Just a fan of The Pretender who has recently started fooling around with fan fics when I am bored.
Fav. characters on the show: Kyle. I firmly believe TP could have done so much with him. Loved how he was conflicted and complex. Jarod's probably by second fav. followed by Broots.
Pretender
This is one of my fav. pretender fics. Read it about a year ago on another site and loved it.
Author's Response: Must have been Fanfic.net or some such place. I do have it posted several places. I'm really glad you like it so much.
Twisted. I normally hate stories that involve rape but I actually liked this one. Proves that any relationship J/MP have would be an unhealthy one.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! And yes I too think their relationship would be a bit 'different'.
So nice to hear from you! And I have missed your stories.
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedReading your story for the first time. For some reason I thought I already read this but apparently not as its all new to me... It's really good so far. I've more chapters to go...
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedHey this is cool. Read the prequel long time ago. Loved it. Didn't know about this one. Love Kyle fics. Good job!
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedCool idea. Always thought something was up with the parents. They're no saints like Jarod thinks. Good work!
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedI love this story. Read it awhile back on another site. Are you going to continue it? Hope so.
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedInteresting. Saw this series on another site and thought i read 'em all but the last couple chapters were new to me. I really like how you have Jarod, Kyle teaming up. Are you still writing? Hope for a full story with these two...
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedCute but short. I think I'd like it longer, and maybe more interraction of Parker with other members of Jarod's family. Still, it's pretty good.
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedThis sounds interesting. Want more please. What's this mysterious gathering for between Kyle and Parker? Are you still writing?
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedTP with The Simpsons. Never saw that coming. Not bad though. Still weird to picture Jarod as a cartoon.
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedThat's an exciting story! :0)
Author's Response:
Yay, i work endlessy to pump out intricate and long chapters to keep the excitement up, labouring over every paragraph.
Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Hey this is pretty good. I like Zoe in this and that's saying a lot because I didn't like her in the show. Great portrayal of her, and the confrontation of her and Jarod at the end...seemed just how Jarod would react.
Author's Response: Thanks Starbits! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. You made my day. :)
Really good story. Always wondered (if the show continued) if they'd bring Nia back into the picture. Good job.
Reviewer: Starbits7 SignedEwwww! Omg I did NOT expect this. :0) I so hate reading incestous stories...and I'm not a fan of Slash either...but this had me laughing just b/c i couldn't picture the characters doing this. Well writen though.
Author's Response: Heh, oh yeah. On the likeliness scale I think pregnant teenage Miss Parker who doesn't remember first sexual encounter is way higher up the believeability scale than this. Mind you, I think 99.9% of things are more believable than this idea. I was dared! Not my fault! Heh. I can't remember if this has warnings on it... I'll check that. Thanks though :)
Birth of a genius.
Good job. I like this story a lot so far.
Pretty good. Keep it up. I've only seen this show a couple times but it was interesting. Really liked the episode with Daniel Germaine (Kyle from TP).
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. (The Daniel Germaine episode was one of the episodes from Season 2 that I enjoyed...or maybe I just really liked seeing Jealous Ian. ;) )
