Penname: Monica [Contact]

Real name: Monica W

Member Since: 27/07/13

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Swiss fan of TP.



Affiliation: Pretender

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Reviews by Monica


Pis Aller by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

A last resort



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 4773
[Report This] Published: 28/09/22 Updated: 01/03/24


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can never get enough of your writing.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/22
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This might be my new favorite all time story. It's tied with Forces Of Nature and Nemesis. Don't get me wrong here. The reason Forces Of Nature stands out among favorites isn't the darkness itself but that you demonstrate how anyone can become a victim and sometimes it's not the person we'd expect who becomes the victim...and how it's the least person we sometimes expect would be a perpetrator. Jarod is hot, can have any woman, seems "so sweet" and has that "flaw" Alex talked about in TP 2001 and Miss Parker is tough and all badass. You knew what you were doing, the messages are all there, it was subtle but accurate, and you don't gloss over the trauma. Like, just because Jarod is the one raping someone it doesn't mean there won't be trauma. You never ignore any trauma, and I wish more authors.. like if they're going to write about bad shit happening they need to be honest and explore the trauma too, not "poor poor pitiful Jarod" and excuses for why he raped Miss Parker... like it doesn't matter what she has done to him she never deserves rape and authors should explore what she goes through... if it's "poor poor pitiful Jarod lashing out because of what Parker did" then it should also show some pity on Parker for what Jarod did. He's the one that kept leaving clues and staying in the country. I ranted. Sorry. Anyway, I love that you're honest when you write about rape... and I hope it's ok that I'm ranting about rape randomly in a review. Rant over now. I love this story, it's really one of your best.. they all are.. and you do truly know these characters.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/22
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, can't wait for more of this. It's lightning fast and brilliant.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/22
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ohh ugh amazing as always. more more more?!!

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/24
Incursion by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

This scribblet follows Asphyxia.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Catherine Parker, Jarod, Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1113
Read Count: 199
[Report This] Published: 24/01/24 Updated: 24/01/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I want you to know that I've enslaved your muse and it will be doing my bidding with only Jarod and Parker romancy smut from here on. That's the hint for you to write some smut. I find this intriguing too but I don't foresee any smut in this. I love the way you write smut particularly the anatomical correctness and the preciseness so there's no guessing about what Jarod and Parker might be doing to each other. Transcendence and Sweet Dreams and those smutty love to hate each other sex scenes in COH and FON are the best thing ever. Don't get me wrong. I love this. It's immersive in every way and speaks to all of my senses but right now I just want the one sense fondled if you know what I mean. I want you to give me more of this and finish it up and then write smut. Nobody does it better Mirage! Forever grateful to you.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/02/24