Penname: Starbits7 [Contact]

Real name: Allie H.

Member Since: 15/02/07

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Just a fan of The Pretender who has recently started fooling around with fan fics when I am bored.

Fav. characters on the show:  Kyle.  I firmly believe TP could have done so much with him.  Loved how he was conflicted and complex.  Jarod's probably by second fav. followed by Broots.



Affiliation: Pretender

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Reviews by Starbits7


Summary: Kyle tells Jarod in Red Rock Jarod, he made his way to the road and caught a ride out after the van exploded. I thought it would be cool to write something small to fill in that time... just a little.

In this part Kyle meets a woman who is willing to help him.

Categories: Season 2
Characters: Kyle, Original Character, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11069
Read Count: 4642
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of my fav. pretender fics.  Read it about a year ago on another site and loved it.

Author's Response: Must have been Fanfic.net or some such place. I do have it posted several places. I'm really glad you like it so much.

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 04/03/07
Summary: A twisted and humorous tale of unresolved issues, questions and answers. And sweet revenge as Miss Parker and Jarod settle unfinished business. Rape and Slash are more implied....nothing what should keep you from reading... more a light warning!

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6759
Read Count: 1233
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: one

Twisted.  I normally hate stories that involve rape but I actually liked this one. Proves that any relationship J/MP have would be an unhealthy one.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  And yes I too think their relationship would be a bit 'different'. 

So nice to hear from you!  And I have missed your stories. 

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 24/06/07
Alicin Wonderland by lizz
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Raines approaches Sydney with a 'problem' subject from his research team. Unknowingly, the young person has crossed paths with Jarod in the recent past and is destined to meet him face to face. Jarod has been seeking this person's identity on his own.

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Alex, Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Kyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Other Centre Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45911
Read Count: 18211
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 12: Part 12: River of Dreams

Reading your story for the first time. For some reason I thought I already read this but apparently not as its all new to me... It's really good so far.  I've more chapters to go...

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 20/03/08
Life remains by Dara
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A sequel to Remains of Life





Categories: Season 4
Characters: Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9902
Read Count: 1538
[Report This] Published: 16/05/05 Updated: 16/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Life remains

Hey this is cool.  Read the prequel long time ago. Loved it. Didn't know about this one.  Love Kyle fics.  Good job!

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 03/03/07
Sold by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: I wondered why Major Charles and Margaret never heard Jarod cry out and knock over his lunch box. This is why.





Categories: Prequel
Characters: Jarod's Family
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 631
Read Count: 750
[Report This] Published: 22/05/05 Updated: 22/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Sold

Cool idea.  Always thought something was up with the parents. They're no saints like Jarod thinks.  Good work!

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 04/03/07
Summary: In the darkness of his existence there was a glimmer of hope.

Categories: Season 4
Characters: Kyle, Mr Raines, Original Character, Other Centre Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10444
Read Count: 1020
[Report This] Published: 21/06/05 Updated: 21/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Dragon House

I love this story. Read it awhile back on another site.  Are you going to continue it? Hope so.

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 21/02/07
Summary: Jarod is on a ship trying to save whales. When Miss Parker arrives to soon to catch him, he relizes something.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Kyle, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sydney, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 21780
Read Count: 8004
[Report This] Published: 12/08/05 Updated: 12/08/05


Title: Chapter 8: Part 8 Crash & Buern

Interesting. Saw this series on another site and thought i read 'em all but the last couple chapters were new to me.  I really like how you have Jarod, Kyle teaming up.  Are you still writing? Hope for a full story with these two...

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 02/03/07
Summary: Parker gets thrown into a totally different yet similar life after someone breaks into her house.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Ethan, Jarod, Kyle, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3292
Read Count: 1401
[Report This] Published: 29/08/05 Updated: 29/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Parker's Christmas

Cute but short. I think I'd like it longer, and maybe more interraction of Parker with other members of Jarod's family.  Still, it's pretty good.

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 04/03/07
Summary: Miss Parker finds that she may really be alone in her life

Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Kyle, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1880
Read Count: 3609
[Report This] Published: 27/09/05 Updated: 27/09/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

This sounds interesting.  Want more please.  What's this mysterious gathering for between Kyle and Parker?  Are you still writing?

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 02/03/07
Jarod Simpson by archangel
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jarod stops by the Springfield to check on their nuclear plant's 'glowing' safety record...

Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 9656
Read Count: 1797
[Report This] Published: 28/02/06 Updated: 28/02/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

TP with The Simpsons. Never saw that coming. Not bad though. Still weird to picture Jarod as a cartoon.

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 16/02/07
A test story by jacs
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 290]
Summary: jsut testing to see if it works...

Categories: Poetry
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 364
Read Count: 33195
[Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 03/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's an exciting story! :0)

Author's Response:

Yay, i work endlessy to pump out intricate and long chapters to keep the excitement up, labouring over every paragraph.

 

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 18/03/07
Summary: After crash landing the plane returning from Carthis, Jarod finds himself in Zoe's arms as he comtemplates his feelings for Miss Parker. Inspired by "Test Story" by Jacs, this story was written exclusively for the Jarod/Miss Parker 'shippers. Despite what you might think from the above description, it will not disappoint.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Zoe
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1642
Read Count: 1933
[Report This] Published: 26/01/07 Updated: 26/01/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey this is pretty good.  I like Zoe in this and that's saying a lot because I didn't like her in the show.  Great portrayal of her, and the confrontation of her and Jarod at the end...seemed just how Jarod would react.

Author's Response: Thanks Starbits!  I'm so happy you enjoyed it.  You made my day.  :)

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 20/02/07
Legacy by Julie Fortune
Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Jarod's first lover has disappeared, and Miss Parker has reason to believe that she's been taken for a special Centre project ... one with hideous personal implications for Jarod.  How far will she go to help him stop the experiments?

Categories: Season 1
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9817
Read Count: 4893
[Report This] Published: 09/02/07 Updated: 09/02/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really good story.  Always wondered (if the show continued) if they'd bring Nia back into the picture.  Good job.

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 16/02/07
Summary: Title tells it's own story :-)

Categories: Stories
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 735
Read Count: 1739
[Report This] Published: 24/02/07 Updated: 24/02/07


Title: Chapter 1: -

Very cute.

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 01/03/07
Cicatrix by Eveylin
Rated: PG 13 starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: written for the 'Air Vents' challenge on pretender100

Categories: Air Vents
Characters: Jarod, Kyle, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Slash
Challenges: Drabble #50 Air Vents

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 214
Read Count: 1406
[Report This] Published: 07/03/07 Updated: 07/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ewwww!  Omg I did NOT expect this.  :0)  I so hate reading incestous stories...and I'm not a fan of Slash either...but this had me laughing just b/c i couldn't picture the characters doing this.  Well writen though.

Author's Response: Heh, oh yeah. On the likeliness scale I think pregnant teenage Miss Parker who doesn't remember first sexual encounter is way higher up the believeability scale than this. Mind you, I think 99.9% of things are more believable than this idea. I was dared! Not my fault! Heh. I can't remember if this has warnings on it... I'll check that. Thanks though :)

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 09/03/07
Prodigy: Genesis by MP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Birth of a genius.



Categories: Prequel
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: Prodigy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3038
Read Count: 1690
[Report This] Published: 09/11/07 Updated: 09/11/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good job. I like this story a lot so far. 



Author's Response: Thanks!  This series is a lot of fun, so it's good to see that people are enjoying reading it too.  There's more in the works, but it'll have to take a back seat to other projects like developing "Flight of Memory" and not flunking out of uni.

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 11/11/07
Summary: NYPD homicide detective Sara Pezzini gets a case with ties to Jarod & Miss Parker...and in the world of the Witchblade, there are no coincidences.

Categories: Crossovers, Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Jarod's Family, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sam
Classifications: Genres: General, Supernatural
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 23553
Read Count: 12014
[Report This] Published: 09/03/08 Updated: 05/10/08


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Widening Gyre (Part 1)

Pretty good. Keep it up.  I've only seen this show a couple times but it was interesting. Really liked the episode with Daniel Germaine (Kyle from TP). 

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you like it.  (The Daniel Germaine episode was one of the episodes from Season 2 that I enjoyed...or maybe I just really liked seeing Jealous Ian. ;) )

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed
Date: 16/03/08