Penname: Mirage [Contact]

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Member Since: 27/09/08

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To whom shall I ship them?



Affiliation: Centre

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Reviews by Mirage


Summary:

An empty lair sends the gang into unfamiliar territory. The hunters turn game, while Jarod fights for what he thought he'd always have; His mind.



Categories: RPG
Characters: Alex, Broots, Cox, Emily, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 62992
Read Count: 203907
[Report This] Published: 22/05/08 Updated: 31/08/08


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wicked! It's cruel to leave us with that enormous cliff hanger. You wicked, wicked people, haha! I enjoyed this fic immensely and you all seemed to have had a blast writing and it was very well written and action packed. *sighs* Until next time.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/06/11
Rain City by Miss Shannon
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 61]
Summary:

On a rainy evening Miss Parker finds herself embarking on a journey she did not think she would ever undertake. Least of all with Jarod by her side...



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 71614
Read Count: 237912
[Report This] Published: 16/08/08 Updated: 16/06/09


Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

Slap him, kiss him and then make a run for it wearing nothing but a towel. I loved it. 

 

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 15/12/08
Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen

Uh oh, Jarod's in trouble now. So will she take off and leave him behind, (still snoring) call the sweeps in or kick his butt? I can't wait to find out!

Excellent chapter!!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 14/04/09
Summary: This is a response to Thunderbird's third 10 words Challenge. Jarod has been captured...Multiple point of views.

Categories: Character Musing, Challenges
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None
Challenges: #3 10 Word Challenge

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 592
Read Count: 2481
[Report This] Published: 07/10/08 Updated: 07/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Short and to the point.

Nicely done!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 21/10/08
Summary:

"If you change the story, the ending is up to you..."

It's time for Jarod and Miss Parker to choose and not be chosen for.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 16542
Read Count: 17735
[Report This] Published: 22/10/08 Updated: 11/09/10


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am so glad you updated. I read this one a while back and was disappointed to see that it was still unfinished. Welcome back! You're doing an extraordinary job, brilliant with the characters which are just as I remember then and you've thrown in quite a few surprises. I am definitely hooked on this page turner. Keep writing and do update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I am working on the next chapter and plan to have it up within the next couple weeks!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/08/10
The Homecoming by Phoebe
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Jarod and Sydney join forces to find Miss Parker, who has gone missing! 

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46688
Read Count: 46085
[Report This] Published: 27/10/08 Updated: 24/12/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Phoebe! Great story, very well written and I love the mystery..can't wait to see where you're taking us!

 



Author's Response: Thanks, Mirage, for a great review.  It's much appreciated.  I'm having so much fun writing this!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 22/11/08
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

No, not a cliff hanger lol..gotta keep us hungry for more. Fabulous Phoebe. Jarod practically begging only to be rejected once again (I especially loved that) and the shocking twist -bringing in Cox- I did not see that one coming. I'm really enjoying this fic. 

An ending by Christmas? Yay! Can't wait!!!



Author's Response: Thank you, Mirage!  As always, your comments are most appreciated.  As this is my very first fanfic, I can't believe it's gone to ten chapters.  I'm still hoping for the happy ending.  It's been a real challenge, partly because I'm English - and we tend to speak a little differently (please forgive any errors!) but also because it is my first attempt to write!  Like you, there is so much pleasure to be had from writing and in my simple way, I hope I am continuing to keep the characters alive.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 22/12/08
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just returned from the annual holiday headache (I'm never flying again!!) and was thrilled to find the last installment to a wonderfully written story.

Great Job! I thoroughly enjoyed it. The happy ending was *perfect*. Thanks for sharing!

 



Author's Response:

Hi Mirage!  Thank you for staying with the story!  Yes - you will fly again!!! 

I just couldn't say no to a "happy ending" - we were denied it with the TV series and the films - so we have to make up for it!  I think there will be a sequel ....soon!  Thanks again.  I'm looking forward to more stories from YOU!  Thanks again.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 30/12/08
Bruises by 24
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A short Gemini fic

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: The Clone
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 562
Read Count: 1915
[Report This] Published: 11/11/08 Updated: 11/11/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Job 24! A combination of emotions..anger at Raines, pain for that poor little boy, then hope of a brighter future just around the corner for Gemini. Well done.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 11/11/08
Summary:

A short story with Miss Parker pondering her life and the possiblity of Raines being her father.



Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 924
Read Count: 1726
[Report This] Published: 23/11/08 Updated: 23/11/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job anamchara! The way Parker questions her mother in this story is excellent. "How could momma not tell me..?"

Loved it.  



Author's Response:

Thanks Mirage!

 Glad you enjoyed it! 

 I think Miss Parker has a right to ask herself why her mother didn't tell her who her real father is. Of course, perhaps Catherine thought her daughter was too young. Who knows?

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 25/11/08
How Could I Not by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: What Sydney might have been thinking in the sim in A Virus Among Us. A very short story.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 333
Read Count: 1198
[Report This] Published: 29/05/09 Updated: 29/05/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brilliant little piece 24. Poor Sydney is torn between his career and his emotions and the struggle to suppress those emotions. It's all so complex but he does love Jarod.

Great story!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/05/09
Summary:

Looking back, he figures it was all inevitable anyway. The Centre had to fall some day. Life still goes on. (Mercifully.) The Pretender/House MD crossover, Broots/Cuddy.



Categories: Crossovers, Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2023
Read Count: 2016
[Report This] Published: 29/05/09 Updated: 29/05/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brilliant piece and perfectly written chopsticks. I'm not extremely familiar with House (I don't watch television- shame on me!) but I know enough about the show to know that you did an incredible job.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/05/09
Tyger Tyger! by middleman
Rated: PG starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The Centre is a jungle where only the fittest survive...

Categories: Anything/Miscellaneous
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 104
Read Count: 1412
[Report This] Published: 14/06/09 Updated: 14/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice. Raines basking in all his sinister glory..and the others know damn well that he's up to something but they're powerless to stop it. *evil laugh*

And the title...Tyger Tyger as in 'The Tyger' from Songs of Experience?

 



Author's Response: Yes, William Blake and his little poem about the presence of evil in the world... Thanks for reviewing and rating this very short piece, mirage, you're a star!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/06/09
Too Much by middleman
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

My first GWGW piece...



Categories: Challenges
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 101
Read Count: 1511
[Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 15/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, I love the inner turmoil and just how torn he is. Laconic yet brilliant. As always middleman!

Author's Response: *bows* thank you very much mirage, glad you like it!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/09
After Nia by Haiza Tyri
Rated: PG 13 starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A drabble of Jarod's thoughts about Nia during "Ranger Jarod."

Categories: Character Musing, Love, Season 1
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: Episode Drabbles
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 100
Read Count: 2337
[Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 15/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like! He does seem to carry quite a load, not just his burdens but those of the people he encounters.

"but this one he could bear"

Nice read Christy!

 



Author's Response: Thanks, Mirage!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/06/09
Into Thin Air by Miss Shannon
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary: (Sequel to Vanished) Five years after the fall of the Centre, Miss Parker and Jarod have moved on with their lives but are reminded of past events when tragedy strikes again.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84754
Read Count: 154222
[Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 28/01/11


Title: Chapter 6: Part Six

NO! Wow, you know how to leave us hanging don't you? Another well written chapter, like all the others of course. 

Brilliant as always Miss Shannon and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/07/09
Title: Chapter 17: Part Seventeen

Another outstanding chapter! You continue increasing the intensity and suspense - something you have quite a flair for- AND then you leave us hanging as the mystery unravels. Cruel you. I anxiously await look forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/08/10
Flume by Fe
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary: The pathways we must follow can seem both natural and not...especially when the floodgates open.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 23030
Read Count: 10379
[Report This] Published: 06/07/09 Updated: 03/11/09


Title: Chapter 1: Fire

Fantastic chapter Fe! The story is begging to be continued. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks Mirage! Really appreciate you taking the time to read and review :)

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 06/07/09
Title: Chapter 1: Fire

Argh! (yes argh) I hate cliff hangers! This was another fantatic chapter Fe. I simply can't wait to read more...and soon.

Author's Response: Haha thanks Mirage, I couldn't resist a good cliff hanger! Working on the next chapter now, should be ready to post very soon...

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 17/07/09
Title: Chapter 3: Froid

Oh wow! Great chapter Fe. My only complaint is that the chapters are too darn short. Great flow, atmosphere...just perfect.

And I love the chapter end note...hehe. 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/08/09
Title: Chapter 4: Found

Lovely chapter Fe. Don't stop now. I'm already looking forward to the next bit.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 22/09/09
Title: Chapter 1: Fire

Brilliant Fe, as always. The flow, the atmosphere, the fight, (oh how I love to see P and J fight, love it!) even the ending is perfect. Every chapter has been a real pleasure to read and I hope you will write many more fics. (Please!!!)

 

 

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/11/09
A normal life by Haiza Tyri
Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Miss Parker pondering her life, thanks to Broots; a drabble during "Crash."

Categories: Confessions, Season 2, Character Musing
Characters: Broots, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: Episode Drabbles
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 100
Read Count: 2366
[Report This] Published: 27/07/09 Updated: 27/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And maybe someday she'll have that peace.

Wonderful piece Christy.



Author's Response: Thanks, Mirage.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 29/07/09
Summary: A hostage tries to figure out who Jarod and Miss Parker are. A drabble set after "Bank."

Categories: Anything/Miscellaneous, Season 2, Character Musing
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: Episode Drabbles
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 101
Read Count: 1176
[Report This] Published: 03/08/09 Updated: 03/08/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this Christy. The hostages had to wonder about the pair - Parker carrying a gun, Jarod snapping into doctor mode, Parker assisting. The two ripping into each other - in the midst of hostage situation of all places. I think this piece provides some nice insight into the thoughts of the hostages. Brilliant.



Author's Response: Thanks, Mirage. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/09
Cause and Effect by icd
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The death of a loved one can affect people in different ways

Categories: Challenges, Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Mr Raines
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 273
Read Count: 2322
[Report This] Published: 17/09/09 Updated: 17/09/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, so nice, so well written and just like Raines- creepy guy that he is.

Author's Response: hee hee. yes, I don't dive into his brain often. such a scary place ;)

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/10