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Lacunae by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 240]
Summary:

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Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36694
Read Count: 74018
[Report This] Published: 25/03/18 Updated: 01/08/23


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Mind is blown. I love the way you opened this up and omg Jarod unknowingly repeated what Thomas said...I can't even! It's worse because Jarod already fake died,!! I feel for both of them, it's so plausible and beautiful. Thank you. Congratulations!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/08/23
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I go away for a week and you update... just my luck. I love this. After the hell of a week I've had Mirage reading you is like being home with warm cocoa and a blanket even though I'm not home right now and there's no cocoa and my life basically is sucking. Thank you. You make me feel normal again and like everything might be all right. I've never seen anyone flesh the characters out the way you do. You write with clarity and the dialog is truly exceptional. It's like watching the dvds again and that's good because we'll never get that ending in a movie or tv format. It'll be books only. I'm going to say this knowing you object to it but the truth is dear is that if the ending is going to be books only I will only be reading yours. Your writing is top notch. Please more. Dying to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/05/18
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Wowz. I need more of this in my life like now. You're freaking amazing. More please?

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/05/18
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG, it's so weird that the story notes tell us that you were thinking of rewriting when things about Russia and real life started appearing in the news... and in your story the "leader" cancels already approved funding and process and operations in other countries to find and arrest the Triumvirate .....because today that rapist, racist pig in the white house just canceled already approved funding for children's health care...7 million of billion & so OMG...  start writing that like I don't know...like a tornado destroyed the white house and all the GOPigs in it and the "leader". Because damn... if real life is going to keep copying your work...you know... you should help us out Mirage. Have a special prosecutor like totally take him out... and Pence too because we don't religious freaks up in the house either.

 

Funny thing, Michael T. Weiss in an interview said he'd like to play Dick Cheney, a machevellian ... and now I think he could totally play RapistTrump. He's already played rapists so you know.. it's all good. 

 

So anyway loving the story.. all of them. I want more. It's such a relief to have you here always.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/18
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OH f*Ck. This review should have gone to The Return part 5.

I love this story. Less complicated and also so complicated. You really flesh them out and bring them alive. I need more.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/18
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

There you ARE! I love this. I love Jarod's "what I mean is what the hell do you mean Jarod' lol.  Parker plays this out well, giving a calm face and she must be going a little crazy inside but doesn't show that until she's alone with Jarod again. She's loyal to her children and will do the thing that makes them happy and that is the best for them even if it hurts her and means having to include Jarod who really shouldn't have vanished the way he did. Her confession that she never fought him or he would have been in a cage is why she's having such a hard time. I love his reaction to learning that she could have cornered him when he returned to Scotland to chase the lead on his mother... and that's so plausible in the direction the show could take after Carthis.

Thank you so much for keeping these characters alive and relevant and in a way that makes sense. I will be grateful always.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're liking this, Chloe.

Thank you for reading and for the lovely review.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/02/19
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hands over face. Yess Parker is so guilty of doing it. You capture them brilliantly always Mirage and leave me craving more. I got so aroused reading this. When Jarod said that about finding her interest in what gets him off flattering and.. ooh. HOT. He can be such a SEXY handful. More please?

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/08/19
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG! Woot! Jarod wouldn't be Jarod if Jarod wasn't candid about sex and the "who are you" and then him replying with "someone who is..." is just like the series and yes it SHOULD be like the tv series in so many ways because this is fiction based on the TV series so thank you THANK YOU THANKYOU!!! These characters are... the characters and just like they are supposed to be and I love Jarod's confession. Oh my HEART!! Shipper heaven... even though you aren't a shipper. Thank you. More please please please?

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/11/19
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Parker asking Stella if she really looked as not ok as Jarod had her believing she did is the most Parker thing ever. She had to make sure she looked ok. I like that Stella speaks haitian and I love everything about Stella. She is the best friend we all need right now. Thank you for this. I know things are super nuts and there's a pandemic. You manage to not let any stress show. You really are professional..

"Right, because I always bring along a dental dam when I break into someone's house, y'know, on the off chance they're home, and maybe down for a little mid-morning cunnilingus." lol Love that.

I also love that Parker admits that the only problem with Jarod is that he's Jarod. Stella nailed it again. More please.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/08/20
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Where do I even begin. This little dance Parker does of revealing only so much and then locking down completely and leaving him guessing is just the most Parker thing EVA! It was really tender and telling that she would comfort him when he did the most Jarod thing *EVA!* and choked up while talking about the craziness of the world and how people think kindness and goodness are weakness and insanity and he's right and this is exactly what OUR Jarod would do and you know that.. you know he's good and here you doing again what you always do and I mean surprising me but it shouldn't suprise me at all because you know him so well but you also made him so dark but that was also plausible and in character and omg I just can't with you. You're brilliant. Jarod asking about her confiding in his headstone because she told deadJarod she loved him but hasn't yet told aliveJarod she loves him and if that is not  TEH! MOST! MISS! PARKER! THING! EVA! I don't know what is. Really. You nailed it.

You know them so well and know what to do with them and I love it. Please give us more soon. How are you able to write so articulately and focused right now is beyond me with a looming possible 4 more years of doom. You just don't let it rock you at all. But I'm so anxious. A man that bragged about sexually assaulting women.. and there have been more than 2 dozen women that said "yeah he did assault me" and he's so vulgar and nasty and ugly.. just disgusting grabbing them by the pussy and trying to fuck married women because xtians don't care about adultery or rape at all and it is personal to me because I was assaulted that way... I'm a wreck. If not for fanfic and this website I don't know what I'd do. This is my escape. I've thank the web master here before and I thank you too. Really. Thank you omg I can't say it enough.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/20
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

The resiling dear. Love! Congratulations!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/05/22
Abstractions by Mirage
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

         



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 913
Read Count: 2034
[Report This] Published: 16/10/18 Updated: 16/10/18


Title: Chapter 1: Refuge in Reverie

So I'm like in the first paragraph and when Sydney said she thwarted I said OMG I hope it means what I think it meas and it did! Holy freaking awesomeballz Mirage. More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha. "Holy freaking" okay then, Chloe. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the enthusiastic review and for reading.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/18
Asphyxia by Mirage
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Wild Horses prequel.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1957
Read Count: 520
[Report This] Published: 22/12/18 Updated: 22/12/18


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dark chamber is dead on right girl. Dammmmnn. It is written brilliantly like everything you write and plausible as always and although it is dark and I don't usually go for the dark I love it. The quality of writing and level of professional, your craft, the wordsmith-manship ... all of it. I love it.               You've been holding back all of this and hoarding it away in your Mirarchives but I need more. We don't really see Miss Parker in Wild Horses either but you sort of wrote as if she's still alive. You don't tell us about quality of life. I knew when I read Wild Horses something was different like the whole feel had changed to the way future and I like that would be perfect to film and then with flashbacks to this sequel or just mention of what happened. But Parker is alive and she wasn't raped and she will be okay eventually. I totally love that you continue Craig and Steve's style of showing us this through Broots' eyes and he's right. Nothing will be the same. Witnessing that would change anyone... and Sydney!! I can't believe it. I know you love him and I can see why you held back not sharing the major darkness so early in your sharing. You wrote it out and put it away. I can see that. It makes sense. I love Jarod's struggle with this... wanting to kill Lyle but needing to save Miss Parker. I still want Lyle to die. I wait eagerly for your next installments. I do ask that when it's all shared with us that you put in series format. Thanks for sharing with us. Happy Holidays and yule.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/18
Summary:

No one is more wicked than Miss Parker. (Except Jarod)



Categories: Post Rebirth
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Musing, Comedy, Drama, General, Romance, Smut, Supernatural, Suspence/Mystery, Tragedy, Vignette
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 5355
Read Count: 1336
[Report This] Published: 06/10/21 Updated: 15/11/22


Title: Chapter 1: Wicked

I'm definitely interested in reading more. I think Jarod might be more wicked than Miss P. I don't usually go in for Miss Parker having a name other than Parker but I like Max. You've got my attention. Use it well.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/10/21
Slumber by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Nothing like her mother.



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Catherine Parker, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 89
Read Count: 697
[Report This] Published: 03/12/21 Updated: 03/12/21


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy wows! You just wrote a complete story in under 90 words and said so much with every word. Totally accurate Jarod was talking to Miss Parker who is inside her mother's casket and he was screaming and crying at some point and didn't realize it because he's insane with grief and I just can't right now...

Jarod killed Raines because Raines just killed Parker and Raines also killed Catherine. Oh, and they share face and name? Catherine Parker and Catherine Praker. I just.. can't...

This is the most tragic, stunning, heartwrenching, beautiful...and so short.

Oh... wait... he had to dig up the coffin and put Miss Parker in it... oh my god.

I don't like you. I love you. I hate you. I love you. I want more.

The Mirarchives IS a dark place. How do you find this darkness and then wrangle it and mold it and make it work so perfectly. I can't right now....

I'm so stunned and blown away.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, Jarod had to retrieve the coffin, and I imagine he also had to retrieve Parker's corpse from the Centre as well, after killing Raines. Jarod's been busy.

Thank you for reading, Chloe, and for the generous review and rating.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/21
Blindsided by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191] New!
Summary:

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4192
[Report This] Published: 23/12/21 Updated: 18/04/24


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

’ 🎯 right in the Pretender feels. I can't wait to see how this will all go now that The Pretender has returned to the Centre.

Already there is perfect tension and passion. Its everything I've wanted. Please continue. I'm so thankful 🙏

Thank you thank you for writing and sharing you amazing talens.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/05/23
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Finally! The long awaited. I'm kidding around. I'm so thankful that you updated and you can take as long as you need. I love this story. It's so Pretendery like all of your stories are. The characters are the characters I remember from the show and the dialog is brilliant, just everything, all aspects perfect. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/03/23
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

amazing as always  😍🤩 and I have come to expect nothing less.

on to serious matters, I read your response to Contessa in the Lucanae reviews...what happened to your jaw if you don't mind my asking...either way take care of yourself.. I know you are care taking of  your significant person who is disabled but who will take care of you besides you? You have to rest after surgery, even just wisdom teeth extraction you need to rest.. I wish we all lived closer and could support each other.

Take care of you ok and we'll wait patiently for you to update.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/23
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ooh I love it. Jarod is back! This is so Pretendery with the Centre taking main stage like it did on the series so often.

This is more Centre centric I think than your other works, and I love it.. 😉 😁 😁 😁 😁

More more more..ASSet lol. The sibling rivalry is on again!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/24
Sine Qua Non by Mirage
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Finished business.



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 82
Read Count: 1199
[Report This] Published: 30/06/22 Updated: 30/06/22


Title: Chapter 1: Justice

Finally!! I've been wanting this since the 1990s. Hurt my feelings so much that Jarod didn't do more and that rapist wasn't even arrested on the show!! Thank you!!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/07/22
Pis Aller by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

A last resort



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 4681
[Report This] Published: 28/09/22 Updated: 01/03/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This, like everything you write, is Pretender perfect. I can't wait for more! Still so refreshing to read you. You keep the characters and dream alive while fulfilling the dream. Congratulations and thank you for sharing with me.



Author's Response:

Not perfect, but that's all right. Thanks for the r&r, Chloe.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/09/22
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Amazing 🤩!  I love how Jarod suspected her and how he spoke up to keep from leaving, and how true to the characters you are. You have amazing talent and I'm thankful that you share it with us.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/22
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, I love it. Please keep going. You really capture the characters incredibly well.. they're so wonderfully fleshed out, real enough to touch. I want more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Chloe.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/22
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ooh. You delivered on Halloween 🎃 like Poe or Lovecraft but with some Stephen King and Anne Rice mixed in. So stunning the way you describe the scene, Jarod joining Broots and Haliah and being there...wow. Broots and Jarod both wantibg to reject the girl is dead. The way you say what happened and where the incision is without saying it. You are the best. Jarod loved blowing up Lyles car he would want to blow up his house too More!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/10/22
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay!! You're here. Girl, I was worried 😫! We've lost so many of our Pretend family and.. 

I'm so grateful for the update and you're ok.

I love love love the action. Jarod piloting the plane and flying Parker and himself to another lair to the groundwork and ohh another almost almost almost-kiss or a moment at least. My Jarod-Parker shipping heart beats for this! I love the details of the architecture and omg Jarod in the restoration hobby..like Thomas. "first step can be tricky" and Parker's reaction and Jarod clarifying the literal steps. What did Parker think he was talking about?! We all know. The same thing I was thinking. Your characterizations, transition work, and detail work is phenomenal as is your storytelling and and grammar. I wish I could give you more 🤩! Thank you for this!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/01/23