Girl you kill me everytime. I like Pretender Steve and Craig's novels but I LOVE your writing and it makes me feel torn and a little guilty like I'm turning my back on their work. BUT I can't stop reading you. You are good, you are the real deal and you know the characters. You don't have to use silly names and gimmicks either. It's good quality writing of Pretender caliber. I want what I saw on TV, what I have on dvd. I want Michael, Andrea, Jon, Patrick and that's what you give me. You know what this fan wants! I guess I'm not happy with the new direction. If you would get hired by Steve and Craig I wouldn't have to feel guilty. Get hired Mirage. I want you to know that I'm trying to do what you ask and not share you. I honestly never wanted to make you feel uncomfortable. Sharing is just a way of saying hey this is delicious and offering a bite to my friends. Oh GOD Pleazze update soon.

A new story and a new chapter! You're on a roll and I hope you'll keep going. Are you ready to be done writing? Don't finish too soon. I could read you forever and I want to. I love your work. Thanks for all you do.

I want to re read this and review every chapter but for now I just need to say how much I love this and how her distrust still thrives after being physically intimate with him just like I expected it always would no matter what because of her training. It's going to take Jarod a lifetime to undo what the Centre did to them. That's why he should have been angry and closed that placed down back in season one so.... yeah I'm loving this. more please.

I was afraid I wasn't going to like this. I feared you were going in a darker Jarod direction so I'm relieved. For him to have sex with her now when she's there with in the first place because he abducted her would be wrong wrong wrong of him even if she offers herself naked to him on a silver platter. I like your darker evil Jarod novels when that's a part of the plot but right now he's his usual darkness and still good and I like it.

I need to say that I love how Jarod had planned to have one conversation with Ethan and then for him to lose control of the conversation. It shows Jarod's humanity and that he isn't always perfect. Makes him more relatable. I love how you show that Ethan has grown and come a long way and he took control of the conversation and held Jarod accountable. When it came down between allying with Jarod against his sister, Ethan chose to ally with his sister. Can't blame that. She never shot or took Jarod to the Centre but Jarod did abduct her.

LOVE Parker's thoughts about Jarod's own fears that he's chin-deep in. It just shows that he keeps trying to help others when he needs help and easily he could become an enabler even accidentally. Needing help, needing to help others and needing her because he loves her and he could let things slide to please her. They could bring each other down if they aren't careful, drown together. You keep it real and I've always loved that about your writing. Cate adds difficulties as children do. Bringing Catherine into this is a stroke of genius too. I can't wait to see what happens next. I never want this to end.

I hope you will push through the wretched feelings and continue to write. I lose myself in your writing and that's what I need now, this escape. I feel bad that you aren't being paid to do this. Your writing is worlds above much better than some I've paid to read. I appreciate that you're empathetic. Your humanity and humility is appreciated. You rock Mirage. Keep rocking.

I was really shocked 😲😳 and thinking oh no they can't be together if it's true but then Jarod, dear dear dear Jarod, dropped some major truth nukes and I  agree with him. I actually agree that nothing should change, that love is all that matters and Parker knows it's true. She would have been long gone if the revelation changed her feelings. I think she needed Jarod to tell her it's ok to follow her heart and I love that. Oh, I want more so much right now. Thank you so much for this. 💖

Amazing. Your descriptive work is amazing, the characterizations are amazing. You transition seamlessly. The story has me on the edge of the seat.Please update soon.

Oh, I love this. It's so refreshing to read you. Somehow you always write something fresh and original and still fascinating and brilliant.

The character development is beautiful. These two have grown...but not so much we don't recognize them. Miss Parker is the perfect marriage of strength and vulnerability and you always capture her and all of the characters just as they are on the tv show.

I love the tenderness between Jarod and Sydney, that little father-son moment was beautiful and something I would have liked to see more on the show.

The moments between Jarod and Parker... oh, what can I say? You're a wordsmith Mirage and you know where to put the characters and how to write a fantastic story. I'm loving Jarod right now for keeping his feelings to himself while Miss Parker deals with the past and tries to resolve that trauma.

Thank you for calling it accountability culture. It's been a long time in coming too. I noticed that you said millineals were falsely accused of things including ruining sex offenders careers and it took me a minute but yeah, the people who ruined the sex offenders careers is the sex offenders, not the whistle blowers, witness, victims, etc. I needed to see this today. I'm so tired of certain people blaming everyone but the sex offender. Will there be a happy ending for Jarod and Miss Parker?

please update this one too

Woot. I thought Jarod was dead! You had me going. Ohhhh but Sydney and Jarod's clone are. :( Love how she embraced him thinking he was the clone but then couldn't wait to get out of his grasp when she learned it was Jarod. Oohhhh Mirage. I love you. Thank you for this new story. And ditto on winter. Winter needs to gtf on already. More please?

omg I need more already. I love this story and your writing.

oh, wow, this is awesome. I can't blame either of them here for their actions And words. They're both afraid and there's so much appropriate tension. I love that Parker sees to it that he eats. I love that jarid pushes out the pain and anger to give his body fuel and doesn't think of miuna because right now the focus is escape. Out of the park brilliance Mirage. I thought I was gonna have to take to Twitter to get you back here . pheww just in time you show up and give me the update. please update all your other stories too. more!!