Your ability to transport me into the scene slays!

Lyle is exquisite. Your characterisations are always exquisite and spot on.

I need more .

NOW

Oooh, the wise and talented Mirage grabbing my hand and yanking me in again. You're a wordsmith! Listen tho, I've read everything here, my own stuff included, and you are a star. I'm hooked with your first sentence and you hold my attention and you know how to write and tell a story. But something else you do like a PRO is you KNOW these characters. Reading you is like being there and watching these people up close. This could esaily be the continuation picking up where IOTH left us so disappointed, and nevermind the reboot that was even more disappointing.

You capture the characters and dynamics brilliantly and bring the characters to life and your descriptive work is amazing. You set the scene beautifully. The action in this is bar none perfection. The chemistry is off the charts and you capture that like a boss. The movements and interactions between the characters are so awesomely written and you transition like a pro for ease of reading. I love it.

You understand the assignment, Mirage. This is classic Jarod tho "

love!! I want more. Now.

More! I love this. Wow, you're a wordsmith and awesome storyteller.

Oh, wow wow 😮🤯🤯 so intense, so in character. I need more. This is amazing writing as always!

I can't get enough! thanks for saving me from Xmas crap too. I need more of you!!!

well done ✅.  The idea to put dogs in hot dogs must have been Asmet "dr." Oz the mass dog killer's idea.? This needed to be written and I'm ashamed I didn't think of it myself.

😭 I love this. It's so beautiful the way Jarod tells her it's her turn to listen. She is his life!!!!!

I love that the safehouse is like concealed among houses where it looks like dozens of families live but it's all an illusion.

A new normal..I look forward to reading more of their new normal.

You have so much of a tragedy going on in your life and I can't tell it from reading this.

It doesn't show at all.

You were born to write this. Please continue when you can.  Remember to check in with us on your life too.💖💖💖

Oh amazeballs!! Now gotta say firstly I didn't know you had updated. Feels weird updating right on top of you like this... sorry? I can delete and wait? S

econdly my god I love this. You are still my favorite author, like of anything.. Pretender things are my favorite things, so I will judge everything by the Pretender anyway.

Jarod just coming at Parker with the truth.

Broots is so grateful to Jarod for wrestling death and bringing Parker back to life that he will call Jarod first if anything goes wrong with Parker.

Just that one little push from Jarod when he's talking about how it all might be tangled in her mind.. yeah. That's super plausible, canon, and in character for both of them because on the KEYS episode

Jarod started spouting off about "especially traumatic ones" and Parker just cut her eyes to the side and seemed to shudder and be uncomfortable and said, "I can take care of myself!!!"  She can't accept his help, can't deal with him being shrinky. And he knows that she can't deal with him that way. It's too much history.

It's so plausible, so in character. I love it.

You nail Broots too. I'm so impressed.

I hope you will read my story sometime if you can and if you DARE.. mine is so dark right now. You don't have to review me. I understand.

I love this. Keep going please.