A last resort
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 4719
Cleaning up SIS and the mess Raines and Sydney made since 1993 when I graduated from University.
I'm part British, part Italian, a full-time editor with two magazines and former journalist with a newspaper.
I've won several web awards and citations including fanfic in 1999 and 2001.
I've been a fan of TP since 1998.
I have beta read for hundreds of authors.
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A last resort
Wow, you're updating quickly and each chapter is crisp, professional, beautifully plotted and you don't let the quality writing interfere with the story telling. The characters are so real and true to the ones I know and love that I just can't even...I think I'm gonna cry ๐ญ. Thank you for doing justice to the series, the characters..and my namesake.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker SignedThat's definitely Lyle's work and oh so much horror and sorrow. No wonder Broots is losing it. I love that Jarod wants to be explosive ๐งจ with it! Oh my God are Jarod and Miss Parker AKA me finally gonna do a thing together to bring down the baddie?? !!!! Bank was as close as we ever got to seeing that but I want to see it with snacks ..some new thing Jarod hasn't tried that Miss Parker also hasn't tried...??!! And sex?? They should do that too! More?! I'm so excited ๐!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker SignedWoot Jarod bringing the tough love scolding her when she says she doesn't know omg I love that! I love Parker taking pancake with her finger and ๐ mmmbutter. I like my pancakes that way too. You really capture their characters and attitudes, behavior..all of it. BRAVO!!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker SignedThis! This is gotdam brilliant. Jarod totally went all Jarod for a sec on Parker. I think I would've caved to him. So perfect! More please?!!!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker SignedPart six of The Return series.
Never stop writing and sharing!!!! If you do I'll break out the whips.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker SignedThis scribblet follows Asphyxia.
There must be more. Now! Don't make me break out the whip! Seriously tho you've got me intrigued, you know the characters. I can't get enough!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed