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Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4235
I'm here to blow off steam and have fun. Kids shouldn't read my writing.
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Yay, oh wowz, Jarod kicked that sob's ass all over the place. What a painful and appropriate method of tattoo removal!!
So. much depth and texture and ooh richness!
I love this!!
Reviewer: Jami SignedYour ability to transport me into the scene slays!
Lyle is exquisite. Your characterisations are always exquisite and spot on.
I need more .
NOW
Reviewer: Jami SignedFinished business.
Ahhh yes. You've definitely pegged Jarod and I can tell he's in a little roadside diner ... isn't he? How do you write something this profound with only 80 words? I'm blown away again by your gifts. This needed to be written so badly. Thank you thank you thank you so so much.
Reviewer: Jami SignedA last resort
Oooh, the wise and talented Mirage grabbing my hand and yanking me in again. You're a wordsmith! Listen tho, I've read everything here, my own stuff included, and you are a star. I'm hooked with your first sentence and you hold my attention and you know how to write and tell a story. But something else you do like a PRO is you KNOW these characters. Reading you is like being there and watching these people up close. This could esaily be the continuation picking up where IOTH left us so disappointed, and nevermind the reboot that was even more disappointing.
You capture the characters and dynamics brilliantly and bring the characters to life and your descriptive work is amazing. You set the scene beautifully. The action in this is bar none perfection. The chemistry is off the charts and you capture that like a boss. The movements and interactions between the characters are so awesomely written and you transition like a pro for ease of reading. I love it.
You understand the assignment, Mirage. This is classic Jarod tho "
love!! I want more. Now.
Thanks, Jami.
Reviewer: Jami SignedThis is what I'm talking about! I didn't expect another update so quickly.Am in love 💕. More!
Reviewer: Jami SignedMore! I love this. Wow, you're a wordsmith and awesome storyteller.
Thanks, Jami.
Reviewer: Jami SignedYou know Jarod will want to blow up something of Lyle's instead of any other options. Does this mean Broots is going to have a fake death in the explosion? I can't wait for more. Thank you to the moon and back for sharing your gifts with us. 💕
Reviewer: Jami SignedOh, wow wow 😮🤯🤯 so intense, so in character. I need more. This is amazing writing as always!
I can't get enough! thanks for saving me from Xmas crap too. I need more of you!!!
Reviewer: Jami Signedoh wow this was amazing. Parker doesn't like owning anyone and wants to pay immediately not have debts. This is so in character. Isaac is adorable. I can't wait to find out in the sequel if the implosion goes as planned.
Thank you for this! We can't let the series die.
Reviewer: Jami SignedThe pursuit for Jarod turns deadly in this present day Dystopia. Who will die and who will live?
Let's find out.
well done ✅. The idea to put dogs in hot dogs must have been Asmet "dr." Oz the mass dog killer's idea.? This needed to be written and I'm ashamed I didn't think of it myself.
Reviewer: Jami Signed
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Oh, snap!! Yas! I hope he doesn't doublecross or try to talk her into gestation and giving birth. Gawd, it's not like humans are an endangered species or somethink. It's not born it's not breathing it's not alive. Parker is born and breathing and alive and it's her uterus. The US lost its damn mind again regressing while every other country progresses.
Reviewer: Jami SignedPart six of The Return series.
😠I love this. It's so beautiful the way Jarod tells her it's her turn to listen. She is his life!!!!!
I love that the safehouse is like concealed among houses where it looks like dozens of families live but it's all an illusion.
A new normal..I look forward to reading more of their new normal.
You have so much of a tragedy going on in your life and I can't tell it from reading this.
It doesn't show at all.
You were born to write this. Please continue when you can. Remember to check in with us on your life too.💖💖💖
Reviewer: Jami SignedThis scribblet follows Asphyxia.
Oooh so much suspense and intrigue. You go to places I've never known and can't imagine on my own. It's always so fresh. You know how to keep me entertained and I thank you so much for each gift you give us. I'm inspired as always.
Reviewer: Jami Signed