To whom shall I ship them?
Centre
I love this story. My favorite of yours. The role reversals, power struggles, control/lack of. You infuse so much emotion into your writing. Fear, hate, anger, anticipation, hunger. I can totally see J having this sort of twisted, unorthodox relationship with both twins. Brilliant.
Ooh, I like it!
"A nightmare reminded them" - very, very nice. I hope to read more from you IvyLeaf!
Oh wow! Well, yeah, that would do it! Eddie was a cutie ;-) It's quite plausible that Jarod would seek out a human touch and that Parker would react such a way. Was a great read with a hell of a twist and definitely original. Gotta love that!
Author's Response: *g* well Eddie... not bad I'd say. Glad you liked the piece and consider it plausible
And yeah, I'm all for original stuff and for twists. Often makes a read more of an adventure
Oh wow, that was amazing and the forgotten piano, just so poignant there in a corner. Well done! All of your stories are so well written. You should have more reviews!
Author's Response: thanks for those kind words. I'm glad you liked the story and my fic in general.
As for more reviews. I'm glad for those I get and I'm happy to entertain a few people with what I think up :)
You nailed Parker, you always do. How about a sequel where she beats him up slowly and painfully....maybe she could hit him a few times with the shoes he ruined? :-) Fun fic ICD!
Author's Response: mnnnn, sequel sounds good. if I can think up one. at the moment, no go. busy with my final thesis, but maybe one day I'll get back at this.
Glad you liked. Some fun in between all the earnest day-to-day dealings
You have such an amazing ability to smooth out Lyle's rough edges (he really wants to be good but was custom built to be bad) and the dialogue was brilliant!
Author's Response: *bows* thank you. I'm glad you liked this little piece
Oooh, that was very dark and I like it very much. This is begging for a continuation. Where is Parker? What are Jarod's intentions? What will Lyle do now? Nice!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I'm glad that someone as great as you like it. You're right, there should be a continue but i have no idea yet.
Thanks!
Yes!!! Jarod back in the Centre...right where he belongs! *evil laugh* I believe she does love Mr. Parker, despite the fact that he's an unattentive, evil beast. This was a great read 24!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Ooh, I love the tension and angstiness. Very well written 24!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed What a sad piece, very well written but so sad Ice Angel. That was beautifully, heart wrenchingly PERFECT! I love the repetitive 'where Thomas felt at home' and that ending, wow, it was tied together so nicely. Home...died with him- Simply amazing.
I am so glad you shared this with us and I look forward to reading more from you. A definite 10!
Very nicely done. Lyle, Lyle, Lyle, so bad and so good looking, hmm. I'm looking forward to reading more from you IceAngel.
Author's Response: Thank you Mirage!!! So glad you enjoyed it. Do have something in the making right now that might be to your liking. ;) Not sure when I'll post it however, since there's another ff I'm writing on as well. Wow...seems that I really got into the ff-business.haha.
Who ever wondered how Miss Parker learned to read Thai fluently and what she experienced in her stays abroad?
This is my idea of her having some fun, far away from the clutches of the Centre.
And maybe, just maybe, she has more in common with her twin than everybody expected...
Mhm, terrific introduction to Sarai and excellent first chapter. And how cool is Parker on a such a sweet sportsbike.. Nice! I'm looking forward to the next bits already. Don't make us wait too long for it! ;)
Promise I won't keep you waiting for too long. ;-)
Reviewer: Mirage Signed And the plot thickens! Nice to read a younger, more carefree version of Miss Parker as well as insights on her life before corporate. You've written the story well thus far and I've no doubt you'll continue to do so. Congrats on a great second installment!
Thanks a lot Mirage! :-)
It is kinda difficult at times to write a younger version of MissP that has not quite the character ,yet, as we know it, but still has similarities with the Huntress version. But then it's just so much fun to play around with her. :-D
Am glad the difference in her character is a bit noticeable. :-)
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Nice third chapter too. The power play between the two women is rather interesting. We all know how "in control" Parker is. Good job, Ice Angel.
Author's Response:
Thanksies again! :-)
Your reviews keep me motivated,for my muse has pretty much left me at the moment. :-(
So I do hope some plot will jump into my brain in the upcoming weeks.
And yep,it's aaaall about control when it comes to MissP. Not sure yet whether I'll want her to put it aside a bit for the girl,or not. Well, wherever the whim of my muse will take me I guess. ;-)
Reviewer: Mirage SignedHmm, wonderful job, TheScientist. Very nice insight into Jarod, his thoughts about the Centre and pretending. That last bit was most poignant.
I imagine that these are some of the very thoughts of a young pretender. Heart wrenching.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedAh yes, enjoyed this. "Dear Syd" seems unsuspecting enough but sometimes I feel that he surpasses Raines in the "evil" department. Nice insight into the mind of the conflicted yet incredibly fascninating shrink.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I am glad that you like it. I agree with what you say about Syd. He is my favoirt characte becuase he is so interesting and also conflicted.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Very well written, 24 and I particularly love the way the titles were entwined into the story. Nicely done! Will there be more? (say yes!)
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Ooh, very nice, Ivyleaf, and very well written..
"I've heard you whisper my name." Hmm. Love it.
Thanks a lot, mirage. I don't think I deserve such a praise. I was just in a right mood and I've got an inspiration. I hope one day I'll be as great writer as you.
Anyway thank you very much for reading reviewing.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Aw, 24, that ended on a rather sad note. Poor J can never be a father as long as the Centre is after him. So sad and so incredribly written.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedJarod is slowly loosing his grip on reality...and it's all because of her.
How is he going to solve the mystery that is his huntress?
That was great, Ice Angel! Loved the dream/nightmare, ah, hell, loved all of it. What is Jarod going to do? And how will Parker react? How can that be the end, Ice Angel? You're not as cruel as Steve and Craig, are you?
You must write more!
Muahaha! you're good! Trying to install that sense of guilt...Very Daddy-like. Maybe it'll work. ;-) But maybe I am just as cruel, or as uninspired, as Steve&Craig. ;-p
But seriously: thanks a lot for the review!! Lime always it gives me great pleasure that you enjoyed it. I have some ideas in my head, all fighting for the upper hand. We'll see which one'll win, and like said before: if my muse will let me write them in an appropriate fashion. If I EVER find the time in the upcoming months.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedFirst of all, welcome back, aldysgal. Second, What? What! What do you mean rusty? No you're not. This was wonderfully written, not the first hint of rust anywhere. I love the concern that slips from Parker, very telling. I also love the hints of humor and Parker's sarcarsm, of course. Love that sarcasm. I'm hoping Jarod saves her in time from whoever it is (Alex?). I don't want Parker to die. Ever.
I'm already looking forward to chapter two.
Becaue I hated the way Red rock Jarod was written and what was left out I wanted to fill in some of the missing pieces.
This takes place after Dragon House and before Red Rock.
This story begins with Kyle thinking back on his life while in a old hotel room before he meets up with Lyle and Jarod.
Congratulations and kudos to you, Arls, for exploring this very complex, rather good looking, and yet, under-used character.
The insights you offer into the inner workings of Kyle's mind are all spot on. I felt I was there with the characters observing, up close, the making of a "budding psychopath". Creepy and yet, fascinating.
You provided the back-story, filled in all of the missing pieces and you did it extremely well. I particularly enjoyed the shave, how desensitized Kyle is to the sight of blood and in general. I loved the bumper sticker, haha. "Kill 'em all and let god sort 'em out."
Another nice touch is his blatant indifference: Rednecks, gang members- it's all the same to him. *evil grin* The mental image of "brain dissected on platter" will forever be ingrained upon my brain. Again, it's sorta creepy but that is, essentially, Kyle.
Ah, and the bitchin' tune at the end. Very nice! I would love to read more so please, continue.
Ooh, very, very clever and extremely well written. An in-character Kyle, indeed and he played that woman so brilliantly. You've really captured him and that dangerous charm.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed Wow! I love the history that you gave Kyle- seemed fitting and again, I can't say enough how well you've captured our Kyle. I love him and you did justice to him which, unfortunately, he never received on the show. Thank you for the great chapters and I do hope you will continue this.
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