Characters: Jarod, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 4553
Read Count: 3339
Brilliant. Just plain Brilliant. Thanks for an amazing read.Reviewer: whashaza Signed
whoa....okaaay, didn't expect that ending. Hmmm, interesting. Please don't wait so long before updating again. Can't wait to read more.Reviewer: whashaza Signed
okay, interesting ending. bit abrupt, but otherwise good. ;-)Reviewer: whashaza Signed
We all just want some ANSWERS.
"I run. You chase. What if... we didn't?"
hmmmm, so what was injected into MP? And what was on the disc that Angelo gave to Jarod?
Yay on the update. Bout time. ;-)
Looking forward to more, hopefully soon.Reviewer: whashaza Signed
wow. what a chapter. I really felt for Jarod. You captured the scene incredibly well and gave a very honest look into something so horrible to imagine. Well done!
Can't wait to see how Jarod will get out of this one and how he'll recover from it. Brilliant chapter.
yay, an update. ;-) Verrry good, as Sydney would say. You managed to capture Jarod's angst and then final acceptance really well. The conflict of MP and Sydney was also clear to see. Loved the chapter. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks, whashaza! I'll try not to disappoint. I know this is the millionth time I've said this, but updates really should be more frequent from here on out.
wow, great chapter. poor Jarod, not even a chance. Bad MP. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yep, you pretty much summed up this chapter. Thanks for the kind words. Give me a couple minutes and I should have more for you.
wow. what a chapter. I coudn't stop reading. And now I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't let us wait too long.
Reviewer: whashaza Signed
Jarod is suffering from Ennui and during a momentary lapse of concentration is caught by the Centre, who now have their sights set on reclaiming Gemini...
Good start. Almost missed seeing a new writer and story. hehehe, but I liked it. Don't think you need to give a glossary afterwards. Generally, if I don't understand context or word, I go look it up on google. But then again, I'm the nerdy type too, so others might not. But don't worry bout it, generally people will follow the gist of what you mean. Please continue. Looking forward to see where you'll take this.
It’s funny that you mention it, because I’ve been a long time reader but I’ve always been too scared to write anything of my own…
Anyway, thanks a bunch for the review, I’m most appreciative!
Yay! Another boarder-line obsessive compulsive-I’m a google define: girl myself : ) and I wasn’t really intending to do a glossary each chapter, just hoped to clarify a few references so hopefully it wasn’t too overkill for you (A friend of mine is continually bugging me about the strange references I make so I figured I’d get everyone on the same page from the start)...
Anyway, thanks again for your time whashaza, constructive criticism is always the best kind!! Hoping to post some more soon.Reviewer: whashaza Signed
Hey, great chapter. Even better than the first one. Loved it. You captured the characters well. Looking forward to more.
Thanks again whashaza : ) it's really great to get two reviews from somebody!!
...And here was I, paranoid that everyone would think that I butchered the characters...
Thanks for the reviews. You're awesome!
Reviewer: whashaza Signed
They probably had a puppy...
That was brilliantly funny....and something Parker would think. lol
Thanks for a great chapter. A nice long one and well written. I liked it. Looking forward to more.
Thanks again whashazza!
I'm glad you liked that line, it was something I could imagine her thinking given the context...
Thanks again for another great review, I'm about to post the next chapter and with a bit of luck, hopefully you'll like that too!Reviewer: whashaza Signed
hmmmm, interesting. Good chapter, good flow of words and it reads well. Hope the exams go well and looking forward to more. As for character death - major or minor?
Exams are finally done (yay!) and I'm hoping to update tomorrow.
As for the character death, I'm WAY too much of a novice to pull off anything big... don't want to say too much but it's minor character with what I'm hoping are reasonable consequences...
Thanks for the review!Reviewer: whashaza Signed
lol, I hate riddles. :-( Bad you.!!
But, have to say, great chapter. Love the way you set it out. Well done. Looking forward to more. Soon, please.
Thanks as always whashaza!!
I really love hearing from you and I do have to admit that I love to tease ; p
I'm updating today so hopefully you'll enjoy this next installment!Reviewer: whashaza Signed
wow, great chapter. Loved it. *goes of to read more about Huntington's*
so, what has MP planned, and what photo's had Jarod in actual fact send to her? Poor Jarod.
*impatiently waits for more to this well-thought out story*
Thanks so much yet again whashaza!
I always love getting your reviews and am quite pleased that I sparked your interest on Huntington's lol!
As for answering your questions, I'm afraid you'll have to wait and see... Though I'm updating today so hopefully I can feed your haste with the next installment!
Thanks as always!!!
JessReviewer: whashaza Signed
Hehhehe, another new possibilty and so Parker... I will never tell.
Great chapter. So, who's this guy that Broots is hiding away with? And what was the secret meeting about?
Looking forward to more, as usual.
Much thanks whashaza!
And I'm glad you liked it too- i like that Parker's name is a point of contention and is never revealed (though I must say some of the other writers have come up with some great possibilities!)
And well, taking a line from Parker's book- I'll never tell either... or maybe I will, but you might have to wait just a tad bit longer to see who it is lol.
Hope you enjoy today's offering!
Thanks again, JessReviewer: whashaza Signed
What Lyle forgot was that Sam's her sweeper and not his. ;-)
How long will she be able to keep her 6 ft situation under control? lol. And what is Mr Parker planning?
Looking forward to more. Hopefully soon.
It's always such a pleasure to read your reviews [nowhere near how much fun it is to read your work though ;)] and to know that you're looking forward to more of this little piece is such a buzz and great motivation too!
Thanks so much Whashaza!Reviewer: whashaza Signed
Brilliant. Love the intrique. Hoping to read more about Jarod soon. And I'm wondering where Jay's hiding. And Sydney for that matter. ;-) Thanks for a good read.
Author's Response: :) Jarod will be back in chapter 10 and you'll certainly find out all about Jay and Sydney too!! Thanks for always taking the time to review, its most, most, most appreciated!
An empty lair sends the gang into unfamiliar territory. The hunters turn game, while Jarod fights for what he thought he'd always have; His mind.
hey, good one, Sarah. Here I thought you'd only post by the weekend. ;-)
The colors are looking good. And you got the summary right. lol Till later...
Glad you like the colors *cough* (cause unless you absolutely hate it you're all stuck with them) *cough*. Is the air dry here or is it just me? *g*
And about the summary... yeah, it's not perfect, but at least I managed to make it sound like the title has something to do with the story, which I'm rather proud of it.
- ManolineReviewer: whashaza Signed
just have to say that katie does the best MP. ;-) I love reading her barbs again. Well done to both Jacci and Katie on their whole scene...brilliant.
Author's Response: Oh so agreed. Katie is great at balancing the different aspects of Parker's persona and Jacs is great at making Cox just the right amount of creepy. And your Alex/Lyle ain't too shabby either ;)
- ManolineReviewer: whashaza Signed
heheheheh. Guess Jarod learned that not everything is always as they seem. At least it wasn't MP that found him. lol
Good to read from you again. Hope you'll give us another story again. ;-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I need to get over and check out your stories, I've been MIA for several months and need to play catch up.
Thank you again, I truly appreiciate it. :)
RaChellReviewer: whashaza Signed
Nice. Liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you did!
Very interesting story so far. Looking forward to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review. I'm so glad you are enjoying this. I'm having so much fun writing it.
Great chapter. Smooth and easy reading. And I want more.
Author's Response: Hey Whashaza! ... and so you shall have more!! Very soon! Chapter 6 will be up shortly. So glad you are staying with me on this epic!
Great story so far. Lyle really is insane. And bad luck for MP and Jarod that he chose that moment to go check on her. Here's hoping for more, soon. ;-)
Author's Response: Hey Whashaza ! Thanks for staying with the story - so glad you enjoyed chapter 6. I like to think chapter 7 is even better - but I will let you be the judge (my fingers are crossed!!!) Thanks again.
Great little piece again. It was good, the way you potrayed Gemini and his insight into who the man in the picture really is. Thanks for a good read.
...and thank you for reviewing, whashaza! It's always good to know that a fic is appreciated...Reviewer: whashaza Signed