I need more now. please!!

Twenty years without a go to hell and now you want my help..like everyone else.... ohooh he's seething I love it! You've exquisitely and perfectly captured the characters and the heart, soul, and spirit of the series. I crave more! Please update everything!

Every time I think you can't get possibly get better at writing you get better at writing, every chapter is more poignant and powerful than the ones before. I enjoyed this more than I can express. I just want to hug you..and if we ever meet I hope I can give you a fandomily sister from other mister hug...with your permission. I can't tell from here if you're a huggy person. I think you are. You're always so kind to me when I review and email you. Thank you for that and for writing and sharing with us. I am eternally grateful to Jacci for creating this space and to Jacci and all fanfic authors. You all keep the dream alive!! Please keep on keeping the fandom alive.

Bravo! This is eloquent and succinct. What you've accomplished here is phenomenal because you not only show us the anguish of Parker's post trauma mind trying to figure out what is happening to her you also inform the reader in detail what is happening to her. We see her confusion and we learn that Jarod was doing CPR, breathing for her, and begging her to wake up. We also see that the hospital employees are perplexed too. This was beautifully illustrated Mirage. Even if I hadn't read Asphyxia I'd understand what is happening and make inferences but I love Asphyxia too and this is the perfect follow up. I want more! Please!