Reviews?  You dare to ask for reviews????  How long has it been?  And to think I had to take a break from reading Pretender stories before your Muse decided to grace us with another wonderful chapter. 

Other then that this was nicely done and I am lookjing forward to more.  I'll toss a few soft centered chocolates and thornless roses your way for now but wait too long and I'll grab a sharp pointy stick and give your Muse a good prod! 

Nice story and of course being a 'shipper I like the ending!

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Backing the car in that way only seemed (dare I say it?) logical.  Much easier to escape going frontwards instead of backwards.

 OK, at the risk of falling off my chair from laughing, all I can picture from that sentence is Jarod dressed as Spock!  Well it is almost Halloween so why not!  (big grin)  Looking forward to more of course!  

Ah, Edgar Allen Poe nicely done with a Pretender twist.

Author's Response: Thank you. I tried to make it Poeish.

Nicely done and a interesting start.

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Why thank you:)

OhMyGawd!  I haven't laughed this hard since I don't know when!  The mental image of Jarod humping Mutumbo's leg will takes weeks if not months to get out of my head!  Well Done, Well Done!  Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. *takes a bow* Still cracks me up thinking about it, so I know what you mean.

This is it?  Well this , this ...sucks!  How could you bring us this far and then kill him off?  I wanted a happy ending.  No chocolate or roses for you and NO PEZ either!

Author's Response: Lol, sorry RaChell, but one of them had to die to tie in with my poem, and it just seemed Jarod fitted better. I cant bring him back to life, he is dead as dead can be so i am afraid this is it lol Thanks for reviewing and i do hope you enjoyed it despite the ending

Never and I mean never  have I read a story where I have told the author I wanted a re-write. (sigh) I know you wanted to kill someone off but....but ... really did you have to?  I'm going to sit here and pout and no you're not getting the chocolates back.  If you can't give us a alternative ending then I want a happy story for Christmas.  I know you can do it so don't give me any excuses.  (blows nose in kleenx tissue.)  I want another story.

Author's Response: lol, yes RaChell, i REALLY DID have to kill someone off lol. *Sigh*, fine i will do a little rewrite of the very ending and add a little more, but damn it! do you relaise it wont fit my poem which was the reason for the story? do you realise it wont be sad? lol dont expect much more than a few para's though, and this is only for you.

Oh that was cute! Nicely done and one of your best yet!  How did you think of all those things?  LOL!

I'd love to drop by the forum and chat, I mean discuss this  but life is hectic right now and I'm doing good sneaking in the few stories I've been able to tonight.  I'll have to wait until you break down and tell us. 

 So if it isn't Broots, then Syd?  I can't picture it being Syd!  And if cheap isn't a key then why the heck did you use it???? Aha!  I know, just for meaniness, just to tease us!  I knew it!  You are really one of Raines' minions in disguise!  You're here to use us for sims, making us run thru mental mazes filled with deceptive clues and to torture us with abstract ideas that only a genuis could figure out!  ACK!  Some one save me!!!!!!

Very nice insight into Miss Parker.  Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks again!!

Very nicely done!  Good job and enjoyed the different POVs.

Very nice and insightful.