The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.
Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.
Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.
Centre
Chapter 25 was nicely done Kat. Love the intense interaction with Raines, Lyle and Parker. Sooo... where to now?
Author's Response: YAY, thanks RaChell!! More intense fun to come.... 25 was great fun to write. Everyon coming together and not playing nice, always a good thing! *grins*
Oh, I will say chapter 26 did not disappoint! Very nice and warpped up some loose ends. Like the pretty please with Pez on top. that was cute, I may have to steal it from you once my muse wakes up. ;)
Sooo, where from here? BTW have a good x-mas and fun with the family. I'm sure it'll spark your inner muse.
The only thing X-mas is going to spark is the end of my fuse.
Glad you liked 26... there is plenty more where that came from which I shall post shortly.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Interesting as always!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Nicely done. Like the theme.
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Thank you.
Jarod has been off the Centre radar for a year. Why was he gone and what happened to him?
Nicely done and very enjoyble. Could have been a little longer, still it was very interesting.
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Thank you.
Very nice, like the way you write Angelo. So much in character. And the way Sydney puts the idea of escape in front of Jarod is a interesting concept. Look forward to seeing where you take this.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Nice to see you've added chapter 3! Poor Jarod and poor Sydney, how will he protect him?
So how long do we have to wait for another installment?
This is wonderful! I really like the last two chapters. great job and so many good lines. Very worth the wait and so many possiblities! Did I say nicely done? (wink)
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Oh, I should e-mail you more often with requests! (big grin) How nice to see another chapter. And a good one too! I really enjoyed it and loved the part about Sydney and Jarod and the lamp.
Don't stop now! Keep going and yes, I'm saving that sharp pointy stick for KatieQ.
Please, not the stick, please no. I'll be good and write faster. Really. Katie is the slow one now, not me. I learned my lesson. Please no sticks please.
See, just the mention of the stick has me cringing on the sidelines.
Thanks for the reviews though. Glad you are enjoying it
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Really enjoyed this chapter, can't wait to see what happens at the mall.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed WOW! You outdid yourself with this chapter! loved it! Sooo- just what did Sydney let Jarod buy? (wink, wink) And I love the temper tantrum scene!
More! More! I want more! (big smile)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Just when I thought you couldn't make this sotry better I was wrong! This is by far the best chapter yet. You can almost see the whole thing play out like a movie in your mind's eye. Well done and your Muse deserves chocolates and roses!
Oh yes, did I happen to mention I want more? (wink, wink)
Great! You paint their thoughts so well you can almost see the inner workings of Sydney and Jarod's mind. Bravo!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Oh this chapter (11) is the best by far! More please! (and notice I did say Please! No threats with pointy sharp sticks)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed You just keep coming up with wonderful angst filled stories Anna! Your muse deserves a bouquet of roses and chocolates! Keep it up and I look forward to seeing the next chapter soon.
The next chapter is going to be soon isn't it? if not then I'll have to poke you with that sharp pointy stick I've been poking Thunderchild with to make her post more of her story.
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Hi RaChell!
Thank you so much for your wonderful review. And yes, I love angst! Thanks for the roses and chocolates!
I will be posting very soon!
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed 
You just get better and better all the time! Can't wait for chapter 4 Anna.
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Hi RaChell!
I should be posting this weekend. Thanks for your review and kind words.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Oh goody! Another installment in your angst filled story! (rubs hands together in delightful glee!)
WooHoo! But isn't it time for Jarod to suffer some???? (small grin here.) Sorry about that Jazzy. But Jarod can be too stubborn for his own good some times.
Nice to see you're hard at work Anna. Keep it up! And lots of red and pink roses and heart shaped boxes of chocolates for your Muse, she deserves them!
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Hi RaChell!
Thank you for the red and pink roses, and chocolates. My muse thanks you. I really hope you'll like where this is going to or maybe not.
Next chapter will be up soon.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Jazzy, you are right and very insightful re: the Devine Miss P! (big smile, while shaking head saying 'thank you!) I have to agree with you when you said:
"I think that Miss P. would never come back once she'd left. she's too proud for that... even if it's real love and suffering in question."
She like Jarod, can be stubborn and I too doubt she would have shown up at his house like she did in chapter 4. But who knows what she would have done and since it's Anna's delightful tale of angst, suffering and heart ache, I guess I'll let it slide. But don't think we're going to let you get away with it next time Anna! (big wink) You might not find us so forgiving in the future.
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Hi RaChell!
Oh-oh! Thank you so much for your great interest in this story. I'll be upating in a minute. Um...I like your explanation regarding Jarod and Miss Parker...but, well...On to Chapter 5
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Hmmm, see response to Jazzy in my previous review. I'm not being critical, just that it seems to be out of character for MP, unless you want to explain "why " she's taken this drastric change of direction. It is your story and reality and I do enjoy it.
But e-mail me with your next chapter if you want some light beta-ing (spelling, grammer etc only.) Don't expect any input or trying to influence your story. I have problems of my own since I signed up for the next Sleepyhead chapter after Sarah.
rachell7@yahoo.com
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Hi RaChell!
Thanks so much. Well, my story has come to an end with Chapter 6, soon to be posted. I wrote this on a dare. One of the writers at Fanfiction said I couldn't do it. Well, read on. And there will be a sequel to this story.
Again, thank you.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Interesting ending Anna and yes I could imgaine it happening. Look forward to your sequel, it should prove to be as intriquing as this one.
Hi RaChell!
Thank you. I 'm glad you liked the ending. I will be posting my next story soon.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Have to agree with Manoline and TLM! Very nicely done and such a interesting twisted beginning to the End.
Author's Response: THANKS!!!
Very good! And I must say very sucessful in what you intended to get across in my humble opinion! Nicely done and am looking forward to the next chapter. Don't make us wait too long. I've been known to poke authors with a sharp pointy stick for dragging out the suspense..
Author's Response:
Thanks man!!! Just updated the story.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed Nicely done and very riviting. You seem to have kept both Lyle and Miss Parker in character, not a easy feat. As long as you get the meaning of your story across, I'm sure everyone will forgive the spelling and grammatical errors.
And it's nice to see a author who posts without having to be poked with a sharp pointy stick.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed 
Very nice! True to character and well done. Looking forward to where you take this little tale.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Hope you like where I take it and don't all decide to start flaming me in the forthcoming chappies.
Well, that is quite a twist! Interesting little story line there! Can't wait to see where this is going ... in fact, I'm almost afraid to think of the possiblities!
