Title: Chapter 21: Parameters
It started out good with the nightmare recaps. But must Jarod win every argument? I would have had his balls in a sling after the psych exam! Now he's giving details of her torture to her father and brothers? Hell why not just give em to the kid too? Anyway, can't wait to learn more about why Mr Parker is orchestrating the hunt to kill his "daughter".
Author's Response:
Well, I'll be damned. *ahh, deja vu* You are the second newbie reviewer to misread this fic- that's two in as many chapters. Odd.
"Anyway"
Fanfic is trivial- it doesn't warrant getting ye olde big gal knickers in a twist and especially when YOU failed to comprehend the events that have transpired in this fic:
Jarod hasn't divulged the details of Parker's imprisonment.
Compromise- it means Jarod hasn't won every argument. ("Unfettered Access"?).
Parker made the decision to undergo the psych eval which means Franken-rat's testicles are safe for now. For now, haha.
If you are as displeased as the tone of your review implies, perhaps you should click elsewhere, scroll up and click on "Titles" or "Authors" - it's quite a very simple concept- and find something more agreeable.
Happy writing/reading,
~M
Reviewer: Preferably Signed
Date: 10/05/11