Penname: RaChell [Contact]

Real name: wouldn't you like to know!

Member Since: 08/05/05

Membership status: Administrator

Bio:

The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.

Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.

Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.

 

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Reviews by RaChell


27 by TLM
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 114]
Summary:

We all just want some ANSWERS. 

"I run. You chase. What if... we didn't?"



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36857
Read Count: 68394
[Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 08/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Day 1 : Day 28

You shameless tease!  How dare you drop a nice little snip of your story on the site and then leave, knowing everyone wants more!  I'm not sure I should even give you the accolades your Muse so richly deserves until you post another chapter. 

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Author's Response: Hahaha I did it just to annoy you of course. I'll try and get on the next chapter you know... tomorrow.. in a few months... whatever...

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/07/07
Title: Chapter 2: Day 2 : Day 29

Very nice and exciting but then I'd expect nothing less from you!

Author's Response: I've gotta keep myself entertained too! Thanks, RaChell. You're such a good little reviewer.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/07
Title: Chapter 3: Day 3 : Day 30

What can I say except I hate this! It's not often I read someone's fic and really feel envious. You have Miss Parker's character done so well that even the writers of the show pale in comparassion. I am green with envy !

Now that I've vented, I have to admit the story is great (would be disappointed if it wasn't) and I am looking forward to more!



Author's Response: Aw haha that is the greatest compliment. She is my favorite character ever and I think I can write her accurately because we share a lot of personality traits. Now Jarod is another story. I always hate my lines for Jarod because they don't feel as close as hers. Anyway, thank you for the lovely review, RaChell! It made my day.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/08/07
Title: Chapter 4: Day 4: Day 31

Nicely done!  Have to say it's intense and as always so well done.

Author's Response: Thank you verrrrry much, RaChell!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/07
Title: Chapter 1: Day 1 : Day 28

Hmm, must have missed chapter 5!  Oh well, chapter 6 is deliious and once I get a chance I'll have to go back and catch up on chapter 5.  Review for that chapter  will have to wait until later.

Author's Response: Well then I'm sure chapter six was a little bit confusing for you! I'll be awaiting your verdict.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/10/07
Title: Chapter 7: Day 7 : Day 34

Very nice!  And it's getting so intriquing too, can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Author's Response: Thanks, RaChell. My story can never go on til I get a review from you. ;)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/11/07
Title: Chapter 1: Day 1 : Day 28

Chapter 8 was very very nice. Now if I ask very nicely do we get another chapter soon????? Hey! I gave you a reveiw, what more do you want?

Author's Response: Soon-ish?? I mean there was no PEZ to go with this review so I'll have to think about it.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/12/07
Title: Chapter 1: Day 1 : Day 28

Author's Response: Soon-ish?? I mean there was no PEZ to go with this review so I'll have to think about it.

 Excuse me!  But aren't you being picky here?  You want PEZ as well as a review?  Consider yourself  lucky you got a review!  



Author's Response: Don't we all just want some PEZ on occasion??? It's only human you know!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 19/12/07
Title: Chapter 1: Day 1 : Day 28

Author's Response: Don't we all just want some PEZ on occasion??? It's only human you know!

 Picky, picky!  And I suppose you have the PEZ dispener already picked out.  What do yo think we readers are .... Santa Claus? 



Author's Response: Well I have been very good this year... No no, any dispenser will do, although I do have far too many of those snowmen ones. They're quite popular I guess. ;D

Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 19/12/07
Title: Chapter 1: Day 1 : Day 28

stories/63/images/giant_pez_spiderman2.jpgHappy now???? (whiney, bitchy little writers!  Give their Muses chocolates and roses and are they happy?  Heck no!  They want PEZ!  What next?  Another Pretender movie???)

Author's Response: HAHA YAY! I am so excited! Now I HAVE to write another chapter before 2008 because that is just going the extra mile.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 21/12/07
Title: Chapter 9: Day 9 : Day 36

Ah yes, you and your Muse do indeed deserve all the PEZ you want.  Yes I can indeed pictureing the two of you rolling around on a bed covered with PEZ... well on second thought maybe I don't want to picture that.   But I'm a bit broke and have no money at the moment you'll have to buy your own.  Other then that, I am impressed with this chapter.  Nicely done!

 



Author's Response: Hahah! What a great image... or not. Thanks as always RaChell. I'm working on the next chapter, I promise. My muse is just too busy rolling around in PEZ to cooperate.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/01/08
In Dreams by MP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: There's no running from the demons in your mind.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 358
Read Count: 2089
[Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 26/07/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nicely done and very dramatic.  Looking forward to more from you in the future.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'll do my best not to disappoint.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/07/07
No Turning Back by slowly
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Jarod is just starting to get his old friend back when tragedy strikes.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney, Zoe
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 34615
Read Count: 29588
[Report This] Published: 28/07/07 Updated: 07/05/09


Title: Chapter 4: Return

Quite a unusal twist!  Loved it and look forward to more!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/07
Title: Chapter 2: Pain

WOW!  Very intense and so well done!  Looking forward to seeing where you take this story. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/07
Title: Chapter 3: Drink

Nicely done.  Love the way you described the barfly and Jarod interactting.  Curious to see where you go from the cliffhanging ending of this chapter.  But please don't wait too long ... it's not nice to keep your readers in the dark for extended periods of time.  If you do, you might find Willie knocking on your door and vacation time in the renewal wing isn't excatly pleasant.  (wink, wink)

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Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/07
Title: Chapter 5: Patience

Nice!  Very nice but I have to admit you really threw me with the ending revelation!  I never would have expected that!

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Date: 06/08/07
Title: Chapter 6: Friends

This story has progressed very nicely, interesting concept of the two of them working together as bounty hunters.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: 10/08/07
Title: Chapter 7: Teamwork

You've really picked up the pace with this chapter.  It's becoming more interesting with each new addition.  I'm curious to see what you have in mind for the next one and if Jarod is right that someone at the Centre thinks she is still alive.  BTW love the descriptions of the clothes.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/07
Title: Chapter 8: Pleasure

Really enjoyed this chapter, very good.  You're pacing yourself with this story and it is coming together extermely well in my opinion.  I really like how you've taken your time to develope the relationship between the two of them instead of just having them jump into bed in the first chapter.  Very nicely done and I think you've shown great self restraint!  Keep it up!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/08/07
Title: Chapter 9: Happy

Another great chapter!  way to go.  (smile) looking forward to the next one.

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Date: 17/08/07
Title: Chapter 10: Faith

Verrryy Nice!  Liked how you threw that glich in there. Curious to see what happens.  Good luck with school, don't forget to throw us a bone I mean a chapter or two now and then!  You'd feel bad if we suffered irrepairable fan fic deparvation. (wink, wink) Hmm, maybe I should go back to school and take a course in how to spell. 

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Author's Response: Lol.  Thanks, RaChell.  My professors seem pretty laid back, so, hopefully, I won't be bogged down by homework all the time.  :)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/07
Title: Chapter 11: Fathers

The best chapter yet!  You really explored the relationship between them in this one and it's great!  More, More!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/07
Title: Chapter 12: Deception

Very nice and interesting!  Liked the interaction between Miss  Parker and her father.  And her little brother being in the kitchen was quite a surprise!  Looking forward to the next chapter, good luck with school.

But wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  You said "I hope you readers are still out there."   Hmm,  well it looks like we're still here.  (Big Grin!)

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Author's Response: Thanks RaChell.  I'm glad you're still with me.  ;)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/09/07
Retired
Not Tonight by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Maybe that's why he calls so late

Categories: Missing Scenes
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 254
Read Count: 2350
[Report This] Published: 29/07/07 Updated: 29/07/07


Title: Chapter 1: Not Tonight

Very nice!  Love it, and so very possible.  Nice to see your Muse has a trick or two up her sleeve.  Maybe this means hibernation time is over? 

See you have lots of great reveiws Sarah and they are well deserved.  So Thunderchild is promising a new chapter huh?  Well if she doesn't I say we pull out our pointy sticks.  

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Author's Response: Thanks RaChell

Well, seeing as my summer vacation is nearing it's end it would be just like my muse to finally produce something when I no longer have time to tend to her... But I guess we'll just have to wait and see.

 

I'm right behind you Ra', she better give us a new chapter or there's gonna be some serious trouble

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/07
Title: Chapter 1: Not Tonight

Wow, that was a quick response to my review! Since you have so little time left for your summer vacation, does your Muse have anything else for you to post? You know, some people have Muses who work best under stress, others when they drink.

Hey, I agree! Thunderchild needs to be poke if she doesn't get it together and give us another chapter soon! I beleive Monday has come and passed!



Author's Response:

Well...muse has some rambeling and vague ideas, nothing else. Might make a couple more one shots though.

And my Muse works write well under pressure, problem is I don't (little miss responsible keeps tugging at my arm) 

It seems our poking-raid won't be necessary, new chapter is up. Yay!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/07