lol hurts to be on the cutting edge...

I was hoping he would stay with her a little bit. I understand why he didn't.

I'm going to get that Jarod yet for this. Seriously your story is great!

I like this!

Good! You need more chapters.

Just feeling a little hot I love it!

I can't see Lyle as anything but a monster, but I like the concept and you write well. You are good storyteller and you kept the characters in character.

You killed Miss Parker didn't you? It was so splendidly written that I will forgive you for killing her! I've always hated Lyle. You did a great job bringing this all together in so few words and just the right words too.

Sad poem but there is beauty in it and I do think your words tell my life. :) ;)

This is good. There are some errors but not so many that it interfered with the story. The previous reviewer meant that the errors made your story too hard to read. The reader shouldn't have to struggle. I didn't struggle that much. Some authors are so bad I had to abandone their stories. I like this. It took a while to read and the paragraphs are still in large chunks but your story is good. Congratulations!!!

Off for the holidays and came here first and was so pleased to see you here! I love this story and the ending was beautiful. I LOVE LOVE LOVE that in this last chapter Parker put her stamp of approval on Jarod's crime in the first chapter. I freaking HATE rapists and I can tell you don't like them much either.... the alligators tearing one apart gave you away lol. I think you are one of those people who write to try to understand but I remember that in Forces Of Nature, you the narrator said Parker couldn't possibly understand something (her father thinking men will commit rape & incest given enough incentive) that no sane person could understand. But still we try because we want to stop those things from happening and we think if we understand it we can cure it. But some days when the ugliness is too much we think screw it,  it's easier to feed them to alligators... Anyway just random thoughts. Thanks for not having them so cheesy... you do a good job with bringing them closer in a way that is realistic and in keeping with the original tv series and I can't tell you how much I appreciate that because I don't have a talent for writing. You do and I hope you'll share it with us forever. Congrats on completing another bloody fantastic story. 

Color me freaking elated.

Just watched your story! The hour went like a train and I got logged out lol. You have that special quality the best writers have. Be still my heart; my namesake and other characters are written truthfully and fleshly. Bonus points for plausibility and originality. The words and writing are your own and you know how to use them. You wrote a multichapter story that holds my attention for 10 chapters and left me craviing more. WIN! I like the Pretender novels but I dare to say that I like your writing better. I can't believe you don't use a beta. Miss Parker thinks you are lying about that. Which is it his or her? You have to write a bio! Write a bio and then update this story!