What can I say that hasn't been say? You're the best. More, please?

I'm crying. Jarod's agony breaks my heart. He killed for her. You gave the perfect amount of detail with few words. I'm too overcome with feelings right now to properly review but just know I love this and I'm thankful for you and your talent. I read things like this and hope everything is going well in your life. I know this is a dark series but you write these things so fluidly and vividly that I have to wonder about trauma in your life and be concerned.Don't flame me for caring.

Congratulations Mirage. Thank you for continuing to share your gift.

2 chapters whoa. I love this new and fresh direction and my GOD the characters are perfect and as they are. Seriously. I love this. The chapters are too short but understandable. You leave me craving more.

Holy COW! Mirage, it's so wonderful to see you here again. I've missed you so much. I know things aren't so good right now. I bookmarked Contessa's review of Lucana and hoped you'd respond and you did, and I read your response, and if you need anything let us know. And you can talk to me. You started your response with "I'm okay" and after explaining what no one would be okay with in your shoes you wrote you're "okay" aagain. I can tell that you're one of those people who automatically answer "I'm okay" no matter how not okay they are. You're young and so is your significant person and no one should be disabled when they're young. It's probably not an easy adjustment. I don't know if I could do what you're doing. You're more than "not happy" you're devastated. I hope the wisdom tooth surgery goes well with no complications. Wisdom tooth tho? HOW YOUNG ARE YOU? OMG. I feel old now. Please please pleae caretake you too.

So, I'm sorry but I had to say that before reviewing this.

I can't even tell that you're going through all sorts of hell by reading your work... that worries me. You're one of those people who don't show their suffering.

Your writing is brilliant as always, I got the scene all playing in my mind while reading. It's like watching an episode.

I hate that I'm over here agreeing with Lyle. Xtians do be loving their god merch and they do put sh*t on their tshirts like they're trying to start sh*t but atheists don't give a damn what xtians wear. UNLIKE xtians who get all furious about a coffee cup or rainbow flag or get all homicidal that other people might be kosher or halal or wear scarfs and coverings on their head. I love that Miuna was bisexual. SO AM I! You bring representation to the party and it's so so important.

Nail, meet hammer. Brilliant.

Mark inspirational-quote-ing his way through life is so funny and people do that and it's toxic positivity and you've talked about that before, and you totally expressed that here. I just want to show this chapter to everyone who recites these quotes to people who are suffering.

The Centre characters. Balding man in ballgown. Sunglasses, green beehivey hair with a dagger in it, and a forked tongue. Mirage I'm in love. That's the Centre. All walks of life. No judgement. Even Lyle gets it.

I love that Lyle is egging Jarod on but in a comforting way that is creepy and SO LYLE.  He's so bad.

Jarod's darkness really shines in this one too. I don't blame him. He didn't feel that his masculinity was being questioned. It was when Mark started up about Miuna that Jarod acted.

OMG. THIS LINE is so awesome. --> "With a new surge of rage, a more controlled and focused rage, a rage with a purpose and a real future.."

lol. Brilliant Mirage.

And that last line. Jarod is going to finish what Miuna started during the rape and murder. He's going to chisel out the tattoo from Mark's chest.

Holy cow. I've never read anything like this. Mind is blown.

You're a powerhouse. I look forward to more from you... whenever that happens. I'm here for some Mirage whenever you give it to us.

I can never get enough of your stories!

Always brilliant, Mirage, and this one's particularly evocative. Your insights into the inner workings of these character's minds is ...astonishing. It's overwhelming like it can be while watching the series. So many intense emotions pass between Jarod and Parker sometimes and you truly capture that like I've only seen captured on screen between Michael and Andrea. What the hell are you doing in fanfic? I will ask that and then ask for much more of your work. Please? I love your writing. You're an amazing story teller.

Congratulations! Succinct and beautiful. I can't wait for a sequel!