Penname: wormie [Contact]

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Member Since: 02/03/08

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Affiliation: Pretender

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A winter's tale by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 889]
Summary: stories/395/images/parkerjarod.jpg A love story...my way. ;-) Read and review please

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55206
Read Count: 50779
[Report This] Published: 05/08/06 Updated: 19/06/11


Title: Chapter 17: Just like me

Great story! 

...and the plot thickens... more soon, I hope.



Author's Response: Thanks. More will follow, hopefully soon. ;-)

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 24/03/08
Eight by jacci
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Will The Centre never stop pursuing Jarod? Can he cope with this newest revelation, or will it destroy him completely? Who is Eight? Will he do as Lyle commands?




Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 7689
Read Count: 4756
[Report This] Published: 13/09/06 Updated: 25/03/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you are continuing this! (I had been reading it at fanfic.net) It's an interesting premise, & Eight is such a great character.  I can't wait for when Jarod & Eight meet face-to-face. 

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 25/03/08
Retired
To Heal by Tinanaz
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: A "what if" story that has been begging to be written.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 18862
Read Count: 12658
[Report This] Published: 28/05/07 Updated: 20/03/08


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Lucky Day

Great chapter (with an evil cliff-hanger, too)!  Anxiously awaiting the next bit.

Author's Response:

An evil cliff-hanger?  Naw, that is just the point where they stopped telling me their story.  Have to wait for them to pick it back up; I think the emotions were too strong for them and they needed a break.

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 20/03/08
27 by TLM
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 903]
Summary:

We all just want some ANSWERS. 

"I run. You chase. What if... we didn't?"



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36857
Read Count: 32454
[Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 08/07/08


Title: Chapter 10: Day 10 : Day 37

I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this.  I like the construction of the story going forward with both the beginning & the middle of the story.  I especially like how Jarod & Miss P's interaction is (mostly) based on friendship which grows with everyday. 

 

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! 



Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah while I'm a fan of the J/MP stuff, I think it would have to be very gradual for it to be at all realistic.

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 20/03/08
Retired
Flight of Memory by MP
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 98]
Summary: What if the Centre had the power to take it all away?  Jarod is captured and they try to ensure that he will never escape again.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 46107
Read Count: 23527
[Report This] Published: 29/07/07 Updated: 10/12/08


Title: Chapter 9: Maelstrom

First - this is a fantastic story (took me a while to catch up).

Second - this chapter was absolutely amazing...sad, poignant, and heartbreaking...yet with a little hope that good guys will win the war (even after losing this battle).

Whether Jarod ever regains his lost memories or not (whether he escapes again or not), I'm looking forward to the rest of the story (I have my own theory as to why this had to happen to Jarod, but I'll keep quiet about my theories till the end. :) )

More soon?

 



Author's Response: Thanks!  Writing this chapter was kinda like running the New York Marathon:  you feel proud when you're done, but it's not something you want to do again right away.  I can't tell you how much it means to have the chapter--and the story--warmly received here.  More chapters are in the works.  It's great to know that you're open to anything, and that this story has made you think.  I hope you enjoy where this journey takes us.

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 29/09/08
First day by Muc
Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: It's an unusual POV and that's all I can tell without giving away the entire plot.

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Jarod, Other Centre Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2410
Read Count: 1237
[Report This] Published: 14/04/08 Updated: 14/04/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story!  And I loved, loved, LOVED the sweeper POV.  [and the gym guy analogy - LOL].  And I have to say, it made me wonder what would happen if Jarod & this sweeper met again after Jarod was free...   :)

Author's Response: If it that meeting were anything like this story the sweeper would most likely get disappointed and then perhaps trying to shot Jarod. Of course he would miss and then Jarod would, at a safe distance, point out that the bullets trajectory were two degrees off and that the sweeper should lower his aim ;)
Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 15/04/08
Retired
Summary: Its 100's of years ago in the 15th C. What sorts of lives would Jarod, Miss Parker and the rest have??? This is an AU.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36972
Read Count: 9262
[Report This] Published: 16/04/08 Updated: 02/12/08


Title: Chapter 7: Innocence...

aww...so sweet.

Still digging it!

 

More, please.  :)

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 29/09/08
Title: Chapter 1: Strange And New World...

love it!  more soon?

Author's Response: Hey wormie, glad you like it and yes, there will be more soon lol

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 16/04/08
Title: Chapter 1: Strange And New World...

Still liking it. :)  I really enjoyed this Sydney and how he and Jarod find common ground in a love of books and learning.  I loved all the questions that young Jarod tossed at Sydney. Hee!  [Will Jarod take it upon himself to teach young Miss Parker?]

 More, please. :)

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 23/04/08
Summary: A Challenge from another fan of the Pretender. I mixed it with a touch of Trek.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1180
Read Count: 1059
[Report This] Published: 20/04/08 Updated: 20/04/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was fun. :)  

I would love to see them at the Convention, too. That would be great fun. Hee!  

So Jarod has a shoe/foot fetish?  LOL

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I was reminded about the ability to respond to reviews on this site! I think Jarod is curious about everything having to do with Parker, so shoes would be part of that. Let's face it don't we all wonder how she manages to run in them?  I'd love to see them at a convention too. ;-)

 

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 21/04/08
Summary:

A Sequel to: These Shoes My Huntress Wears.

Yes it probably was a mistake, but I was asked to do this, so you are stuck. I am so sorry!

To those of you Trekkies, I have never been to a con, but I have seen pictures and heard about them from friends, so I have taken liberties. Forgive me if I've taken too many.

Please feel free to write your own version of what could have happend with our favorite characters at a Star Trek convention. I'd love to read them.

 



Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1992
Read Count: 1456
[Report This] Published: 07/05/08 Updated: 07/05/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, my, did that make me laugh!  (which I sooo needed today) Thanks so much!

Miss P was pitch perfect and I could so clearly see Sydney observing everything about him with interest...heehee...

[I also curse you, though, because now a very vague story is forming in the back of my mind involving the Klingon princess... ;)  ]



Author's Response:

I keep forgetting this option is available here!

 I'm glad you enjoyed this token offering. I loved your take on it. It was much more detailed and so sci-fi! good job.

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 08/05/08
The Storm by middleman
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: The first time he called him Dad...

Categories: Challenges
Characters: The Clone
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 610
Read Count: 971
[Report This] Published: 02/11/08 Updated: 02/11/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!  I think you really captured a defining moment in the early days of the major & Gemini.  A lovely piece.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review wormie!

Reviewer: wormie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/11/08
Shades of Grey by middleman
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: It all started with a screen cap... Short Gemini ficlet dedicated to Jacci.

Categories: Character Musing, Challenges
Characters: The Clone
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Facing his future...

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 461
Read Count: 1032
[Report This] Published: 21/11/08 Updated: 21/11/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great insight into Gemini.  Nice little piece!

Author's Response: Thank you wormie, both for the compliment and for taking time to review!

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 23/11/08
Reflections by jacci
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: This one is for middleman, a repsonse to the writing challenge which can be found on the SIM forum at Writing Challenges

Categories: Challenges
Characters: The Clone
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 590
Read Count: 1070
[Report This] Published: 22/11/08 Updated: 22/11/08


Title: Chapter 1: Reflections

awww...Gemini.  Lovely piece.

Author's Response: thanks wormie, glad you liked it. Poor Gemini, gotta feel sorry for that messed up kid. 

Reviewer: wormie Signed
Date: 23/11/08