Cate is the most precious child. Love her. Your original characters are awe inspiring and meld well with the established characters and they are the characters I love so much. So amazing.

You are full of surprises. Such an amazing surprise. I'm glad your muse gave you a break from Jarod. ;) You are always good about including other characters to give us a full view of The Pretender. That's one of the many things I love about your writing.

I saw no errors...despite your warnings. I don't know where this is going but I'm ready.

Ooh oh! Oh my God! Mirage. So ok I know you are good but MY GOD sometimes you still blow me way away. Jarod vanished just like always. A weekened in Carthis. More about that soon I hope.

Very professional as always. Everyone was in character. YOU KNOW THESE CHARACTERS. It's amazing. I lol at Broots like always in the tv series and your work.

Did Jarod just make a mistake and go after Lyle thinking he had Sydney? If so that would keep him human and I'd like that. You always reveal humanity in them, imperfections. 

I love the police element in this and Parker's competence in being a sweeper and collecting evidence.

Bravo!

More please?

I've been away from the fandom for a long while. Saw you  trending among friends on twitter and yep here you are. OmG this amazing. Please keep writing. Your talents and gifts are needed so much. You're the best.

I wish I was a writer so I could tell you how much I love this. But I'll leave it to you dear. Splendid, Mirage. It is a pleasure to read your work.

Author's Response:

You are a writer. You wrote a review and I enjoyed it. That's a start. I give your review five stars. Thanks for reading and the generous review.

More more more! I love this. Wow. You are freaking amazing!

You always snatch me back here Mirage. You are always worth the wait. I'm glad you aren't overthinking. Just write and post and don't think.

"My place or yours?"

"Yours, asshole."

Jarod is fine with what they've done. He would be. It's so natural for him. You wrote them in character as always and the dialog was fresh and raw ..even made me a little uncomfortable it was so like being there with them. I can hear Michael T. Weiss and Andrea saying all of those things and I'm so thankful to you for staying true to the original tv series. Jarod is right. She's been trained to hunt him and feel nothing for him and he's right. She had to suppress the feelings when they did begin to surface and that's what she is used to doing. It's learned behavior, a pattern and unlearning it can't be easy. She's off to a sexy af start though and I need more.

More. Oh the goddesses above I need so much more. You are the best. I can't get enough. So in character and so perfect. Literally the best.

O. Ohhh. Wow. You had me hooked with the first sentence. Good stuff here, Mirage.

Oh, wow, you really are an exceptional author. The characters are so accurate I get chills, and you just have that thing that makes an author an author.You know what I mean?

I want to ask about your response to my other review. You " emerged "from the Rickroll /rabbit hole with "heavy liner, leather spike wristbands, a crush on Kate Bush and George Michael, and the uge spit on Reagan's grave." I couldn't stop laughing. You are a comedian . Reagan was terrible. The boss is right! Ooh I have more chapters to read. Squee! Thank you!!

Omg I love it so much! Please update all of your stories when you can please !

You just keep getting better and better and omg I can't even! I love this and look forward to it being completed. Such a sweet surprise this is Mirage. Thank you always and congrats!