Characters: Jarod, Lyle
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #51 Former Challenges
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 154
Read Count: 2682
The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.
Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.
Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.
How did I miss this one before???? This is cute! Wait! it's beyond cute. I love the "avenge his sofa" That's a perfect touch.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedSo nice to re-read this after all these years! As fresh today as it was when it was written.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedThis one was always so sad and I'm glad to be able to read it again.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedA sweet, fun short story for Christmas time based on my own Christmas distasters.
This is so cute and such a delight. I normaly hate Miss Parker and Jarod as 'married with children' but this story is a exception. It's so well done and funny, you keep them in character and I howled with laughter several times while reading it. Great job!
always nice to read it again!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedOh this one was so sweet! Fresh as the day you first wrote it, a joy to read and so tender. Love the tiny insight to MP's connection with her mother.
Miss your writing AG.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedThis is one of my favorites. Angst well done!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedWow! really good! I can't wait to finish it. :)
Not bad for trying to give your Muse a wake up call. I enjoyed it. Nice break from all the angst I've read of late.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery well done! Your story is so suspenseful and full of intrigue. I like the way it flows, and you keep everything along moving nicely. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedNicely done. Quite a exciting ending and so appropriate.
So, what is your next project? Just because you've finished this one doesn't mean you should stop.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedGreat Broots! You have him true to character and very well done. Love the story, so cute and yet so sad. you can almost see Broots shake in chapter one and in chapter two you can see him almost melt.
The ending had a nice touch without being too sweet or overdone. Unusual and brillant overall.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedNice start! You need to finish it. As you can see from your reviews, you've got a good thing going, so don't stop now.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery intense and somewhat dark but then the subject itself is dark. Nicely done and well thought out.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery nice and you know how much I love Miss Parker and Argyle. :) They are two of my favorite charcters so it's wonderful to see them both in a story! Would love to see what would happen should the two ever have a encounter. LOL!
Loved the story and nice change of pace, looking forward to more.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedWhat a delightful surprise! It's nice to see 2 stories from you posted this week.
I like this one very much, love the way you worked the John/Jarod connection. You've done well keeping characters in character. (big grin) It'll be interesting to see where you take this, but please I do have a request ... don't make us wait too long!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedGreat Chapter! WooHoo! Loved it! More! More!
OK,now where is the next chapter? Don't make us wait, you know how impatient readers get when the story is as good as this one is!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedThis is getting very exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter. What kind of bribes does your muse require to keep the story coming?
Reviewer: RaChell SignedGetting better and better! Can't wait for more! And loved the way you ended it.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedOh, this is the best chapter yet! More please ( the sooner the better!)
Reviewer: RaChell SignedAw, very nice. (blush) Roses and chocolates with soft centers for your Muse.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery nice! great to see another chapter.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedAre we already up to chapter 16? WOW! You've held us captive, huh, I mean entranced by your story so far. Nicely done but we need more! I feel like a addict of your story. (blushing)
Reviewer: RaChell SignedThis is a very beautiful story. Your English is not perfect but the message you are trying to get across is. You should write more. I hope to see more of your writing in the near future. Job well done! :)
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