Poignant and so so exquisitely magnificent Mirage.

You took my breath away with this. How have I not read this before I don't know but it was my loss. I'm so upset that I never read it before. You do right by Angelo and all of the characters. Wow. All of the wows.

Thank you for this.

You really know the characters. Everytime I read your fics I'm just really wowed by all of it, all of the parts, transitions, and all and how the characters *ARE* the characters. Sad to see any thing you write end but happy that they are happily going to get pastries and relieved you're still writing, and not going anywhere. I rely on my daily Mirage boost and hope you'll always write and share with me. Thanks and contgrats!

Oh, Jarod, bless his heart. He always has to purge the sins of his soul. That totally tracks. Thank you for writing about menstruation. More people (men) need to know about this kind of thing. And it's kind of important that girls know about the blood part of sex, those of who didn't rupture a hymen horse back riding that is. Mine was extra tough. I rode horses, bikes, climbed fences, had every reason to not still have a hymen but let me tell that my hymen was nearly impentrable. It took my BF hours to get through it.

So thanks. It's not a fun topic and kind of taboo for some reason but I love you for tackling it and doing it respectfully.

Oh, holy wows please keep writing. I won't bug you about writing shippery stuff or smut, just write. I'll read it. I love the way you do it.

Mirage was right to encourage you! So many times I read that Parker's pregnant without her consent and is going to stay pregnant or Jarod talks her into staying pregnant when she doesn't want to be, and I'm glad Jarod has compassion after seeing her this way. I'll never understand how or why anyone would want to force someone else to put their body through pregnancy. Shit. I don't tell people they have to keep their tumors and cysts because it's not my business or my body. Then those same assholes turn around and blame the pregnant person for using drugs during the pregnancy and causing defects or newborn addictions, or dumping a newborn in the trash or loo. Honestly how good a mum do they think a person can be if they're forced to one?!! If someone wants to control what's in my uterus I will cut my uterus out and they can have it and anything growing inside of it. If it's 'god's child' I will give god full custody of the fetus straightaway.

So I love this. I hope Jarod isn't tricking her. If he is tricking her I hope she shoots him in that brain of his and stabs the fetus to regain her autonomy if she has to. No one should have to to stay pregnant or give birth. That's a crime against humanity and violation of autonomy. Thank you for tackling this issue.

All of the wows!

You know how to grab my attention and hold my attention and leave me aching for more.

This is so special and important to me.

I can't wait for more and to see this in a series format.

Thank you for writing and sharing.

Please.

Exquisite! 😋

oh and I'm never looking at my ski poles again the same way ever. skewer. mankebab. I love Jarod's "don't compose a man kebab, baby" oh, I want to see how they are with each other. I'm glad she's not a stupid TRADwife or stepford wife or any of that crap.

Jarod is gonna want his equal, the woman he fell in love with and that's the badass godess miss Parker. THank you for not changing her or him. This is perfect.

MOre please. I've been wanting you to add more to Forces of Nature for so long now. I didn't think it would happen.
so excited.

Oh my goddesses. Mirage, you continue to outdo yourself! This chapter reveals so much

but I need more!!

Did you see the new photos I sent to your email of Michael T Weiss?

Is it omg or just OMG?!

I can't wait to read what happens next..

More please!