"Kainda is different" haunting words from Angelo. Poor gilr. Sydney and his toys... :(
Reviewer: Leslie SignedThe truth is rare inside the Centre but Lyle and Miss Parker seem to be honest with each other so there's that. I'm enjoying this.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedCox gives me the willies. Still you've done a good job with this and it's not so much twincest that I can't enjoy the story. I'm so curious about these originals. I like them.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedOMG! Getting really juicy now. Kainda must be another pretender? I could sleep or could read another chapter. Easy decision.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedOMG. I don't know what to say. Cox is so .... nice to the girl. I like that. Very different but I like twists. Kainda is wise beyond her years. I thought something worse was going to happen. Glad it didn't. :)
Reviewer: Leslie SignedNice long chapter this one was. Thank you for it.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedStupid Raines. He's such an evil baddie.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedI was wondering if Jarod would show up and there he is lol. Cox seems to have changed but Jarod will never believe that.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedI"m trying to figure out where this going can't click next fast enough. Dont' know if I like their idea of discipline...they might be punishment and abuse...
Reviewer: Leslie SignedOoooh I knew Jarod was going to be pissed. Damn damn. Love it.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedThe chapters are getting shorter or I'm reading way too fast? That letter was telling. I want to know what comes next and what is Jarod going to do!!
Reviewer: Leslie SignedI dont' think Jarod knows about Lyle and Miss Parker and what they are doing with each? I hope Lyle comes through this without hurting Miss Parker. He'll feel so bad if he hurts her.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedNice sex scene. Lots of things happening here. I wonder if Miss Parker will just go ahead and kill old Raines. lol He's outliving his usefulness and is making her life hard.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedPoor Broots is probably about to wet himself the way things are going lol. I have a feeling Jarod is going to do somethign crazy. But I like crazy Jarod. lol. I like this Lyle too.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedOh God Jarod is gonna flip when he finds out LYle is sexing up Miss Parker. I can imagine how confused he is what the video. Oh boy this is getting so juicy.
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It's so nice how comfortable Miss Parker is with Lyle. I guess she would open to a relationship with any of the red files. They are LIKE her, all suffered the same. It's not far fetched really.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedReally enjoyed the way MIss Parker helped LYle calm down and relax. Still can't wait for Jarod's flipping out or whatever reaction he has but I think flipping out is plausible.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedNIce to see Sydney get protective of Miss Parker but it seems uncalled for but it also seems appropriate. It is Lyle. Allot of tension. Jarod could show up now and add to it. I wonder when he'll be coming along. Karina isn't trustworhty it seems.
Reviewer: Leslie SignedPoor Kainda. I like how she protected her secrets from Cox.. who seems nice. :) So where is the pretenderforsaken data annex you noted? The page won't load? I'm interested in reading any fics there too.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed I doubt Sydney can keep Jarod at bay when he gets nosy so yea agreed. I want to read more and know how it ends and I want to know what Jarod has to say about LYle and Miss Parker having sex and being together. He's going to react. I'm so curious. OH SYdney catching Lyle and miss Parker fighting...lol. Busted. I'd like to read the rest. I really enjoyed it.
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In 2002, the corporation known as the Centre was infiltrated by various law enforcement agencies that acted in a synchronized global effort to eradicate the organization. And then one day, Jarod's huntress ran away.
Oh. My. Godd. Mirage. I have always wanted to see Jarod and Miss Parker at a masquerade and I always wanted him to know it was her and trick her into dancing with him. Look what you've done to me! Don't get me wrong here now because I LOVE Circles of Hell but this is bloody fantastic. I know that Jarod can go completely dark and do all those things and the story could go that way and is plausible but OMG! This. He's dark but still himself. I can say after reading every story on this site that THIS is the stand out favorite and the way you write them and the way he is with her and what do you mean there are typos? There is nothing wrong with this story. It's perfect so far. Don't rewrite this. Please god don't rewrite this. Let me finish the other 13 chaps and print it out and THEN you can have your way with the delete button. Til then leave it as is. It's raw and I love it. Love how cop-ish Jarod is. Sooo sexy. He's fine in a suit even an FBI suit. Just like watching the show on tnt and they are always in character when you write them. I'm fifteen years old again and I need my fruitloops while I read lol. I used to totally eat cereal and watch tp and drool milk down my chin lol. Now I'm clickign next and Jarod better still be alive lol.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed Lookie here honey the chapters can go on and on forever and I won't care a bit because you write beautifully. Wait. No cliffhangers? Why not? Lol no I'm kidding. Thank you. The last one was a doozey. I'm glad I didn't have to wait a week or two or months or however long it took for you to update to see if Jarod lived. That was probably painful. I was hoping they were going to have sex on that beautiful bed you described. With the ropes maybe... Jarod with the ropes. OH. MY. God. Mirage. He does tie her up a time or 2 on the show and in the keys it didn't look so good. The rope placement across her chest. Looked painful. BUT Hell the way he goes into detail to describe the different marks left by different types of restraint and gag lol. What a devil. Did you study Michael allot? It seems like you did. You know his Jarod mannerisms. It's weird how well you write these characters. The best part of this chapter is that MP ran to help Jarod. You showed us that she cares about him. You the author who had Miss Parker kiss Jarod with pistchio laced lips and kill him. lol. Admit it Jarod is hot. Michael is so hot!!! Admit it. Go on u know u want 2. lol.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed You are freaking brilliant. You have a great sense of humor. Talking about Miss Parker's eye and the injuries she had
"It should be examined. There could be damage to the orbital floor."
"The impact was lower."
A fraction north, and she'd be seeing two of Jarod - without the presence of his clone.
"
lol. Nicely done. Miss Parker is strong here and doesn't need Jarod. You don't make her the damsel in distress. Jarod is so used to playing the hero and the doctor. He wants to play all the roles and she won't let him. The struggle is so fun to watch. You do right by the show and the characters. Can't believe I didn't read this sooner.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed Damn. He entraps her, gets her to admit something knowing that it's the wrong thing. Oh GOD. You build up the intrigue and I just want all the answers now. Ahhhhh. I love it. So much suspense and action. I just can't enuff.
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