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A test story by jacs
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: jsut testing to see if it works...

Categories: Poetry
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 364
Read Count: 179493
[Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 03/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh dear.

This story really does quite manage to touch the unsuspecting heart, and to move it to great depths of feeling. It is like one did not know what to true poetry meant, and upon reading the words "hey hey" one awakens to a new world, filled with meaning and hope.

It truly invokes the characters of the Pretender on an entirely new level. Certainly it is one of the most poignant portrayals out there of their never-ending plight 

I'm all moved, and such. Good thing I have that extra-large box of Kleenex nearby. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much Carha. I hope it didnt upset you too much, i would hate to be the cause of any distress.

The next chapter is coming, although i doubt i will be able to maintian that level of intenstity, perhaps a lighter one this time, a break for your kleenex.

Reviewer: carha Signed
Date: 22/01/07
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

My tears have now dried to salty tracks upon my cheeks, but nevertheless, I am ever the most deeply moved, by the uh, moving depths.

"It isn't easy."

What emotion lies behind these few simple words, what anguish, what pain. The suffering of ages packed into three words.

And at the same time, they speak of experience - it isn't easy, but it can be done. Because it has  to be done. Hope and light shine through, once again.

 The Kleenex rests untouched this time. But not for want of feeling, merely, because these few words comfort me so greatly, that now I'm merely sniffling slightly, and not requiring the help of the Kleenex. Yay.



Author's Response: I am glad you got through that gruelling emotional read without too much distress this time. I am thinking of going for a lighter chapter, we all need a break from the emotional rollercoaster, me especially.

Reviewer: carha Signed
Date: 24/01/07