Characters: Broots, Catherine Parker, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1504
Read Count: 1905
just love to read pretender ff...
(usually don't write them myself though )
MissP is my absolute fav!!! LOVE everything about her. And a story without or not about her just isn't any fun for me.hehe.
story interests include J&MP romance,especially series in which there're twists and turns and eventually they get together.
But am even more a fan of Thomas&MP. Would love to see more stories about them!!!
Oh an regarding my "darker side" ;-) I do find Lyle-staring-lasciviously-at-sister-dearest stories VERY ...let's say "intriguing". *g* The way he looked ather in Risque Business after she nearly strangled him while feeding him pistachioes just says eeeverything.
Nice one Vicky!!
Interesting idea to write about. Really like the idea of Syd and Catherine. The conversation between Syd an dParker in the end touched me and I loved the part where Syd sees MissP leaving his office just like her mother did years ago.
Keep on the good work!!
Sequel to Simple Pleasures. Parker is lured away from the Centre "Fun House" and soon finds herself trapped in Jarod's literal Fun House nestled away inside a cozy county fair, no it's not what you think. (Or at least I don't think it is) Mr. Parker's body is found, Lyle is arrested along the way and... blah, who cares?
Great idea Mirage!!
Loved Jarod's declaration of love. Top notch written that line!
Very intriguing comparison Centre-Funhouse-Jarod-Funrides. ;-)
Loved it that u brought up that moment Jarod snaks into Parker's house before Thomas' death anniversary and manipulates her gun. Still remember the wheels in my mind turning when I noticed that Parker was naked that night!! He did invade her private spaceon more than 1 occasion.
Am looking forward to reading more about this storyline u created here. :-)
Thanks Ice Angel. I don't know how (or why) I think this stuff up.(fun rides and Jarod? *innocent smile*)
As for Parker's nudity- I know! That morning, she was lying in bed and quite naked and then we learn that the little snake Jarod broke into her home and removed the firing pin.( From the gun she keeps under her pillow!) If he was close enough to see drool then uh...yeah...he was too close. Glad you liked and thanks for the r&r!
Reviewer: IceAngel SignedI know I already posted a review, but just saw a TV program which took mostly place at an abandoned county fair with autumn's leaves all oveer the place...what are the chances?!!?! Immediately had to think of your story...which kinda shows what big impression made on me. ;)
Author's Response: Really? (I love strange coincidences.) Thanks for sharing that, Ice Angel. I never thought it would make any sort of impression. *bows*
Uhhh nice one! pretty creepy in between. I like that. The whole idea that Parker might get involved into one of Jarod's pretends sounds pretty realistic to me. Who knows...maybe someone killed all the women on purpose before,only to toy with Jaord and get to Parker in the end? Could be Alex,who knows. ;-)
Like the neverending "what if" story of Jarod's he keeps annoying MissP with.
Also the fact that he is so messed up that he would intentionally lead her to him,because he misses her. haha.truly a Centre's case.;-)
The characters seem very well done from mpov. Like the connection between Parker and J.
And could smash J's head against some wall for not getting that MissP totally fits the victim's profil.
But hey,otherwise there wouldn't be an exciting story to read right?!
would like to read more!
uhuhuuuuu! My sarcastic,bitterly dry laugh still echoes through my room. Damn,taking Miss P's beloved Daddy's life in front of her eyes is art. Alex IS a sardistic ass...and quite a creative one at that. ;-) The idea is so simple and yet I've never read it anywhere before. Am really curious as to why Mr Parker was there and how ALex got him there...and where the hell that old man was all the time. Well,at least MissP now knows that he loved her. (hearing my bitter sarcastic laugh?)
Oh man,I sooo wanna be there when it's MissP's payback-time. I'm sure she'll redefine Picasso on Alex' face.
Well written,especially the Parker-Alex scenes! Reads like a thriller,which is good. Only the Jarod scenes were a bit too whiny for my taste...but then I'm easily annoyed with J's whining.;-)
Keep on the good work! Can't wait to find out more about Angelo's breakdown and whether Lyle will ever find out about this (and how he will react! wanna kill Alex, throw him a party?Hehehe)
A chance encounter with a past acquaintance is Jarod's undoing. Or is it?
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uhuuu,that doesn't sound good. A seriously angry (and heated up..not just by the sun) Jarod and a MissP cuffed to a bedpost. Oh boy,I do feel bad for her. Fates really bites her in the ass eeeverytime.
Your story comments sounds promising. ;-) It's about time that those to get some sex. Even if it's "just" in this story.
Oh please cold-shoulder the muse if she's not willing and DO write a twincest story! Would love to do that myself,but oh the lack of time I have. *sigh*Can't wait toread your version of evil baby brother L vs. Ice Queen MP. ;-)
So keep on writing,for it is soooo entertaining (and why the hell would YOU of all people need a beta reader?!?)
Haha, IceAngel, no, it's not good at all. They will get some sex, not "just" in this fic. They've already had sex in the other fic, updated just a few days before I posted this fic.
Yep, I will definitely tell the muse to fuck off if she's doesn't want to write a twinnie fic and I know what you mean. No time. Between work, school, volunteer work, pets, friends and family, there is no time for Mirage. I will continue writing and look forward to reading more from you. Thanks, IceAngel.
And haha, I nearly fell out of bed laughing after reading the beta question.
Reviewer: IceAngel Signed