In Pieces.
Oooh snap another multi-chapter story from Mirage. I thought I had read this one years ago but I didn't. I was missing out. This one really hits. First chapter is sharp and plunges us into Centre action invoking ALL of The Pretender feels. Your writing is like magic or miracles. I love it.
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I love your ability to make the writing so vivid that I'm there with the characters, and I love how in character they all are. The action's terrific. I like the pacing, that you don't bog me down in excessive detail. You strike a balance that satisfies me.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed I'm a little afraid of how dark this might get. So far everything seems typical of the series. I'm really excited too because it feels like watching an episode. You are addicting.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Dark. Gloriously dark. Oh. *BOWS DEEPLY*
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Jarod always with the gentle nudge. I like this. They leave it open and unresolved during the tv series so this I like more, because either Ben is her father or Jarod is a cruel manipulative liar for leading Parker to believe that Ben is her father. I wouldn't want her to be with him if he lied and deceived her that much.Thank you for redeeming him.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed It is important for patients to try to remember what happened to them. Your Doctor Jarod is awesome by the way. Damn. SO hot. I can literally SEE them in everything you write. Gah. I love it so hard.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Those chapter titles. It was like that on the series. Jarod would be progress, a step forward, and then bam two steps back. The struggle is real with those 2.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed "Never." Oh, Jarod. I weep for that man. I commend the way he held it together when Parker told him the truth about his father. He was worried for her and cared about nothing else. That's how much he loves her. Amazing. The subtleties are brilliant.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Wow. A happy ending or the promise of one, and that's all we ever wanted. Oh, Mirage. I love this. I know you aren't a shipper but I'm thankful to you for giving us this amazing win. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed ...
Mirage this is exquisite. Gorgeous gorgeous piece of literature. My God. I'm stunned.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Miss Parker. Jarod. A kiss. Death.
Oh, my god did you just... kill .... Jarod? You killed Jarod? You killed Jarod.
Didn't you didn't you didn't you???!!
Seriously tho it's amazing that you thought to use the allergy that way. Even when you kill my MAN I love you. lol
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed A chance encounter with a past acquaintance is Jarod's undoing. Or is it?
♥ ♦ ♠ ♣
Ermagherd! Woot! I know I'm going to need a cold shower. Won't I?
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mirage this is awesome. They had SEX!
DAMN THAT IS HOT! Jarod did the hand to hand thing that they did on the glass when they were children ahhhhhhhh oh my god. He's in love with her. He loves her so much, would never hurt her and I'm just... WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU'RE NOT A SHIPPER?!!!!
YOU'RE WRITING THEM IN WAYS THAT EVEN HARDCORE SHIPPERS DON'T. maybe you have the perspective of being not too close and wanting it too bad that you're able to insert things like Jarod PUTTING HIS PALM AGAINST PARKER'S WHEN HE'S MAKING LOVE TO HER.
Oh my damn huge ass shipper heart.
I love this. Nothing will ever be better.
YOU RULE!
MORE OF THIS!! CONTINUE THIS PLEASE!
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed SHower. I need a cold shower. You knew I'd need a cold shower right?
I can't believe I'm just now reading this. I'm reading everything by you. You are the crack cocaine of literature.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed You're one of the few fans who suggest that Jarod has a dark side, but he does have a dark side. We saw it on the series. I think it would be easy for the leash to snap on the way he holds that darkness in. You don't seem to shy away from that or fault him for it too much. You might have something in common with Jarod. I think you might crave justice as much as he does, seeing the way Parker wants to destroy the Triumvirate. I love it. I want more of this!
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Twincest. With a twist!
Holy SHIT Mirage. This took my breath.... like that song from Top Gun. HOT! DOwn in flames... oh my God. HOT! I want more!
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed He's waiting.
Beautiful. I love this.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed This DIFFERENT ENDING. I want it. I love it. Thank you for writing it.
Not a shipper. Wow. Amazing.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Parker corners Jarod. Or does she?
Oh here we go! I'm definitely gonna need that cold shower.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Phew.. trying to THINK COLD SHOWER THOUGHTS .. I'm not gonna make it. THIS IS HOT!
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed So I watched Iowa recently. Michael's character has the girl in chains and is being terrible and he has a a blow torch he's threatening her.
But this tho is consensual and it's nice and it's just a whip.
I love this.
So don't watch Iowa. It might be troubling to see that.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed OH MY GOD. Parker turned that one around and I FUCKING LOVE IT! Ooohh baby. HOT. Too late for the shower.
I had to do a whole thing that I can't even talk about.
You could write porn you know? You could. You are amazing. This is hot. It's exactly what should have happened during the series. Please continue or do something similar. It's so hot.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Jarod has an epiphany. (payback doesn't have to be a bitch)
Changing the story indeedy. Oh, Mirage. This is magical. You're magical. I love your writing. Wow.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed Jarod wants something more.
I need more of this. NOW!
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A crime scene, a chance meeting, two people transcending the lives chosen for them. Jarod POV. S.M.U.T.
GOLD. This is GOLD. You blow me away.
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