Penname: Miss Shanon [Contact]

Real name: Shanon

Member Since: 25/05/22

Membership status: Member

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Darkness Falling by Mirage
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 496]
Summary:

Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides. 



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57575
Read Count: 34792
[Report This] Published: 04/03/15 Updated: 01/06/23


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm going to miss this one but I can always come back and take the journey again. This chapter is so powerful. There's so much strength and depth in your writing, and the characters...oh my god Mirage, they are Pretender perfect. Thank you for writing and sharing always.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/06/23
Oblivion by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45808
Read Count: 61929
[Report This] Published: 24/12/16 Updated: 14/07/23


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

You're one of those authors who knows how to captivate and thrill. I get excited for every new update and story. You haven't disappointed me yet. Thanks for contacting to entertain me.

 

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/07/23
Lacunae by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 240]
Summary:

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Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36694
Read Count: 82950
[Report This] Published: 25/03/18 Updated: 01/08/23


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Can't get enough Mirage.  You know how to keep these pages flipping. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/05/22
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What can I say?

Wow. Even the smut is professional and eloquent. I love the quality of your work and how consistent it is, the characters are always in character, and you're a master plotter and storyteller and transition scenes with ease.

So, how are you? Really? Are you well? Is there anything I can do for you?

You're not going to stop writing are you?

Please don't ever stop writing for us.

More please?



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the kind words. I don't plan to stop scribbling. That said, I didn't exactly plan to begin either. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/23
Blindsided by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4491
[Report This] Published: 23/12/21 Updated: 18/04/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Solid first chapter. Again, your work is so refreshing.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/23
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You really know the characters and know where to put them. This is so clever and cleverly written. I  want more and more!

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/23
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wondered if Mp had other plans when she showed up acting like a lawyer. Her team is already in place gathering evidence to get Jarod out and .. back to the Center I'm thinking???? Amazing. Plausible. Believeable. It's scary and people should know. You have never been afraid of darkness or controversy and that's the stuff that makes any writer a real author and a an amazing author.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/23
Sine Qua Non by Mirage
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Finished business.



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 82
Read Count: 1239
[Report This] Published: 30/06/22 Updated: 30/06/22


Title: Chapter 1: Justice

This is outstanding work. I admire your talent and ability to be brief. Thank  you for all of your work.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/22
Pis Aller by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

A last resort



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 4903
[Report This] Published: 28/09/22 Updated: 01/03/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, wow, so much wow. You're in peak form. You caught my attention with the title and that first thrilling sentence throws us into the action. I love it. You plot and develop the characters while transitioning seamlessly and do it all masterfully. I know that Parker doesn't really plan to kill Broots. She would kill  him herself if she wanted him dead, so I'm super excited to see what you have planned for us. I wait impatiently. Amazing work as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Miss Shanon.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/22
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooh, I love it. More please?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/10/22
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bravo ‘🎉! You balance plot, adventure, superb storytelling, and momentum beautifully.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/22
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Timed perfectly with Halloween and what could be more scary than what you've written? Not much. I can't wait for Jarod to do what he does best. Revenge. This time with Miss Parker at his side I hope.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/22
A Friend In Need ... by Xena
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

 

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

 

 



Categories: Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1030
Read Count: 14334
[Report This] Published: 08/06/23 Updated: 08/06/23


Title: Chapter 1: A Friend In Need

This is well written and good story telling..I can see why Mirage encouraged you. You have talent. Please keep going.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/06/23
Summary:

Part six of The Return series.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: The Return
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 349
[Report This] Published: 14/11/23 Updated: 14/11/23


Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind Of Freedom

You're always in peak form. This first chapter of part 6 seamlessly transitioned from where they were. I love how you balance story consistency and brevity. You know what you're doing and you're doing it brilliantly. I hope you never stop. What I love about fanfic is that the authors write the story and that's the only focus. You aren't here to make money. It's fanfic like you say. All fanfic authors get paid in reviews and stars. It's much more pure and authentic to the Pretender tv series this way. You add only what will move the story forward or fill in blanks, and add to the characters' backstories to make their relatsionships even more profound. You stay on the path with what we already know.

I guess I'm still disappointed about the so called "official" novels. I thought they were going to continue where they left us, not change so much of the story including when Jarod escaped. It's like it became more about making money, but I'd spent money on the DVDs. That's the story I wanted to see continued. I don't want to spend more money on books that don't continue the DVD's story, and they haven't released another book yet either. I never thought I'd prefer fan written stories over the the novels written by the show's creators but I do. I prefer yours. I know you don't like this kind of talk and you don't want to hear it or read it. I think you should know how much I love your work. I want you to know.

I want you to know that many of your stories are my preferred continuations and endings. Your stories could all fit perfectly as a movie or episodes.

I want to see you continue this soon please.

Take care of yourself and happy holidays if you celebrate.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/11/23
Incursion by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

This scribblet follows Asphyxia.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Catherine Parker, Jarod, Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1113
Read Count: 241
[Report This] Published: 24/01/24 Updated: 24/01/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this. I think I saw Michael T. Weiss today and immediately thought of the fandomly and YOU and I came here and you have recently updated!! I was so scared that I couldn't even say hey at him lol.. he's SO tall, and he looks different. I'm so regretful now but I know I would still be scared spineless if I had the chance again so what's a girl to do anyway? He doesn't bite does he? You've seen him. You didn't freak out. I feel stupid now.
Reading this makes me feel better. You take my mind off of the stupid things I've done. I hope to read more. This is out of the world amazing. Lyrical and moving. Haunting. I love it.



Author's Response:
I'm sorry that didn't happen, and that you have regrets.

Wow. I never know how to respond to this. I guess I don't notice his height, maybe I'm always wearing heels, or in a seated scenario. I don't know.

No, I've never been bitten by him, but I have watched The Howling IV in which the human character that he portrays sorta transitions into a werewolf character (hell of an improvement, because that Richard person character is aptly named, an absolute dick, and that's exactly how he got himself turned ino a fucking werewolf to begin with), and presumably werewolves do bite (disclaimer: I've never met a werewolf—probably because they don't exist—and cannot confirm that they do, in fact, bite) so I can understand how he'd be associated with biting. But, no, there was no wolfing out.

And no, I didn't freak out.

No, you aren't stupid. You're probably maybe a little bit nervous because he's famous. If it helps: a lot of people are famous now. Your neighbor probably has a podcast. It doesn't make anyone special. No, you aren't spineless (you wouldn't be able to type—or live—if you didn't have a spine). You're on a public website confiding your fear to me (and potentially billions of other people) which means you aren't spinless, and, wow, billions? Yeah, I know. If only. If only billions of people had good taste, yes?

I'd be glaring at the screen at Jarod while he sing-song purred some new awful thing in Parker's general direction during season twenty-nine (going on thirty) of The Pretender (instead of scribbling fanfic and assuring fans that the actors aren't werewolves) IF only.

You're not stupid.
You're not stupid.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/24
Rupture by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 61]
Summary:

This scriblet follows Incursion.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3612
Read Count: 149
[Report This] Published: 05/06/24 Updated: 05/06/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my gods!

You're always on top form, always captivating.

I can't get enough!

 

 



Author's Response:

Awesome. I'm glad you like it. Thanks.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/06/24
Peripeteia by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

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Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2913
Read Count: 204
[Report This] Published: 22/06/24 Updated: 22/06/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jarod is wearing white standing in light and Catherine is saying to parker what she said to Ethan... that Jarod is the one. Omg.

You're going to write Jarod being a real good guy??? That would be so different for you but I won't mind or anything.

I'm so excited for this Mirage.

I wonder how this will go.

I'm so excited.

I live this chapter!

I want more!

 

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/06/24