Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 46107
Read Count: 67883
Penname: RaChell [Contact]
Real name: wouldn't you like to know!
Real name: wouldn't you like to know!
Member Since: 08/05/05
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.
Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.
Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.
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Summary: What if the Centre had the power to take it all away? Jarod is captured and they try to ensure that he will never escape again.
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 46107
Read Count: 67883
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 46107
Read Count: 67883
[Report This] Published: 29/07/07 Updated: 10/12/08
Title: Chapter 1: The Alley
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the--um--warning:) I have a feeling I'm gonna need tough if this story is going to live up to expectations. Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you keep reading. Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 31/07/07
Very good! Intense and exciting, nicely done. Looking forward to more and the wild ride ahead. I have a feeling your Muse has a exciting journey (story wise) in store for us.
Word of warning: Sarah is tough so if you accept her offer of beta reader just be prepared! She can make you cry and is unmerciful as I well know from experiencing her tough beta'ing first hand! So just remember I warned you!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the--um--warning:) I have a feeling I'm gonna need tough if this story is going to live up to expectations. Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you keep reading. Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 31/07/07
Title: Chapter 2: Animus
Date: 04/08/07
Very nice and well done. This chapter is thoughtfully written and very cleaverly crafted, a nice piece of intense and cliffhanging reading. Good luck on your next chapter and good luck with Sarah! You'll need it. (big smile)
Author's Response:
Thanks, RaChell! And no, Sarah has not breathed fire through her emails. . .yet;)
Love ya, Sarah and RaChell!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 04/08/07
Title: Chapter 3: Decisions
Author's Response:
Date: 03/10/07
Nicely done MP! Can't wait to see where you take us on this wild ride with the next chapter! Looks like you're surviving Sarah. (wink, wink)
Oh yes, just remembered that I must throw soft center chocolates and pink roses at your Muse's feet. Watch out for the thorns!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! Hope the wild ride didn't make you too nauseated:)
You throw those roses and chocolates; maybe that'll distract my muse long enough for me to snap a leash on her and keep her from running away:)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 03/10/07
Title: Chapter 5: Ghosts and Ghouls
Author's Response:
Date: 06/11/07
Aw MP, this sucks! As much as it hurts me to say that, really and truly it does suck. You give us two (yes I counted them!) great chapters and then leave us wanting for more! You tease us and have us on the edge of our seat and then expect us to leave glowing reviews?
OK, it's great, it's wonderful but you're mean and cruel making us wait for another chapter!
Author's Response:
(deep sigh, tragic face) All my labor of love, and what do I get? "Mean and cruel." You're making my inner child cry . . .
Seriously, though, glad you like it enough to get ticked at me. If I could teleport myself and my betas into an alternate time continuum so I could publish a new chap every day I would. Since I can't you'll just have to bear with me. More is coming, I promise!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 06/11/07
Title: Chapter 6: Believe Your Own Lies
Date: 07/12/07
Well done! Now we just need a another chapter or two, or three or what the heck! Make it several more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, RaChell!
I know it's been an obscenely long hiatus, but I'm *almost* ready to post the next chap. After that, updates will be coming fairly quickly, so I'll try not to torture you too much.
Thanks for the kind words! Yes, believe it or not, I am still writing.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 07/12/07
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1079
Read Count: 2142
it's the second part to alone, Jarods answer to Miss Parkers E-mail
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1079
Read Count: 2142
[Report This] Published: 04/08/07 Updated: 04/08/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 05/08/07
Very sweet Elisa! Love it and it's perfect.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 05/08/07
Summary:
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 18398
Read Count: 1695
A mobster in New York kidnaps the charaters in this story to find out who kidnapped his daughter. Will they save her in time?
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 18398
Read Count: 1695
[Report This] Published: 05/08/07 Updated: 05/08/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. I don't know I have posted it twice and it does show up. Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 05/08/07
Very interesting Gena. A bit confusing unless you know the chatacter but quite a intriguing undertaking, merging 4 shows into one big cross over. Kudos on doing a great job explaining each character and their show.
BTW where is your other story??????
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. I don't know I have posted it twice and it does show up. Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 05/08/07
Summary: Jarod and Miss Parker have a few hours to spare. See how they spend it.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 722
Read Count: 2019
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 722
Read Count: 2019
[Report This] Published: 07/08/07 Updated: 07/08/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks. It was a bear to get it posted but finally I got it. LOL Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 07/08/07
Very good Gena! It really came together and I'm glad you got it posted.
Author's Response: Thanks. It was a bear to get it posted but finally I got it. LOL Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 07/08/07
Summary: Jarod, Miss Parker and Sydney share some time together.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1590
Read Count: 1497
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1590
Read Count: 1497
[Report This] Published: 10/08/07 Updated: 10/08/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 10/08/07
Very nice! A little bit of angst tempered with a bit of humor and insight into the relationships between Sydney,Jarod and Miss Parker. I hope there is another chapter to come. (there is isn't there? )
Glad t see you're back and writing! Don't forget Burn Notice tonight.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 10/08/07
Summary: Jarod thought he had the perfect family, but, something in Miss Parker's past had otherwise changed his mind.
Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5535
Read Count: 5995
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5535
Read Count: 5995
[Report This] Published: 11/08/07 Updated: 17/09/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: 11/08/07
OK, I see you skipped ahead from the classic TP in the beginning to the future at the end.
And yes, I got a chuckle out of that play on words 'Less Than Perfect'
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Thank you! And I had to find a way to use "LESS THAN PERFECT". Glad you liked it.
Update soon. Talk to you later.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 11/08/07
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Author's Response:
Date: 20/08/07
I see you're working hard to recalim your title as 'Queen of Angst' Anna! Intersting turn of events. I'm looking forward to see where you take it.
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Thank you! I will be updating this week. So, stay tuned!
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 20/08/07
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Author's Response:
Date: 22/08/07
Ah, the Queen of Angst is back! Love where you're going with this. (not that I really know where you're going, I just like the concept of it) Now get busy and bless us with another chapter, the suspense is causing me to bite my nails!
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Thanks! Update will be soon!
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 22/08/07
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: 27/08/07
Nicely done as always Anna! Good to have the Queen of Angst back.
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Thanks! I'll be updating soon
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 27/08/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 03/09/07
Hmm, why do I get the feeling you had planned this sweet and tender moment all along? ;) Nicely done!
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Thanks so much. I'll be posting really soon.
Take care.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 03/09/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 18/09/07
Aw, that was sweet Anna! (and of course the picture of Jarod with a baby was a dead giveaway to the ending!) Should have known you had something like that planned all along!
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Thank you so much. I just love that pic of Jarod and the baby. Thanks for always reading and taking the time in reviewing my stories.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 18/09/07
Summary: Miss Parker is invited to a birthdayparty.
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5879
Read Count: 2758
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5879
Read Count: 2758
[Report This] Published: 11/08/07 Updated: 11/08/07
Title: Chapter 1: Hyper
Author's Response:
Date: 11/08/07
Cute story Kris! I esp. liked the dance scene with the brother and Miss Parker at Hyper. You pulled things together nicely. Interesting twist on the clone concept too.
Glad to see your Muse is working again, you need to feed your Muse more chocolate and Pretender epsiodes. (big smile) We need more stories from you.
Author's Response:
Chocolate and Pretender episodes... Good tip... Thx :^)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 11/08/07
Summary: On a special occasion, a certain book powerfully jolts a character's memory.... inspired by one of my favorite episodes of The Pretender
Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Original Character, Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Vignette
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 803
Read Count: 2349
Characters: Original Character, Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Vignette
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 803
Read Count: 2349
[Report This] Published: 21/08/07 Updated: 21/08/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 21/08/07
Great story! Took me a while to figure out who was 'talking'. Loved it!
Date: 21/08/07
Summary: The Centre is gone. What happens when the Centre refugees are together?
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Angelo, Baby Parker, Debbie, Ethan, Jarod, Jarod's Family, Miss Parker, Sydney, The Clone
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 4583
Read Count: 23145
Characters: Angelo, Baby Parker, Debbie, Ethan, Jarod, Jarod's Family, Miss Parker, Sydney, The Clone
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 4583
Read Count: 23145
[Report This] Published: 26/08/07 Updated: 26/08/07
Title: Chapter 7: Four years
Date: 27/08/07
Interesting story, it's not easy to explain the Pretender! You did it very nicely and I like how you used a seeting in the future for it.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 27/08/07
Summary: Sometimes the truth is a very bitter pill to swallow.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Angelo, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1543
Read Count: 920
Characters: Angelo, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1543
Read Count: 920
[Report This] Published: 26/08/07 Updated: 26/08/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 27/08/07
Nicely done, you can picture the angst in Jarod's demenor.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 27/08/07
Summary: A shared loss.
Categories: Death
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 101
Read Count: 1858
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 101
Read Count: 1858
[Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 09/09/07
Title: Chapter 1: Twin Crosses
Author's Response:
Date: 09/09/07
Nice! Very nice and I like it! Why didn't you tell me you had something new?
Author's Response:
Um . . . cause I came up with it in about twenty minutes a couple hours ago?
Glad you like! If it makes you feel any better, I'll go post something on the sim forum about it. thx for the review!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 09/09/07
Summary: It's hard to ignore. Especially at night
Categories: Anything/Miscellaneous
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126
Read Count: 1903
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126
Read Count: 1903
[Report This] Published: 20/09/07 Updated: 20/09/07
Title: Chapter 1: Someone Else
Date: 21/09/07
Hmmm, I am completely stumped! I want to say the person speaking is Miss Parker but yet .... well I guess I'll have to wait for you to post your answer. I think you have me this time!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reivew RaChell!
And the answer was guessed over at the SIM so I it in the 'end notes' as promissed
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 21/09/07
Summary: Part of the Guess Who/Guess What Challenge
Categories: Challenges
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 243
Read Count: 2201
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 243
Read Count: 2201
[Report This] Published: 21/09/07 Updated: 21/09/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 21/09/07
Oh not you too! You're as baffling as Sarah with hers. I want to say who I think it is but yet at the same time I know you're sneaky. (wink, wink) And I'll probably guess all wrong!
Author's Response:
Don't be shy! I don't bite people who leave me reviews! I posted on the forum, but they got it in three guesses, so my fun was short lived.
I aspire to one day in old age and infinite wisdom to be as baffling as Sarah.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 21/09/07
Summary: Jarod finds an article in the paper.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2349
Read Count: 7363
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2349
Read Count: 7363
[Report This] Published: 29/09/07 Updated: 14/10/07
Title: Chapter 1: Newspaper
Date: 30/09/07
Good story and very suspensefull! But the ending leaves the reader with a strange feeling, almost as if it's not really the ending. You need to add another chapter to answer the question of what Raines did to Jarod, why Sydney needs to know and finish it off.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 30/09/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 29/10/07
Nice to see you explained the mystery of why Jarod was co-operating. Now it seems more finished.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 29/10/07
Summary: For years they've spent their time with her chasing and him running, but what happens when the Centre is destroyed and Jarod finds himself in the enviable position of having to chase Miss Parker?
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 15640
Read Count: 21244
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 15640
Read Count: 21244
[Report This] Published: 10/10/07 Updated: 16/01/08
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two
Date: 29/10/07
WooHoo! I love it! Need I say more and it's great. Can't wait for another chapter .... which BTW.... had better be coming soon or I'll have to pull out my pointy stick and borrow Kat's stun gun and have a talk with your Muse.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Date: 29/10/07