Penname: Jami [Contact]

Real name: Jami Shaw

Member Since: 06/10/21

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm here to blow off steam and have fun. Kids shouldn't read my writing.


 


 




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Blindsided by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4235
[Report This] Published: 23/12/21 Updated: 18/04/24


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay, oh wowz, Jarod kicked that sob's ass all over the place. What a painful and appropriate method of tattoo removal!!

So. much depth and texture and ooh richness!

I love this!!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/23
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Your ability to transport me into the scene slays!

Lyle is exquisite. Your characterisations are always exquisite and spot on.

I need more .

NOW

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/04/24
Sine Qua Non by Mirage
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Finished business.



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 82
Read Count: 1201
[Report This] Published: 30/06/22 Updated: 30/06/22


Title: Chapter 1: Justice

Ahhh yes. You've definitely pegged Jarod and I can tell he's in a little roadside diner ... isn't he? How do you write something this profound with only 80 words? I'm blown away again by your gifts. This needed to be written so badly. Thank you thank you thank you so so much.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/22
Pis Aller by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

A last resort



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 4704
[Report This] Published: 28/09/22 Updated: 01/03/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, the wise and talented Mirage grabbing my hand and yanking me in again. You're a wordsmith! Listen tho, I've read everything here, my own stuff included, and you are a star. I'm hooked with your first sentence and you hold my attention and you know how to write and tell a story. But something else you do like a PRO is you KNOW these characters. Reading you is like being there and watching these people up close. This could esaily be the continuation picking up where IOTH left us so disappointed, and nevermind the reboot that was even more disappointing.

You capture the characters and dynamics brilliantly and bring the characters to life and your descriptive work is amazing. You set the scene beautifully. The action in this is bar none perfection. The chemistry is off the charts and you capture that like a boss. The movements and interactions between the characters are so awesomely written and you transition like a pro for ease of reading. I love it.

You understand the assignment, Mirage. This is classic Jarod tho "

"... observed Jarod shake the magazine from the gun, and ensure the chamber was clear.

"Oh, right, protection," Jarod purred, nonchalantly tossing the gun aside. He sidled closer to Parker, and whispered into her hair, "Protection. Tell me," he drawled, "how's that working out for you, hmm?"

 

love!! I want more. Now.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jami.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/09/22
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is what I'm talking about! I didn't expect another update so quickly.Am in love 💕. More!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/22
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

More! I love this. Wow, you're a wordsmith and awesome storyteller.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jami.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/10/22
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You know Jarod will want to blow up something of Lyle's instead of any other options. Does this mean Broots is going to have a fake death in the explosion? I can't wait for more. Thank you to the moon and back for sharing your gifts with us. 💕

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/10/22
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, wow wow 😮🤯🤯 so intense, so in character. I need more. This is amazing writing as always!

I can't get enough! thanks for saving me from Xmas crap too. I need more of you!!!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/12/23
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh wow this was amazing. Parker doesn't like owning anyone and wants to pay immediately not have debts.  This is so in character. Isaac is adorable. I can't wait to find out in the sequel if the implosion goes as planned.

Thank you for this! We can't let the series die.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/24
Summary:

The pursuit for Jarod turns deadly in this present day Dystopia. Who will die and who will live?

Let's find out.



Categories: Post IOTH, Post Rebirth
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Musing, Comedy, Drama, Romance, Smut, Suspence/Mystery, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1448
Read Count: 9884
[Report This] Published: 08/10/22 Updated: 08/10/22


Title: Chapter 1: Fallen Angels in the Satan's Playground

well done ✅.  The idea to put dogs in hot dogs must have been Asmet "dr." Oz the mass dog killer's idea.? This needed to be written and I'm ashamed I didn't think of it myself.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/22
A Friend In Need ... by Xena
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

 

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

 

 



Categories: Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1030
Read Count: 10923
[Report This] Published: 08/06/23 Updated: 08/06/23


Title: Chapter 1: A Friend In Need

Oh, snap!! Yas! I hope he doesn't doublecross or try to talk her into gestation and giving birth. Gawd, it's not like humans are an endangered species or somethink. It's not born it's not breathing it's not alive. Parker is born and breathing and alive and it's her uterus. The US lost its damn mind again regressing while every other country progresses.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/23
Summary:

Part six of The Return series.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: The Return
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 288
[Report This] Published: 14/11/23 Updated: 14/11/23


Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind Of Freedom

😭 I love this. It's so beautiful the way Jarod tells her it's her turn to listen. She is his life!!!!!

I love that the safehouse is like concealed among houses where it looks like dozens of families live but it's all an illusion.

A new normal..I look forward to reading more of their new normal.

You have so much of a tragedy going on in your life and I can't tell it from reading this.

It doesn't show at all.

You were born to write this. Please continue when you can.  Remember to check in with us on your life too.💖💖💖

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/11/23
Incursion by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

This scribblet follows Asphyxia.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Catherine Parker, Jarod, Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1113
Read Count: 178
[Report This] Published: 24/01/24 Updated: 24/01/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh so much suspense and intrigue. You go to places I've never known and can't imagine on my own. It's always so fresh. You know how to keep me entertained and I thank you so much for each gift you give us. I'm inspired as always.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/01/24