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Love is Blind by RaChell
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Broots' heart is all aflutter as the beautiful blonde across the room has eyes only for him. The question is, will Broots be man enough to make the first move?



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Broots, Miss Parker, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1903
Read Count: 2497
[Report This] Published: 17/03/07 Updated: 17/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO. I think it will be safe to assume poor Brootsie will be waiting in the car with Sam next time.

Well done! It was great to read something from you again!

Author's Response:

Thanks Thunderchild!  It was a hoot to write!  Yes, you're right, I bet next time Broots waits in the car. Poor Broots, he's so much fun to pick on.

BTW when are you going to have something new up???? 

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/03/07
Summary: In memory of Steven, a valued Missing Pieces member that was taken from us far too early in life.

Categories: Misc
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 31
Read Count: 6796
[Report This] Published: 16/04/07 Updated: 16/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My condolences go out to Steve's family and friends during this very difficult time of his passing.

Kat 

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 16/04/07
Summary: Sydney's POV. This story is inspired by Gables "X Marks the Spot series". sydbroots.jpg

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 473
Read Count: 3984
[Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 05/05/07


Title: Chapter 1: Sydney's Point Of View

YAAAAAAAAY, I loved it!!! It reminds me so much of Gables' stories, very nice continuation. Now you have Sydney second-guessing his conviction that Parker wouldn't do anything to him or Broots, are you going to continue and give them reason to worry? *hint hint*

Author's Response: \"MP.jpg\"Thanks Parker!  Well you know,I always loved Gables' X series.  I happened to be browsing MP the other night and came across them again.  This quick fic-let just sorta happened.  (laughing) I'm not sure there will be more.

BTW, aren't we long overdue for a story from you???

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/07
It Ends Now by jacci
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary: The turning point has finally been reached. But will Miss Parker go in the direction Jarod has always hoped for?

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2406
Read Count: 6249
[Report This] Published: 08/06/07 Updated: 19/06/07


Title: Chapter 1: It Starts With A Phone Call

YAAAAAAAY!!

I love the additions you snuck in between when I saw it and posting. Great! Fantastic! (I need a bigger vocabulary) You added more depth and dimension with your additions. And you say you don't write Parker very well? You did a impressive job here!

Before RaChell comes along with her pointy stick, I'm gonna say it first: more, please, now.

Author's Response:

Thanks, and don't worry, more coming soon (as you well know!!! Lmao). Thanks, I was worried about Parker since I know I don't write her well at all (and my sympathies lie in other directions, so this whole thing is weird for me.) 

You can all put your pointy sticks away for now please!!! 

\"jacci.jpg\" 

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/06/07
Title: Chapter 2: Decisions and Deals

*stammers and splutters* There's some missing!! The version you sent me doesn't end there *shakes head firmly* But you've also added some great additions since I last saw it. YAY YOU!!!!!

Excellent as always.
Am just left wondering where those last couple of paragraphs went. 



Author's Response: Thanks!! I am left wondering too, lol, got no idea now what might be missing. 

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/06/07
Title: Chapter 2: Decisions and Deals

Ignore the rantings of the crazy person... nothing is missing, except for maybe my brain.

Author's Response: Ahh, all is good then, maybe is a symptom of that 'my head is gone' issue ?

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 19/06/07
Sleepyhead + 7 by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Continuation of the Sleepyhead series.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: Sleepyhead Challenge
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1440
Read Count: 2247
[Report This] Published: 08/06/07 Updated: 08/06/07


Title: Chapter 1: Sleepyhead + 7

This is such a fascinating twist to the story. Each layer has added more depth, but you have offered a very plausible answer behind the riddles and mystery behind the sickness. Wonderful job, Sarah!

Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much Kat!

I spent some time trying to figure out what would make the Centre intentionally make Jarod sick, nice to hear it made sense to other people than myself

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/06/07
Summary: What would the characters think.... about our stories if they existed in a different plane?

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Comedy
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2523
Read Count: 1900
[Report This] Published: 24/06/07 Updated: 24/06/07


Title: Chapter 1: Plan B or Rescue Us!

*snicker* If this really happened to the characters when stories stall mid-scene... let's just say Lyle and Parker would be very cross with me *wicked smile*

Here be the feedback your musing ranted on about *winks* We don't need another musing dying when they're starved for the attention they crave. *pets RaChell's musing*

You shot Jarod point blank in the chest and he just did a happy dance?! 
That's not fair!!! No blood at all *sulks* 

*wanders back to HD before RaChell gets her stick*

Author's Response:

Yes, I did have MP shot him point blank but a lot of good it did her.  And thank you for feeding my Muse. 

OK, you don't want that sharp pointy stick to come out of hiding now do you?  (wink, wink ... oh wait. I have some thing in my eye.  it must be that foam pointy stick of Sarah's)  Well we certainly don't want Parker and Lyle to be cross with you for leaving them stuck mid story so run back to HD and get busy.   I'm looking forward to another chapter.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/06/07
Retired
Not Tonight by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Maybe that's why he calls so late

Categories: Missing Scenes
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 254
Read Count: 2339
[Report This] Published: 29/07/07 Updated: 29/07/07


Title: Chapter 1: Not Tonight

Ohhh, I like this. A very plausible reason why he could be ringing her in the middle of the night (other than the theory that he is just an idiot who likes waking people in the middle of the night while he is too wired up on pez to sleep which makes for some serious snicker-factor when there is twinnie and am I still typing?) Scratch that last bit.

I would like you to post more stories, now please... I will be giving you some more
Kainda on Monday, is only fair *big grin*



Author's Response: I'm working on the "more stories"-part, have a couple of ideas, so hopefully it'll work out.
And yaaaay on more Kainda!

And if anyone's wondering what I'm talking about, check out Thurderchild's story "Hunter's Daughter" (though twincest is involved so...be warned. Though I am still a bit iffy on the subject and love it.) [/shamless plug]

Say we're about even now?

 

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/07/07
Title: Chapter 1: Not Tonight

You're both threatening to break out the pointy sticks and poke me? *clicks tongue* Sarah and RaChell, you both should know better than to threaten me with sticks. Especially you Sarah... we can't risk you poking your eye again when your muse is waking up.

I will jump my beta today, so you two, try and be a little patient! It sounds hard, but if you put your minds to it, you can do it. *winks*

Author's Response: Oh that's true, writing when blind is a bit tricky. Though I could learn braille...

Ha! Me? Patient? You're really overestimating me Kat

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 31/07/07
Summary: Jarod and Miss Parker have a few hours to spare. See how they spend it.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 722
Read Count: 2010
[Report This] Published: 07/08/07 Updated: 07/08/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad you finally managed to get it posted, it gave you enough trouble. Good story (even if it is shipper *winks*)

Author's Response: Hey you are lucky I finally got the thing posted. LOL

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/07
Retired
The Remainder by chopsticks
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: He's passed out on his desk by eight thirty. Another successful day. Crossover with House MD. Lyle/Cuddy, Lyle/Parker, Jarod/Parker (briefly).

Categories: Crossovers, Lyle, Post IOTH
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, General
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Language

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2015
Read Count: 3325
[Report This] Published: 30/08/08 Updated: 30/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*cuddles poor shattered Lyle* This was very well written. A really nice humanized Lyle of what could be after IoTH with the scrolls going poof... all Lyle ever worked towards, vanishing. Excellent job, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you :) *cuddles Lyle some more*

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/08/08
Summary:

There's no one left to mourn her except her incarcerated husband and her dead son.



Categories: Lyle, Post IOTH
Characters: Lyle
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1259
Read Count: 1982
[Report This] Published: 03/01/09 Updated: 03/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Expecting Sympathy From the Wounded

Another fantastic insight into our dear Mr Lyle! I thoroughly enjoyed it, and it does seem plausible that even after Lyle drove his adoptive mother insane, he would feeling *something* when he learned that she was dead. He did get rather upset in RRJ when Jarod told him he had seen her. This is Lyle at his complex-best, well done!

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/01/09