Penname: jacci [Contact]

Real name: Jacci

Member Since: 10/04/05

Membership status: Administrator

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MSN IM: MSN IM jacci [AT] pretendercentre [DOT] com
Beta-reader: Yes
Affiliation: Pretender

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Absolute by Eveylin
Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The Centre.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Other Centre Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 210
Read Count: 2722
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

Ohh that was so good, so sinister. You caught the tone and mood perfectly.

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 13/06/07
Retired
Eleventh Hour by Eveylin
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Jarod will take down The Centre, one way or another.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Slash, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1097
Read Count: 1831
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Eleventh Hour

Had to read it again and it is just so good, what is there to say? I love it, it is so evil, and so twisted in the best possible  ways.

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 11/09/06
Summary: Miss Parker has had enough, and she's gonna do something about it - Lyle lovers mightn't want to read this one ;o)



Categories: Season 3
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 516
Read Count: 1562
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Two Cartridges and a Lyle

Ohh that was just sooo cool. I have no trouble picturing that at all, and that damn smile, bastard got what he deserved.

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 17/03/07
10,000 Promises by icd
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Written for the 'Song Titles'-challenge on Pretender100; Wordcount: 100

Categories: Song Titles
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #02 Song Titles

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 115
Read Count: 2201
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: 10,000 Promises

Ohh sniffers, poor Miss Parker. It must have just crushed her that he didn't care about stuff like that.

Author's Response: yep, poor Miss P... ;)

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26/03/07
Summary: Summary: This is a story dedicated to voyager and the finale Pretender sytle. Pure and simple. But not without MP/J R. :)

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Lyle
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1637
Read Count: 1310
[Report This] Published: 30/04/05 Updated: 30/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Saying Goodbye

Nice idea to parallel their story with the finale of Voyager. I am a die hard trekkie myself, although TNG is my first love i really loved Voyager too and i enjoyed this, it was a good association.

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 18/04/07
Summary: He wants her whole and broken at the same time.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1128
Read Count: 961
[Report This] Published: 02/05/05 Updated: 02/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Everything You Ever Wanted.

Second all that, as alwasy, brilliant and succint. I can see Lyle in my mind, the nuances of his twisted pysche always flayed open so beautifully and without mercy or remorse.

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 15/02/07
Summary: Response to Blademistress' ficathon. A sad tale about poor Mr Broots who is haunted by tragedy.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1793
Read Count: 1393
[Report This] Published: 09/05/05 Updated: 06/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: 1

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Author's Response: Just testing the pic

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 08/05/07
Summary:

A young girl is dumped in front of Miss Parker's house in the middle of winter. How will she affect Parker's life?

2010: Chapter 2 has been updated to include a missing chunk that was cut out in the original transfer here.  I'm sorry it took me so long to realize it!

2013: Ch 1&2 have been updated slightly.



Categories: Season 1, Season 2
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10149
Read Count: 3392
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 28/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Home

Loved the opening of this, it is hard to imagine getting Parker to take on a teenager any other way. Particularly liked the way Sydney and Parker responded to each other's momentary lapses of reason.

Author's Response: Thanks Jacci.  =)

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 10/03/10
Summary:

Version One of the Madeline Series.  Madeline has something cooking.  The first two chapters under "Madeline Series" go with both versions, then it splits up into the two versions.  "Cooking with Madeline" follows the series.

Part 4B is back in the works- Miss Parker needs to have a little fun and Madeline is determined to make sure she does! :)



Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Season 1, Season 2, Season 3, Season 4
Characters: Angelo, Brigitte, Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Original Character, Sydney, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11415
Read Count: 6305
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 23/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Greatest Love (Version 1: Part 3)

Oh the plot thickens, I hope she knows what she is doing, and Jarod better be looking out for her!!

Author's Response:

Jarod's definately got her back- but hopefully she'll listen to him and not find trouble!

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 04/04/10
Title: Chapter 3: Laughter is the Best Medicine (Version 1: Part 5)

I love that scene about the stolen car, nice to see it from that point of view.

Author's Response: Thanks.  =)  It just begged to be written!

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 04/04/10
Title: Chapter 4: Through the Gates of Change (Version 1: Part 6)

That was very nicely done. I liked her fear of Lyle, Would be nice to see some of Madeline from his pov

Author's Response: Thank you again.  =)  Lyle definately senses Madeline's fear of men in general, and it definately goads him on!  He's giving me a little trouble at the moment, but I'll beat him into submission soon.  ;)

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 04/04/10
Summary: Version Two of the Madeline Series- please read the story called Madeline Series first so this'll make sense.   What would Madeline do if Miss Parker didn't survive the gunshot wound she received in the third season finale?  Updated 2/27/10 because I realized that most of chapter 4 didn't make it over in the original transfer years ago.  Sorry!

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 20690
Read Count: 6766
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 27/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Loyalties

Oh no, this can't be good, not good at all!!!

Author's Response: No, unfortunately not!  Are the site troubles giving you a chance to catch up on fic reading?  That's a good thing about the server problems, then- I know you've been missing reading.  =)

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 04/04/10
Title: Chapter 2: Echoes

Oh that was so sad, made me cry.

Author's Response: Good.  ;)  I'm glad cuz I know you like a fic to make you cry.  LOL  Thanks for reviewing, too.  =)

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 04/04/10
Summary: What if the Centre isn't what it really seems to be? ;)

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1522
Read Count: 1212
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: At The Centre Of The Game

That was a very unique and strange story. I was like Onisius too, quite confused for a bit, and then when it unfolded it all became clear, in a twisted kind of way. LMAO, that was well done, and very original

Author's Response: You guys are too kind!  It's always nice to get good reviews from writers like you and Onisius.  Thank you!

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 17/09/08
Lost Times by Gemini M
Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Sometimes you dont realize what you have until you lose it.

Categories: Post Pretender 2001
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3765
Read Count: 1276
[Report This] Published: 14/05/05 Updated: 14/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: 1

I love this story, it is tender and nicely written. And you know I am a sucker for Jarod/Sydney plotlines. Well done

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/01/06
Retired
Summary: This is a prequel to a very dark fic about Jarod and Lyle... Parker catches up with Jarod in New York. Be warned... things get nasty in later Chapters. Please R&R.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11926
Read Count: 6669
[Report This] Published: 14/05/05 Updated: 14/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

test reveiw

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 11/10/11
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

test reveiw number two

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 11/10/11
Summary: Jarod is found by Miss Parker and crew. He tries to escape, but something happens. This is a challenge response from the pretender challenge group.



Categories: Post Pretender 2001
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 710
Read Count: 2587
[Report This] Published: 18/05/05 Updated: 18/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Dark and Stormy Night

That was great, I especially loved the opening!!

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 12/06/07
Retired
Summary: None given.

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 222
Read Count: 1535
[Report This] Published: 20/05/05 Updated: 20/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: There Are Slashers Among Us

Ohh that was just soooo good

Reviewer: jaccione Signed
Date: 16/03/07
Prisoner by Mareen
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Written for Emily's Picture Story Challenge.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 616
Read Count: 1383
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Prisoner

I really enjoyed this very much. As much for what was written as what was left unsaid. Nicely written.

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/06
Flying Blind by KB
Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod helps a musician who has lost her sight, while Miss Parker faces a new threat.

Timeline: After Flesh and Blood.





Categories: Season 3
Characters: Brigitte, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8226
Read Count: 2562
[Report This] Published: 28/05/05 Updated: 28/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Ohhh, that was so good. I loved the description of Kerri's dilemma and then how you turned the whole thing around at the end.

Off for chap 2 now!! 

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 13/06/07
Retired
Summary: Miss Parker has spent a passionate night with Jarod, and her entire universe has changed. Not for the better. She and brother Lyle have got to talk. This is a dark story

with a very bleak core.





Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3196
Read Count: 774
[Report This] Published: 29/05/05 Updated: 29/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: My Name Is Ishmael

wow!!! that was very intense and very original too. I liked it very much.

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/06
Retired
Summary: In 1122, Eleanor of Aquitaine was born; by age 30, she had become queen of France and England, and the most powerful, intriguing, and beautiful woman in the world.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14875
Read Count: 1562
[Report This] Published: 11/08/05 Updated: 11/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Her Aquitaine

Beauty doesn't even begin to describe this story.... I don't even want to attempt with mundane words to say how good this was....

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/09/06
Summary: Anything to survive.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Smut, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1662
Read Count: 2129
[Report This] Published: 13/08/05 Updated: 13/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Game of Dice and Guns

ohh i liked that so very much, love the quiet and understated intensity of it, almost a breahtless quality

Reviewer: jaccione Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/01/07
Shattered by Little Angel
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Someone is shattered. Who it is? That's up to you...

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 49
Read Count: 986
[Report This] Published: 01/10/05 Updated: 01/10/05


Title: Chapter 1: Shattered

Sorry for contacting you in this way. Emails to you from Missing Pieces are not getting through. Due to companies going to war with spamming, many legitimate emails are now being blocked. Could you please add both jacci@pretendercentre.com and jacci.o@optusnet.com.au to your safe senders list, so that hopefully your reveiw notifications will get to you. If you could reply to this reveiw to let me know if you have done that, so then i can delete this.

thanks, and sorry for the hassle,
jacci

Reviewer: jacci Signed
Date: 28/06/07