Penname: lisa [Contact]

Real name: Lisa Hollis Jones

Member Since: 25/11/13

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Summary: 'Long Way Home' came to me one night as I was driving to a friend's house in the rain, listening to Sarah McLachlan. It's an interesting experience, to have a story come full-blown into your head, complete with a strange woman telling you how and why. Sarah and her children lucked out finding Jarod just when they needed him most, but she'd already proven she could do what she had to -- find the courage to get away from a bad situation in the first place. I admire the hell out of her for that, and so did Jarod, I think. < g >



Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6740
Read Count: 17557
[Report This] Published: 07/09/05 Updated: 07/09/05


Title: Chapter 1: 1

Beautiful.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/01/22
Darkness Falling by Mirage
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 496]
Summary:

Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides. 



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57575
Read Count: 34575
[Report This] Published: 04/03/15 Updated: 01/06/23


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh wow you do keep me surprised and happy. How in the hell do you write them ALL exactly in character all the time? Amazing as always. So good to see them ride off to the pastry shops together. Sounds happy to me. I love this and love you for writing it. Thanks a a gazillion! Congratulations 🎉 too!

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/23
Summary:


Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Return
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 39350
Read Count: 5401
[Report This] Published: 04/11/16 Updated: 04/08/22


Title: Chapter 11: Trust

I'm shipping Broots and Em now!! Are they a thing now and how hard is Jarod gonna flip when he finds out they are??!! I need more now!!

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/08/22
Oblivion by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45808
Read Count: 61686
[Report This] Published: 24/12/16 Updated: 14/07/23


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

"nothing if not metaphorical" oh my heart I 💕 love this.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/03/23
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is just as intense and emotional the second time around as the first. So powerful.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/03/23
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

"You must be a genius or something" lol love the light conversation. and Jarod s " but not the correct them" and the thought that they once planned so much and would say " can't go soon enough" to each other  oh they are so perfect together and it's so tragic.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/03/23
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

"You must be a genius or something" lol love the light conversation. and Jarod s " but not the correct them" and the thought that they once planned so much and would say " can't go soon enough" to each other  oh they are so perfect together and it's so tragic.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/03/23
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh so hot 🥵🤩 🔥 love the deets.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/03/23
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

hope to read more about willow and giana and Nick. so amazing. now I'm all caught up reviewing all 20 chapters. love each one.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/03/23
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

We are demanding fans! I love that they tasted each other although Jarod barely got a taste before things took a turn. In hindsight reading this is still exciting even though I know what will happen next..still suspense and that's powerful. I know why Parker reacted that. way now but still wish she hadn't... such a masterpiece!!

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

lobotomy..the centre is a messed up place and I'm thankful to you for exploring it's darkness.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This dude is scary af. I remember being so creeped out the first time around. Poor Sydney. Poor poor Sydney. I was so worried the first run through. I'm still just as worried the second time through.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

lol, yep, it's true, Jarod has never needed an invitation. Parker's final thoughts before the next update lol. Two sociopaths. lol.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That's really Sydney's mum and pop and last name is Mikhail. Verrry good Mirage. So you do know how many psychiatrists it takes to change a lightbulb. You understood the assignment. Brilliantly done.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

lol Jarod shouldn't give her such a hard time. She's worried. But you said before that Jarod is going to Jarod. Jarod taking a pin to Lyle's inflated little balloon was  hilarious. He just wanted to laugh at Jarod's misery. They're exactly like I remember. I love it.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11


After all of the bickering and threats  Jarod tells her to lock the door. That's true love right there. I didn't catch that the first go around. THat's proof he loves her. Oh, Mirage. You always write something special and you write it exceptionally....just spectacular.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

No foreshadowing yet. Gotta love Sydney trying to help. Always trying to help.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"If I'd only known you wanted to be submissive" When Jarod gets salty he gets extra salty.. and scary. Speaking of scary ... it's scary how in character the characters always are. Gotta love Broots here.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok now that was just hot. Lyle and Jarod are hot together. I said it. There.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Scary darkness.  You write it all so well.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I remember the first time I read this and how shook I was. I should have reviewed this then. Parker's slipping a little bit, trying to keep up the facade but smoking again and scotch. She's shaken and still trying to be tough. You balance her emotions brilliantly.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Whoa hold up. So... oh ohh. Yes! Jarod has always been so much like a father to her. A better one than Raines or Mr. Parker for sure. Oh, Mirage, my shipper heart just thumped harder. I love this. It is plausible. If Raines could manipulate puberty and it can be done according to my Scientist sis in law. She says it shouldn't be done. Not a fan of cloning either but with the funding and time it could be done. Amazing. You really make my brain work and do the thing no one else does. I love it.  I will go back and review chapters 1-18 because I owe you the reviews. I wonder if you provided foreshadowing in previous chapters. I LOVE this "helluva plot twist." Keep going. Tachy in the sheets .. that's Jarod. Love it.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome first chapter. I love your insights into the troubled mind.

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Date: 25/03/23
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This hit me directly in my eternally shipper soul. Love. Are you sure you're not a shipper? Super sure? More please? Cherries on top? You like cherries? With whipcream? Please?

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/04/22
Lacunae by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 240]
Summary:

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Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36694
Read Count: 74591
[Report This] Published: 25/03/18 Updated: 01/08/23


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

More more more!

I'm an addict. Give me more.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/23