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Member Since: 27/09/08

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To whom shall I ship them?



Affiliation: Centre

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Reviews by Mirage


AVALANCHE! by Rising Sun
Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Miss Parker catches Jarod at last but with life threatening consequences.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2443
Read Count: 11409
[Report This] Published: 18/05/05 Updated: 18/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: AVALANCHE!

Great story!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/06/09
Summary: A series of unfortunate events threaten to push Lyle over the edge. Miss Parker uncovers a Centre secret more bizarre than she ever imagined and Jarod's next pretend might be his last

Categories: Season 4
Characters: All the characters, Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 112105
Read Count: 202564
[Report This] Published: 19/05/05 Updated: 01/01/10


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Haunted

A ten here as well, hope to read more from you.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/01/10
Retired
Ad Infinitum by Mareen
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Jarod gets killed...and gets killed...and gets killed...and gets killed yet again...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4553
Read Count: 3422
[Report This] Published: 20/05/05 Updated: 20/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Ad Infinitum

Splendid, Mareen! You had me glued to the story with the very first line and quite an ominous opening line it is: "The moment he entered the building, he just knew something was definitely wrong."

It's simply incomparable and so surreal. I loved the recurring "red yellowish tie" and how you were able to tie (haha) the story together and bring it to magnificent conclusion with this memorable line: "Get a new tie."

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/04/11
Summary: Someone knows all the secrets and has been watching all along...

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 596
Read Count: 1803
[Report This] Published: 20/05/05 Updated: 20/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Fly On the Wall

Wow, that was a hell of a read! I absolutely love this story.

"decapitated....my legs under his bed...head in his fish tank."

And of course, I immediatly visualized a mutilated house fly. :-) 

I agree with RaChell, you should have tons of glowing reviews. You certiainly deserve them!

 

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/05/09
Summary: Angelo was robbed of most everything in his life, except for the thing that matters the most.

Categories: Photos
Characters: Angelo
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #41 Photos

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 356
Read Count: 2120
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Can't Rob Me of Myself

Aww, I do love Angelo and you did an excellent job with this.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10
Just Wondering by Sezzie
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: And as he stood in front of the mirror...

Categories: Tattoo
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #19 Tattoo

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 143
Read Count: 1891
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Ooh, very nice Sezzie. The only permanent factor in his life since the escape has been constant change- and annoying Parker.

I imagine it would be difficult for him to settle down so to speak. Great piece!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/09
Ocularis by Sezzie
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: It was something akin to drowning.

Categories: Miss Parker's Eyes
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #18 Miss Parker's Eyes

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 101
Read Count: 2349
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Amazing. Laconic and just absolutely profound.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/05/09
Summary: Sadly, you write about what you know. And all you know is this...

Categories: Cliches
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #27 Cliches

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 1697
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Amazing..

"You say you want your happy ending and yet you detest everything it stands for"

This one simply...it resonates. A new favorite!

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10
Child's Play by Lyn
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: It always was he runs, she chases but now Jarod's gone and the Centre wants someone to blame.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 914
Read Count: 2030
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: In Which I Try To Create Suspense With Lights

Oh wow! So dark, so very very dark. Great little piece here. I noticed your bio and honestly, you should not be embarrassed at all! It's fiction after all right? I'd like to read more from you...wherever you are.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/07/09
The Lesson by A Price
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: none given

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 946
Read Count: 1908
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Lesson

Good job. Poor Jarod, never quite "gets" the girl in the end.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 10/11/10
Sold by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: I wondered why Major Charles and Margaret never heard Jarod cry out and knock over his lunch box. This is why.





Categories: Prequel
Characters: Jarod's Family
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 631
Read Count: 1523
[Report This] Published: 22/05/05 Updated: 22/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Sold

Hmm, very interesting. I've wondered about "mom" and "dad" as well and came to a few conclusions, one of which was something along these lines. Great Job, 24!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10
Ordinary Things by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: An ordinary day in the life of the hunted and hunters.





Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 467
Read Count: 1160
[Report This] Published: 22/05/05 Updated: 22/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Ordinary Things

That was beautiful, 24. You kept the characters in character and showed them all doing what they'd generally do, those ordinary things.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/11
After Hours by chopsticks
Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Broots overhears something after hours that he shouldn't, and winds up in a predicament he could never imagine!

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Broots, Lyle, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 996
Read Count: 2767
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: After Hours

Haha, poor Brootsie. He probably soiled himself. Brilliant, chopsticks.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Summary: A fairy tale read to a certain Pretender just has to be easy, right?

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 599
Read Count: 2135
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Fairy Tale Mishap

Haha. Insanity is good. "Abused Jarod" is even better. 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/11
Christmas Eve by Vania
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: What if Miss Parker and Jarod's family joined together in Christmas?

Note: this story is also available in portuguese Ceia de Natal



Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Brigitte, Broots, Debbie, Ethan, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Sydney, The Clone
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4830
Read Count: 3225
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Eve

Haha, such a cute Christmas story. Jarod needing a cold shower, haha, love it!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/11
I Wish by Vania
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod does some thinking about what Ethan said to him and ends up discovering his biggest wish.

Note: written for the Pretender 2001 Movie Challenge



Categories: Post Pretender 2001
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1180
Read Count: 2788
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: I Wish

Nice and very explosive indeed, Vania.

"We only have 40 seconds..."

"Then let's enjoy them."

I love it.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/04/11
Time For Reunion by Vania
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The Centre is in trouble... I won't tell more. If you want to know, read it!

Spoilers: Up to season four



Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Angelo, Baby Parker, Broots, Ethan, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Other Centre Character, Sydney, The Clone
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26855
Read Count: 40482
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

I am liking it- very much, as a matter of fact. It's a shame there aren't more reviews.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

What a twist! Raines alive? Wow! Clicking "next".

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 3: Part 3

Jarod finds his family? Things are about to get even more interesting. I'm still liking this!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 4: Part 4

Fantastic! I can't wait to see how / if Jarod will convince Miss Parker to help him.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 5: Part 5

"What will happen if I trust my feelings.." - Now that is the question, isn't it?  I can't wait to find out!! You do really well with the characters.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 6: Part 6

Great twists. You've kept the story flowing well and infused with plenty of action and twists!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 7: Part 7

Ooh, the plot thickens! I love it!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 8: Part 8

I hate it when writers starve for review (that's why I review, review, review), and I'm so sorry that you didn't get much feedback but better late than never? I hope?

The story is great, and that is an evil cliffy, haha!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 9: Part 9

Oh, poor Lyle. Hmm, hmm, hmm. I like Lyle too. Very much. Very, very- you get the picture. Great excitment and drama and oh, the twists!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/11