best
I'll keep you company in renewal because I loved it. Short and to the point! Thank you Mirage!
Sounds great. I'll ask Angelo to smuggle in booze from Parker's office and we'll party like it's 1999 (again). On a more serious note: thank you for reading and reviewing, KSPretenderFan.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedIt's the first Christmas without her father and Miss Parker is relunctant to celebrate...until Jarod brings the holiday spirit to her.
Awww! That was sweet. Thanks for sharing!
Hi there! It's been a while! Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it! I fixed the word count today because I just now realized I went over and went into a panic, LOL.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedJarod summons Miss Parker and Sydney to Debbie’s school Christmas show.
Now that was a sweet little fic. Glad you shared. It had the right amount of humor and sweetness.
Thanks for sharing!
Thank you so much, KS, TpSoulSister :)
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A little bed time story for the twins
Nicely done Airsay! Thanks for sharing this Christmas story.
Thank you for reading et reviewing ! Happy holidays :)
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedMiss Parker has a Christmas party. Some guests are invited. Others turn up unannounced.
Well done Christian! Well written and I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks, KS. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. If you have any pointers on how I could improve my writing, I'd be open to hearing them. :)
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedTen years after Carthis, MP & J live in hiding with their family. The Centre still exists, but Lyle is no longer threatening their freedom. But one day a silent enemy coming from their past suddenly appears. Parker and Jarod are forced to remember what happened ten years before, when everything changed…
Last update: January '23 - Chapter 34
Interesting start. Can't wait to read more.
Thanks sweetie, can't wait to update it. Soon, I promise.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedI'm enjoying it! Can't wait for more. Please!
Ah Ah, thanks. And I'm going to add something new very soon, hopefully next week! :) Maybe before.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedDefinitely, Sydner was more a father to MP than "Daddy" ever was. Nice update, of course, it left me wanting more. Great Job!
You ask, you're served. :) Enjoy the new chapter!
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedWow! Nice update. But, Oh No! Damn Lyle! He killed Ethan!
And it's not over yet. Stay tuned. More updates soon. I promise ;)
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan SignedLoved this chapter. The heart to heart between MP & J. Finally talking to each other and not as adversaries. I especially loved the part about Argyle running a casino called The Vatican. Classic!
Your smut was classy smut, not trashy smut. It was absolutely fine.
You know I love Argyle, I think he really is Jarod's best friend. I'm sure he totally trusts him, even to ask help for saving the lives of the people Jarod loves most.
And this heart-to-heart was really due. You know I'm a hopeless shipper, it was only a matter of time.
And I'm thankful for you comment about the smut part. That's not my strongest quality in writing, you know... =) Couldn't get much over that ;)
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