Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2641
Read Count: 2227
Penname: RaChell [Contact]
Real name: wouldn't you like to know!
Real name: wouldn't you like to know!
Member Since: 08/05/05
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.
Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.
Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.
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Summary: Miss Parker enjoys a Centre Halloween Party
Categories: Miss Parker
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2641
Read Count: 2227
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2641
Read Count: 2227
[Report This] Published: 17/08/06 Updated: 18/08/06
Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue
Date: 05/05/07
How in the Hell did I miss this story???? WOW Oh WOW! Love it! (of course you know I would!)
So when will we be blessed with another yummy fan fic?
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 05/05/07
Summary: Jarod's locked up in a cell, and everyone knows how that ends up. Everyone except Jarod, apparently. Parody.
Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Jarod, Lyle
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: Warning: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 356
Read Count: 2484
Characters: Jarod, Lyle
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: Warning: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 356
Read Count: 2484
[Report This] Published: 28/08/06 Updated: 28/08/06
Title: Chapter 1: Jarod/Lyle parody
Date: 09/01/07
Blade! You are so damn naughty! LOL!
Date: 09/01/07
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73989
Read Count: 120176
What price will someone pay for what they want?
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73989
Read Count: 120176
[Report This] Published: 04/09/06 Updated: 04/10/14
Title: Chapter 2: Stopping Lyle's Fun
Date: 28/01/07
Nice! Very nice! Now stop teasing us and get the rest up. I'm beginning to feel as impatient as Miss Parker. Does the word "Now!" mean anything to you? ;)
Author's Response: Ummm, let me think. One syllable, rhymes with bow and conveys the sense of urgency???? Am I close???
More will be coming soon I promise.
And for the record NOBODY is ever as impatient as Miss Parker I don't think.
Date: 28/01/07
Summary: Miss Parker catches up to Jarod and introduces him to something new. Last chapter is up, enjoy. smiles
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5591
Read Count: 7378
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5591
Read Count: 7378
[Report This] Published: 14/09/06 Updated: 14/09/06
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 26/01/07
Loved this! Quite a twist on their relationship and I have to say you tied your sequel in perfectly with it. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am so glad you enjoyed it. I didnt realise i had a review, so sorry for taking so long to respond.
Date: 26/01/07
Summary: Jarod's first time at surfing. Just a short, one chap fic. Hope you enjoy. Please R&R.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1567
Read Count: 1746
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1567
Read Count: 1746
[Report This] Published: 14/09/06 Updated: 14/09/06
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 01/06/07
Nice story, great to see Jarod in a more humanized form rather the perfect pretender most people paint him as. It seems I've read this before and left a review. Or am I just delisuional?
Author's Response: thanks for the nice review RaChell, I did like making things harder for Jarod and not have him look, frown, and go, yep, i can do this first go. And you might have, this was in response to a challenge and is also posted on FFNet. thanks again
Date: 01/06/07
Summary: Jarod is back in the Centre... what will the repercussions be
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 30218
Read Count: 55982
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 30218
Read Count: 55982
[Report This] Published: 14/09/06 Updated: 22/02/08
Title: Chapter 2: Not So Good Morning
Date: 29/10/07
Yeah, yeah ...so there are 18 chapters to this story hidden some place else and all we get is two to tease us with???? Shame on you!
Author's Response: I'm sorry RaChell lol, I have been away from home almsot constantly latley, so haven't posted. But to keep you girls happy, I will trot off and post another chap
Date: 29/10/07
Title: Chapter 3: Shopping Trip
Date: 06/11/07
Very nice and very sweet. Does this mean the ice queen's heart is melting just a little? Oh well, thanks for the token tidbit. You know we love it and you're mean to tease us. How much longer do we have to wait for more?
Author's Response: thanks Rachell, this is actually the quickest i ever posted a story so im not teasing at all lol next one will be here in day or two.
Date: 06/11/07
Title: Chapter 1: A sight made for the gods alone
Date: 09/12/07
Nicely done! Can't wait for chapter 3. But wait a minute! Where do you get the idea that families are perfect and love each other un-conditionally? (shaking head) What world have you been living in? My family is almost like Miss Parker's, my father could have given old man Parker a run for the title of worst father of the year!
Author's Response: thanks RaChell, chap 3 and 4 are posted chap 5 will be done very shortly, so look out for it lol. i dont know where i possibly came up with the idea families are all nice and lovey dovey lol but obviosuly i did. glad you are liking it!
Sorry Onisius, but my mistake! I meant the review for your Falling Snowflake story, not this one! Oh well, that's what I get for trying to catch up on several weeks worth of TP FF in one sitting! Sorry about that! RaChell
Author's Response: Thats ok RaChell, was thinking it didnt make much sense anyway lmao
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 09/12/07
Title: Chapter 1: A sight made for the gods alone
Date: 11/12/07
OK, now the reveiw for this one! I have finally caught on chapters 4 and 5. Nicely done, intense and not how I expected. Looking forward to see what twists and turns you have hidden up your sleeve for chapter 6.
Author's Response: Thanks RaChell, I am glad you are liking it so far. I will get to posting Chap 6 in a day or two
Date: 11/12/07
Title: Chapter 6: Even with all my talents
Date: 27/01/08
WOW! Now that's what I call intense! Lots of emotion, lots of drama and ... well what can I say that the others haven't!
Author's Response: lol, thanks RaChell, with any luck i will be posting another chap tonight for you guys. Glad you liked it so much and hope oyu liek the following chaps.
Date: 27/01/08
Summary: Miss Parker is in trouble and the person she least expected will come to her aid.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 33207
Read Count: 26718
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 33207
Read Count: 26718
[Report This] Published: 14/09/06 Updated: 05/03/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 05/01/07
Very, very nice! A real on-the-edge-of-your-seat, nail biting fic. Good job. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 05/01/07
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Date: 28/01/07
Absolutely great Gemini-M! It's so edge of your seat captivating and I can't wait for more. Do whatever it takes, but get your next chapter out ASAP!
I'd give you a rating of more stars then 10 stars but since that's the highest Missing Pieces goes, you'll have to settle for that.
Editted to add: This story is one of those that stays with you long after you have finished reading it. Love those kind of stories! :)
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell,
Sorry if you receive this reply twice, I pressed the wrong key accidently.
Thank you for your very kinds words and review. Reviews are very inspiring to a writer. At the moment I'm working hard on the final chapter, but this one might take me a little while. The last meeting between J and MP will take some work to reach the right ending to this little tale. Well, I hope that you like the conclusion to my story. Thanks again.
Mercy
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 28/01/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 09/03/07
NOOO! You can't just end it! You can't just leave us hanging on to the edge of our seats now thatyou have Jarod and Miss Parker working together. I can't beleive I come home to find another chapter and you do this?
Other then that, I loved it, well done and so breath taking and gripping. I was almost afraid she wouldn't catch up with Jarod.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 09/03/07
Summary: Poem
Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 152
Read Count: 2584
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 152
Read Count: 2584
[Report This] Published: 15/09/06 Updated: 15/09/06
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 02/06/07
Interesting twist. Are you referring to Miss Parker in the poem?
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 02/06/07
Summary: Companion piece to Once
Categories: Poetry
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 92
Read Count: 2051
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 92
Read Count: 2051
[Report This] Published: 24/09/06 Updated: 24/09/06
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 24/09/06
Nice use of the word Once. So many possiblities squeezed into such a short story.
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much. Not used to writing with such brevity, so this is quite the departure for me. Nice to know somebody liked it :D
Date: 24/09/06
Summary: This is totally MPJR!! With a lot of smut in it to make it that much more intense! Hope you Like! Read and Review!
Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 69698
Read Count: 48947
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 69698
Read Count: 48947
[Report This] Published: 07/10/06 Updated: 05/08/08
Title: Chapter 3: Climax
Date: 29/01/07
Nice! Really enjoyed it. The only problem I have (and this is not just you so please don't feel offended)is giving Miss Parker a first name. I'm sorry but that really kills the story for me.
I look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: I definately agree with you. I personally hate it myself......but especially in a story where you have to express intimacy a first name (a secret) is a very intimate instrument. I tried to write it without a first name and it just didn't do it for me. But I'm on your side on this one. The next chapter should be up in a 2 weeks. Just in time for valentines day;)
Date: 29/01/07
Title: Chapter 4: Missing Peices
Date: 05/02/07
Really why bother to go on? Sorry but I think you should just end it....NOT! If you stop now you'll have the entire community of MPJ 'shippers looking for you. And as you know, Pretender fan fic readers have Centre connections. ;)
Should you stop? What kind of stupid question is that! Of course we don't want you to stop. :) So get busy, we expect another chapter.
Author's Response: Why so demaninding!! Bu serves a good point. Ok lets see if I can put out another chapter soon.
Date: 05/02/07
Title: Chapter 5: One Little Moment: Happiness
Date: 11/02/07
Hot! This was so steamy it fogged up my computer screen. ;)
Author's Response: My work here is done!!
Date: 11/02/07
Summary: There comes a time when a turning point happens regardless of whether one chooses to or not.
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11440
Read Count: 8229
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11440
Read Count: 8229
[Report This] Published: 08/10/06 Updated: 14/08/07
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Date: 17/08/07
Re-read the whole thing again from the beginning and it's shaping up very nice! Don't make us wait too long for another chapter.
Date: 17/08/07
Summary: Sequel to "Bitch": Another phone call, one meeting and a big surprise ... it's going to be more romantic ... but for now: only slightly romantic.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Catherine Parker, Jarod, Jarod's Family, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4508
Read Count: 53695
Characters: Catherine Parker, Jarod, Jarod's Family, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4508
Read Count: 53695
[Report This] Published: 18/11/06 Updated: 01/01/07
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Date: 06/01/07
Interesting! I'll look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedDate: 06/01/07
Summary: We all wish for freedom, the question is how far are we willing to go to get it?
Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 198
Read Count: 3555
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 198
Read Count: 3555
[Report This] Published: 24/11/06 Updated: 24/11/06
Title: Chapter 1: A choice
Date: 16/03/07
So sad and yet so sweet. Nicely done even if it's so dark.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Yes, it is a tiny bit on the dark side, glad you liked it anyway.
Date: 16/03/07
Summary: It's Christmas and Miss Parker's neighbor is getting on her nervs. Then she gets a phone call from an old friend.
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2921
Read Count: 4614
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2921
Read Count: 4614
[Report This] Published: 25/12/06 Updated: 01/01/07
Title: Chapter 1: Silent night?
Author's Response:
Date: 25/12/06
Cute story! I can picture Miss Parker with a pair of wire cutters snipping away at the Christmas lights. :) And of course Jarod eating a artery clogging meal is a mental image that makes me laugh.
OK I must admit, I thought the neighbor was going to turn out to be Jarod. hint, hint: if you want to do a sequel. Hmmm, OK big hint! Do A Sequel!
BTW we must be thinking along the same lines. LOL! I just posted chapter one of my X-Mas fic.
Author's Response:
I might do a sequel. I have an idea but it\'s a little different from what you might be thinking.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 25/12/06
Summary: Corporate Takeover gets a new meaning. The Centre is under attack by a rival corporation. What does this mean for Jarod and the others?
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58081
Read Count: 115260
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58081
Read Count: 115260
[Report This] Published: 05/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07
Title: Conflict Zero
Date: 06/01/07
Nice writing, very well done and intense! Interesting and griping don't fully describe the drama. I have to stop at this chapter but will be back. I'm looking forward to seeing how you play this story line out.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so happy to hear you are enjoying the story so far. Enjoy the rest, you have a long way to go!! hehehe
Happy Reading!
Date: 06/01/07
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - A New Beginning
Date: 06/01/07
Captivating and yes I have to admit I couldn't stop reading once I sat back down after chapter 6. So where's the sequel?
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the rest - in one sitting too! Sequel is a WIP.. new WIP, but I will post ASAP. Thanks again for your feedback.
Date: 06/01/07
Summary: Jarod encounters the "Harry Potter" phenonemon - ie books, movies, lollies, lego sets, wands, trading card game... so much for him to get addicted to!
Categories: During The Series
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1452
Read Count: 1912
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1452
Read Count: 1912
[Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 07/01/07
Only one chapter? While I am not a Harry Potter fan, this is great and there is so much you can do with the theme! It would be a shame to stop here.
BTW....kudos on keeping Jarod in character. Nicely done and that is not a easy thing to do.
Date: 07/01/07