Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Return
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 39350
Read Count: 5383
So stoked for this and for good reason too girl your writing is so REAL, the characters are real enough to touch. MORE, please? Before I lose my mind!
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedA past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
You keep outdoing yourself and I keep wanting more and more. Oh, please never stop.
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedAhhh the perfect combination of thoroughness, brevity, action, drama, danger, and that undefinable thing Jarod and Parker share. Your original characters are fleshed out and as real as the ones we know and love. You keep me coming back for more. The characters are spot on. Gotta have more.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed_
Parker is still hurt .. understandably. This says everythng. The defensive body language and the dagger words.
"Parker folded her arms across her chest, and said with a curt, throaty chuckle, "I guess you'd know considering the years of experience that you've had running away."
You do an amazingly remarkable job with the characterisations... and all aspects of writing and story telling. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Hope to read more updates soon.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed-
Lyle stopping to say "no offense" to Broots about the cosplay quip IS GENIUS! I love that Broots dressed up as Ziggy! I love that you don't disparage cosplay. You are really young aren't you? You're at least 18 aren't you? I will worry if you're younger considering some of the things you've written.. I guess I worry about you anyway. I worry. It's what I do. Just can't get over Ziggy comment. No one is ever going to top that line. Even Lyle appreciates Bowie, as it should be.
Take a bow Mirage.
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedThose good ol boy deputies in small southern regions hate the ACLU. Miss Parker is all snark here and Jarod is all snark too. I love how they bicker and there's usually no intention to actually hurt the other. It's just the way they cope, them playing their roles. The characters are the characters. I'm going to tell you something right now and it's that you're the only person who writes them the way they were during the tv series. I don't want to read a book where I can't recognize my characters from tv. I want them to be the way they're supposed to be. You keep them alive. I'm grateful to you for that. You also write exquisitely and do grammar well but that's icing on a cake that already tastes perfect without any icing.
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedI'm reading from the beginning again probably for the eight time. It never gets old. Your prose is delightful, lyrical, and not a word is wasted. You're a wordsmith and a rockstar. I love this plot and can't get enough.
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedSuper excited 😆 for more!!!
Jarod's Baaaaaaackkk!!! ““🥳—️🥰😄🥰🎉🎉
More more more please???!! 🙏 🙏 🙏
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedFinished business.
You've been busy writing for us. Thank you for this. It's long overdue. I was hoping Jarod would drown this terrible man, and now... in a way... Jarod has. Thank you so much for this. Justice is finally served.
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedA last resort
You've done it again, m'dear...yanking me back here, and still you're a breath of fresh air. Each story has its own tone, moon, sun, atmosphere. I love the climate in this one. Light and facepaced. I trust you'll give us another chapter soon. I hope. Congratulations!
Thanks, d_el1, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedPart six of The Return series.
Bravo!!
You keep getting better and better and I can't stop wanting more!
I'm so addicted.
This is perfect!!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: d_el1 SignedThis scribblet follows Asphyxia.
So exciting! I can't wait for the rest!
Thank you so much 🙏😊🙏🙏🙏😁
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed