ooih God I love this already.

This is freaking amazing! I love how you use Jarod's allergy and Parker's knowledge of it. so original and I...wow, I would've never have thought of this! You're a genius!

one more thing. SEQUEL!

SEQUEL SEQUEL!

OMG I love this and everything you write. I need to be writing my own fics not constantly reading yours. GROWLS!! Why are you so addicting? I'm sad to see this is over but it's so beautiful and I love your eloquent prose and turns of phrases and these are the characters. It's been a pleasure. Thank you thank you thank you.

oh!! oh wowsers I love this. just read this entire series all parts and will have to go back and review those lol got so lost and addicted I just kept clicking next instead of reviewing. I love this and want more now please!

Oh yeah! You boldly go where no one has before. I love this. Some of us ship incest ships because the of the way series on tv played with incest and planted the thought in us. Your end notes were spot on. Lyle and Jarod should be siblings and should be together. But Jarod being Parker's bio dad is freaking awesome too. You kind of make me sick how well you write and how addictive you are. I need to be writing my own fics instead of reading yours over and over! Rah! Let them be bio father and daughter. Let them stay together. I love it.

I am going to review every chapter but right now gotta say my mind is blown out of my head....how do you even write like that???! It's so perfect and I am envious. Please continue it's been a pleasure.

Holy goddesses woman you are kicking *ss! You are a natural and so amazing. They are always like I remember them when you write them. I just want more and more. Please?

Thank you for checking in, and oh...bless ...you didn't have to explain anything to us. You have a clear voice. We knew it was bad and no one expected you to have to explain. We weren't expecting a story either, but should have been because the nature of the situation means you have time and need to do something quiet to filland you're not a telly watcher.  I think it's good to have a hobby too, something you can do quietly and I think it will keep your mind active and give you something to think about, and this fandom especially is helpful. I encourage you for selfish and unselfish reasons.

I think it makes sense that this fandom would be the distraction and with the mental health elements and compassionate moments I think this is the best series you could happen to have as hobby to write.

I think it will good for you. Reading you has been good for me.

Your words are like therapy. You are real, honest. You aren't afraid. You confront issues that most run from and it helps me.

You were always meant to write this series. I'm not surprised at all that this series found it's way to you...even tho you never watched telly. It finds the people who need it I believe.

Been really worried about you. You have so much to do and I know it's stressful and painful. Keep taking care of yourself too and I wish you and your SO well.

I'm glad your surgery went well, and ... omg your egg donor sounds like a terrible person. You deserved better treatment and love, not that from the woman who gave birth to you. .I wish no one had asked .. I asked and others asked but none of us were thinking child abuse...I thought maybe car accident... I'm so sorry.. OMG. but I'm glad you seemed to have made peace with it. You're really healthy and I'm proud of you for not trying to protect her.

Stay healthy. Let us know how things are going.

Impressive as always. Plausible, perfect. You rule

Oooh o oo! So Parker takes Jarod in?! Oh, wow. He's not going to break back out in the next chapter is he.. it's always disapointing when he doesn't get to stay for awhile.

So I'm trying to unbox all of this and... what a perfect gift box you've arranged for us Mirage!! THANK YOU AGAIN before I continue...

So... in the second sentence we see that Parker is in disbelief just like Jarod is. She can't believe it's happening either ... suggesting she didn't expect Lyle to show up. She thought she'd break Jarod out and... let him go?? She's always let Jarod go. It's like their thing, their unspoken arrangement. She caught him, brought him to her house for the hypnosis and let him walk away.... which was hella surprising for someone who wants him back so bad so this... her disbelief in the second sentence is based on always letting him go.

Her next move is to give him fuel...his goal is fuel too, again both of them are insync with his plans to have the energy to escape.

She's got so much confusion in her mind...trying not to answer his questions, just wanting to get through it. Then he asks if she thinks he's dangerous after Carthis, she interrupted before he talked about the almostKISS, and I think she's disassociating here, but I also think... maybe she wonders if Jarod's guilty? Do you know in that episode where the Centre locks down and Briggie plans to blow up Mr. Parker's helicopters... Parker had to hear and see her MR Parker cry for Catherine before she continued on to save his life. This theory goes along with Parker always talking about the emotional umbilical between Sydney and Jarod and Jarod jumps right in to ask about snapping. I think Jarod not wanting to talk about Miuna when Parker mentioned her could have been misinterpreatated by Parker as Jarod not caring about the girl.

The verbal assaults are the same fear-anger chain reactions we've seen in the past from them. Jarod went a little too far tho cos he's desperate and we've seen Parker visibly wounded before like that, and it would hurt something awful when she's already vulnerable like this.. with her plans being messed up by Lyle's arrival and her not believing the reality that Jarod's going back to the Centre, and with this girl's brutal murder, too. We've seen before on the tv that she has a lot of sympathy and humanity for someone who is supposed to be so bad ass so this murder would bother her. Parker is right about ending up like her mother, and was right in the car limo in Scotland too. They were surrounded by guns, outgunned.

Lyle was perfectly in character, too. Wow. Amazing, Mirage.

That last line means Jarod will be giving them big trouble I bet. I can't wait. Jarod back in the Centre. No last minute escapes, gun fights, or his dad swinging in like Tarzan. Brilliantly done.

Please update this soon. It's so freaking intriguing and I want to know more about the woman Jarod met.  I have a question for you. I'm thinking about how it is to meet the actors from this series. Are they nice? Friendly? Were you scared to meet any of them? Is Michael scary or nice? I really want to meet him. I'm really nervous about meeting him. Is he scary or anything?! Tell me what to do please....and please please update your work.