Penname: RaChell [Contact]

Real name: wouldn't you like to know!

Member Since: 08/05/05

Membership status: Administrator

Bio:

The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.

Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.

Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.

 

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Beta-reader: No
Affiliation: Centre

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Abstract Torture by Eveylin
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Any idiot could use a car battery. Jarod is much more creative.

Categories: Former Challenges
Characters: Jarod, Lyle
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #51 Former Challenges

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 154
Read Count: 2682
[Report This] Published: 16/10/05 Updated: 16/10/05


Title: Chapter 1: Abstract Torture

How did I miss this one before????  This is cute!  Wait!  it's beyond cute.  I love the "avenge his sofa"    That's a perfect touch.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/04/07
Trust Mine Enemy by Brynna
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker is on the run from the Centre, and Jarod tries to help her.

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 14851
Read Count: 2368
[Report This] Published: 18/11/05 Updated: 18/11/05


Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

So nice to re-read this after all these years!  As fresh today as it was when it was written.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Angel by Apollos Girl aka AG
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Miss Parker must deal with a new development in her life...

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1656
Read Count: 9683
[Report This] Published: 02/12/05 Updated: 02/12/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

This one was always so sad and I'm glad to be able to read it again.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Summary:

A sweet, fun short story for Christmas time based on my own Christmas distasters.



Categories: Jarod/ Miss Parker
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5890
Read Count: 14784
[Report This] Published: 06/12/05 Updated: 14/05/07


Title: Chapter 1: I

This is so cute and such a delight.  I normaly hate Miss Parker and Jarod as 'married with children' but this story is  a exception.  It's so well done and funny, you keep them in character and I howled with laughter  several times while reading it.  Great job!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/03/07
Summary: Jarod and Miss Parker make a deal, thus the title



Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 28023
Read Count: 3221
[Report This] Published: 07/01/06 Updated: 07/01/06


Title: Chapter 1: Deal

Always loved your stories! 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Summary: sequel to Family, when the Centre gets involved, hell hath no fury like Miss Parker's...

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3620
Read Count: 3891
[Report This] Published: 10/01/06 Updated: 10/01/06


Title: Chapter 1: A Pretender's Rage

always nice to read it again!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Summary: Miss Parker receives a gift from Jarod.



Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 394
Read Count: 2276
[Report This] Published: 10/01/06 Updated: 10/01/06


Title: Chapter 1: Dance

Oh this one was so sweet!  Fresh as the day you first wrote it, a joy to read and so tender.  Love the tiny insight to MP's connection with her mother.

Miss your writing AG. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Summary: A What If... Warning, two major characters do die!.

Categories: Season 2
Characters: Brigitte, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 674
Read Count: 2355
[Report This] Published: 10/01/06 Updated: 10/01/06


Title: Chapter 1: Beloved Spirit

This is one of my favorites.  Angst well done!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
The Fight by Danni
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary: The Centre has given Miss Parker a new assignment when they realize that Jarod is gone for good. Set five years after the attempted murder of Jarods sister, Emily.

Categories: Anything/Miscellaneous
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence
Challenges: Drabble #04 Anything

Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 41256
Read Count: 3907
[Report This] Published: 17/01/06 Updated: 25/03/07


Title: Chapter 5: Part 5

Wow!  really good!  I can't wait to finish it. :)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/03/07
Summary: Unincorporated: not organized or maintained as a legal corporation. It was how he lived his life.

Categories: Lyle
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 271
Read Count: 1759
[Report This] Published: 11/02/06 Updated: 11/02/06


Title: Chapter 1: Unincorporated

Not bad for trying to give your Muse a wake up call.  I enjoyed it.  Nice break from all the angst I've read of late.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/07
Soul Splinters II by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary: J2.jpgThis is a sequel to Soul Splinters.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55671
Read Count: 65909
[Report This] Published: 09/03/06 Updated: 05/07/07


Title: Chapter 16: Fading light

Very well done!  Your story is so suspenseful and full of intrigue.  I like the way it flows, and you keep everything along moving nicely.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/07
Title: Chapter 17: To be free

Nicely done.  Quite a exciting ending and so appropriate. 

So, what is your next project?  Just because you've finished this one doesn't mean you should stop.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/07
Unearthed by Double E
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Broots swore he would have nothing else to do with the Rescued children after discovering they had all been dying of mysterious and unexplainable illnesses. Unfortunately, he stumbles upon something out of the ordinary and Miss Parker is willing to risk everything to investigate.

Categories: Season 1
Characters: Broots, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7632
Read Count: 4833
[Report This] Published: 27/04/06 Updated: 02/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Broots!  You have him true to character and very well done.  Love the story, so cute and yet so sad.  you can almost see Broots shake in chapter one and in chapter two you can see him almost melt.

The ending had a nice touch without being too sweet or overdone.  Unusual and brillant overall.  

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/07
Summary: Jarod finally finds Parker after searching for years. Parker is a mother and has some explaining to do.

(I want to see if it'll turn out the way it plays out in my head. Huge shipper. Go wild people)

Categories: Round Robins
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Comedy, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 683
Read Count: 1303
[Report This] Published: 01/06/06 Updated: 01/06/06


Title: Chapter 1: Suprise!

Nice start!  You need to finish it.  As you can see from your reviews, you've got a good thing going, so don't stop now.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/07
Summary: The only constant companion in her life has been that which lives deep within her heart.

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1204
Read Count: 2848
[Report This] Published: 14/06/06 Updated: 14/06/06


Title: Chapter 1: A Toast, With Bitterness

Very intense and somewhat dark but then the subject itself is dark.  Nicely done and well thought out. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/07
Summary: Miss Parker in a costume...Argyle...need I say more.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 7566
Read Count: 10014
[Report This] Published: 18/06/06 Updated: 09/03/09


Title: Chapter 4: Behind door number 4…

Very nice and you know how much I love Miss Parker and Argyle.  :)  They are two of my favorite charcters so it's wonderful to see them both in a story!  Would love to see what would happen should the two ever have a encounter.  LOL!

Loved the story and nice change of pace, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/04/09
A winter's tale by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 124]
Summary: stories/395/images/parkerjarod.jpg A love story...my way. ;-) Read and review please

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55206
Read Count: 171397
[Report This] Published: 05/08/06 Updated: 19/06/11


Title: Chapter 9: At the hour...

What a delightful surprise!  It's nice to see 2 stories from you posted this week. 

I like this one very much, love the way you worked the John/Jarod connection.  You've done well keeping characters in character. (big grin)  It'll be interesting to see where you take this, but please I do have a request ... don't make us wait too long! 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/07
Title: Chapter 10: Bloodlines

Great Chapter!   WooHoo!  Loved it!  More!  More!

OK,now where is the next chapter?  Don't make us wait, you know how impatient readers get when the story is as good as this one is!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/07/07
Title: Chapter 11: Getting closer

This is getting very exciting!  Can't wait for the next chapter.  What kind of bribes does your muse require to keep the story coming?MP.jpg

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/07/07
Title: Chapter 12: Proposals

Getting better and better!  Can't wait for more!  And loved the way you ended it. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/07
Title: Chapter 13: Darkness descends

Oh, this is the best chapter yet!  More please ( the sooner the better!)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/09/07
Title: Chapter 14: The world is changing

Aw, very nice.  (blush)  Roses and chocolates with soft centers for your Muse. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/11/07
Title: Chapter 15: Legacy

Very nice!  great to see another chapter.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/07
Title: Chapter 1: Zero degrees

Are we already up to chapter 16?  WOW!  You've held us captive, huh, I mean entranced by your story so far.  Nicely done but we need more!  I feel like a addict of your story.  (blushing)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/12/07
Summary: It is all about love...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 380
Read Count: 1664
[Report This] Published: 10/08/06 Updated: 10/08/06


Title: Chapter 1: Love

This is a very beautiful story. Your English is not perfect but the message you are trying to get across is. You should write more. I hope to see more of your writing in the near future. Job well done! :)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/01/07