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Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4204
18 years old French/Dutch fan!
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Miss Parker makes an appearance.. and what a hell of an appearance it is. She's perfect, huh! She write them so well. Too well maybe? You really have a knack for characterisations, setting up the scene, and maintaining my excitement all throughout the story. Needless to say I want more. Now. Write young lady!
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch SignedOh, ok you have 3 chapters up. I thought there were only 2. This is exquisite like everything you write. Miuna is only a guest star but I hope you will go back and fill in more through Jarod's mourning process and memories. She's a stella original character and she was seriously honest. People will hate on refugees and anyone who doesn't look, live, worship, and love like them. Truth hurts but it's the truth and needs to be told.
Mind you, young lady, I still want more. Now. *cracks whip* Or else.
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch SignedFinished business.
DO me a favor and NEVER stop writing. Uhhh GoDDD I love this.
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch SignedPart six of The Return series.
Mirage!!! I had to see if there were any updates to help get me thru the Thanksgiving crap and you're here!! Do you this on purpose? Post something for those who might be alone or depressed during the big days?? It seems you do. I've been reading for a couple of days, reading back through this earlier posts and chapters..I love this RETURN!!
Please post more!!
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed