Penname: Miss Shannon [Contact]

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Nothing is more hideous than human nature.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Ethan, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Word count: 94856
Read Count: 97689
[Report This] Published: 08/11/08 Updated: 27/09/10

Title: Chapter 12: Running In Circles

Spectacular! I just LOVE this! Please update very soon! This is the best story I've read in ages!

(You can see how excited I am by the number of exclamation marks I used. :-D)

Author's Response:

Wow! I know I don't deserve such a compliment but thanks just the same.

I will update as soon as possible. Thanks for reading and reveiwing. 

(Your story is great btw.)

Reviewer: Miss Shannon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/09
Summary: Jarod feels the need to adopt a young boy and Miss Parker is at a crossroad on what to do when she finds Jarod.  This time Jarod will do anything to make sure his son is safe and Parker will have to choose whose side she's on.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Alternate Universe
Characters: All the characters, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Smut
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Word count: 14517
Read Count: 11141
[Report This] Published: 23/03/09 Updated: 28/07/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hi there,

nicely written!

The only thing I noticed is that especially Miss P seems a bit out of character to me. I don't think she would so easily adapt to a new situation like that. I would have thought it'd take at least some more convincing on Jarod's side to get her to play along.

And Parker at JC-Penney's? I expected an outburst, at least her threatening to shoot somebody. :-)

Otherwise I really like this story and I am looking forward to where you're taking us!

Author's Response:

Hi Miss Shannon,

 Thanks for your review...yeah, Parker's a bit soft in this one. I'm working on bringing her tough side back in the next few chapters (the action starts in ch5 which will be posted soon) :)

I like to think back to when she met Jarod's clone and how friendly she was to that's kind of why she's so quick to attach to Cale

Reviewer: Miss Shannon Signed
Date: 27/05/09