Ahhh. My heart. You really do an amazing job with all aspects of writing. What I always notice the most is characterizations. That one can make or break a story for me no matter how well written because if I don't recognize the characters, if I don't see and hear Jarod, Lyle, Parker, Sydney I can't read it. You do that brilliantly. The only other time I see them this in character is in the TV series.

For me, it's almost as if some of the plausibility is hinged on the characters' explanations and reactions. The Pretender series on tv had some crazy stuff that stretched plausibility but it was plausible when Sydney or Jarod or Broots explained it in their technical intelligent terms. I love that I always recognize them when you write them. Thank you for that. You make it feel like the series never ended.

OMG this is amazing. That's one baddie who should've never walked away. Thanks for writing this and doing it so cleverly. You're a genius.

Ooohh uh. Dyyyamn. I'm sitting here trying to figure out what I love more about your stories. Is it the stellar story telling, the lyrical prose and writing, or the freaking on-the-nose characterisations? I've never seen the characters behave more like the characters since watching thte characters on the series... I have a paid subscription so I can watch The Pretender and read your stories and now I stare off like... they are the same when you write them. It's scary and I love it. You are my favorite author, the one that keeps me coming back. You keep the series alive for me and I'm grateful. Thank you. Thank  you. Thank you. Please never stop writing.

I've missed you so much girl. It's so good to see you here again and what a hell of a wondeful installment to The Return series. It's happening. You're really bringing them together and not just for the sex. In some of your other in process stories they've had sex but haven't even embraced as adults so it's important to see this and the evolution. I love it. You are articulate and provide precious details and I need more. Please.