Characters: Broots, Miss Parker, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1903
Read Count: 2497
LMAO. I think it will be safe to assume poor Brootsie will be waiting in the car with Sam next time.
Well done! It was great to read something from you again!
Author's Response:
Thanks Thunderchild! It was a hoot to write! Yes, you're right, I bet next time Broots waits in the car. Poor Broots, he's so much fun to pick on.
BTW when are you going to have something new up????
Reviewer: Thunderchild SignedMy condolences go out to Steve's family and friends during this very difficult time of his passing.
Kat
Reviewer: Thunderchild SignedYAAAAAAAAY, I loved it!!! It reminds me so much of Gables' stories, very nice continuation. Now you have Sydney second-guessing his conviction that Parker wouldn't do anything to him or Broots, are you going to continue and give them reason to worry? *hint hint*
Author's Response: Thanks Parker! Well you know,I always loved Gables' X series. I happened to be browsing MP the other night and came across them again. This quick fic-let just sorta happened. (laughing) I'm not sure there will be more.
BTW, aren't we long overdue for a story from you???
Reviewer: Thunderchild SignedYAAAAAAAY!!
I love the additions you snuck in between when I saw it and posting. Great! Fantastic! (I need a bigger vocabulary) You added more depth and dimension with your additions. And you say you don't write Parker very well? You did a impressive job here!
Before RaChell comes along with her pointy stick, I'm gonna say it first: more, please, now.
Author's Response:
Thanks, and don't worry, more coming soon (as you well know!!! Lmao). Thanks, I was worried about Parker since I know I don't write her well at all (and my sympathies lie in other directions, so this whole thing is weird for me.)
You can all put your pointy sticks away for now please!!!
Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
*stammers and splutters* There's some missing!! The version you sent me doesn't end there *shakes head firmly* But you've also added some great additions since I last saw it. YAY YOU!!!!!
Excellent as always.
Am just left wondering where those last couple of paragraphs went.
Ignore the rantings of the crazy person... nothing is missing, except for maybe my brain.
Author's Response: Ahh, all is good then, maybe is a symptom of that 'my head is gone' issue ?
This is such a fascinating twist to the story. Each layer has added more depth, but you have offered a very plausible answer behind the riddles and mystery behind the sickness. Wonderful job, Sarah!
Author's Response:
Oh thank you so much Kat!
I spent some time trying to figure out what would make the Centre intentionally make Jarod sick, nice to hear it made sense to other people than myself
Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed*snicker* If this really happened to the characters when stories stall mid-scene... let's just say Lyle and Parker would be very cross with me *wicked smile*
Here be the feedback your musing ranted on about *winks* We don't need another musing dying when they're starved for the attention they crave. *pets RaChell's musing*
You shot Jarod point blank in the chest and he just did a happy dance?!
That's not fair!!! No blood at all *sulks*
Yes, I did have MP shot him point blank but a lot of good it did her. And thank you for feeding my Muse.
OK, you don't want that sharp pointy stick to come out of hiding now do you? (wink, wink ... oh wait. I have some thing in my eye. it must be that foam pointy stick of Sarah's) Well we certainly don't want Parker and Lyle to be cross with you for leaving them stuck mid story so run back to HD and get busy. I'm looking forward to another chapter.
Reviewer: Thunderchild SignedOhhh, I like this. A very plausible reason why he could be ringing her in the middle of the night (other than the theory that he is just an idiot who likes waking people in the middle of the night while he is too wired up on pez to sleep which makes for some serious snicker-factor when there is twinnie and am I still typing?) Scratch that last bit.
I would like you to post more stories, now please... I will be giving you some more
Kainda on Monday, is only fair *big grin*
Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
You're both threatening to break out the pointy sticks and poke me? *clicks tongue* Sarah and RaChell, you both should know better than to threaten me with sticks. Especially you Sarah... we can't risk you poking your eye again when your muse is waking up.
I will jump my beta today, so you two, try and be a little patient! It sounds hard, but if you put your minds to it, you can do it. *winks*
Author's Response: Oh that's true, writing when blind is a bit tricky. Though I could learn braille...
Ha! Me? Patient? You're really overestimating me Kat
I'm glad you finally managed to get it posted, it gave you enough trouble. Good story (even if it is shipper *winks*)
Author's Response: Hey you are lucky I finally got the thing posted. LOL
*cuddles poor shattered Lyle* This was very well written. A really nice humanized Lyle of what could be after IoTH with the scrolls going poof... all Lyle ever worked towards, vanishing. Excellent job, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you :) *cuddles Lyle some more*
Reviewer: Thunderchild SignedThere's no one left to mourn her except her incarcerated husband and her dead son.
Another fantastic insight into our dear Mr Lyle! I thoroughly enjoyed it, and it does seem plausible that even after Lyle drove his adoptive mother insane, he would feeling *something* when he learned that she was dead. He did get rather upset in RRJ when Jarod told him he had seen her. This is Lyle at his complex-best, well done!
Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed