Characters: Angelo, Other Centre Character
Classifications: Genres: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 451
Read Count: 2246
I'm here to blow off steam and have fun. Kids shouldn't read my writing.
So I'm giving you a standing ovation. I can walk and type on my phone at the same time so it's all good.
I got chill bumps.
I got tears.
Mirage., you are a genius. Like I said in another review of another story of yours earlier you are versatile. I'm over here thinking you're the queen of smut but no, I think that was just to appease some of the readers considering how much you don't ship Jarod and Parker and say you hate writing smut. This was beautiful, succinct, poignant. It's so Angelo.
"And yet, in his waking hours, the vents surrounding Angelo undulated in shades of grey and silence.
But he dreamed in color."
I'm so blown away. In tears. You made me weep.
Reviewer: Jami Signed
In 2002, the corporation known as the Centre was infiltrated by various law enforcement agencies that acted in a synchronized global effort to eradicate the organization. And then one day, Jarod's huntress ran away.
ooih God I love this already.Reviewer: Jami Signed
I'm loving me some Janeane. Are you Janeane? or Celeste? I love all your original characters!Reviewer: Jami Signed
Miss Parker. Jarod. A kiss. Death.
This is freaking amazing! I love how you use Jarod's allergy and Parker's knowledge of it. so original and I...wow, I would've never have thought of this! You're a genius!Reviewer: Jami Signed
Twincest. With a twist!
Wait what? You are versatile as... Jarod. Are you a pretender, Mirage? Where has this been all of my life. I love this. I hope you don' t mind me having a Mirageathon over here but you're addictive and you're the one author that holds my attention and keeps me coming back. My God tho Woman you have written a masterpiece.
"No," Murmured Jarod, his voice strained and tremulous, the command directed not at Parker, but at himself. Jarod wouldn't regret his disobedience, the absence of discipline, propriety's fierce and glorious death."
"Surrender burned white hot, tasted bittersweet; the blaze roared through their bodies, their condemned hearts.
Moral atrophy felt strangely righteous.
There was an abject honesty in the collapse of convention, a brilliant truth in the lies they had been told.
Logic defied logic; the pieces fit—even if they weren't supposed to."
Holy hellfire! Compelling and brilliant. You've outdone yourself.You always outdo yourself. And then that song at the end by Muse, one of my fav bands, to crown it all off. You're the queen.Reviewer: Jami Signed
one more thing. SEQUEL!
SEQUEL SEQUEL!Reviewer: Jami Signed
By now I would have thought you'd be converted to shipping Jarod and Parker. Brilliant writing. More please?Reviewer: Jami Signed
oh!! oh wowsers I love this. just read this entire series all parts and will have to go back and review those lol got so lost and addicted I just kept clicking next instead of reviewing. I love this and want more now please!Reviewer: Jami Signed
A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
checking in...are you ok??? not mad just hoping all is well and if you need an ear...you got my email ady from all the times I reviewed you that way.
you've always been there for me and many of us... to listen, advise, help with fics
, and you would listen and help anyone even Jarod ðŸ˜‰ðŸ˜œ..and every now and then maybe you
need someone too??? I love this story and will patiently wait . take care of you.Reviewer: Jami Signed
Oh yeah! You boldly go where no one has before. I love this. Some of us ship incest ships because the of the way series on tv played with incest and planted the thought in us. Your end notes were spot on. Lyle and Jarod should be siblings and should be together. But Jarod being Parker's bio dad is freaking awesome too. You kind of make me sick how well you write and how addictive you are. I need to be writing my own fics instead of reading yours over and over! Rah! Let them be bio father and daughter. Let them stay together. I love it.Reviewer: Jami Signed
Awesome job. I love your work!Reviewer: Jami Signed
I am going to review every chapter but right now gotta say my mind is blown out of my head....how do you even write like that???! It's so perfect and I am envious. Please continue it's been a pleasure.Reviewer: Jami Signed
Holy goddesses woman you are kicking *ss! You are a natural and so amazing. They are always like I remember them when you write them. I just want more and more. Please?Reviewer: Jami Signed
Wild Horses prequel.
Impressive as always. Plausible, perfect. You ruleReviewer: Jami Signed
Nothing like her mother.
Damn I mean... damn.
No more words needed
Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Jami.Reviewer: Jami Signed
Oooh o oo! So Parker takes Jarod in?! Oh, wow. He's not going to break back out in the next chapter is he.. it's always disapointing when he doesn't get to stay for awhile.
So I'm trying to unbox all of this and... what a perfect gift box you've arranged for us Mirage!! THANK YOU AGAIN before I continue...
So... in the second sentence we see that Parker is in disbelief just like Jarod is. She can't believe it's happening either ... suggesting she didn't expect Lyle to show up. She thought she'd break Jarod out and... let him go?? She's always let Jarod go. It's like their thing, their unspoken arrangement. She caught him, brought him to her house for the hypnosis and let him walk away.... which was hella surprising for someone who wants him back so bad so this... her disbelief in the second sentence is based on always letting him go.
Her next move is to give him fuel...his goal is fuel too, again both of them are insync with his plans to have the energy to escape.
She's got so much confusion in her mind...trying not to answer his questions, just wanting to get through it. Then he asks if she thinks he's dangerous after Carthis, she interrupted before he talked about the almostKISS, and I think she's disassociating here, but I also think... maybe she wonders if Jarod's guilty? Do you know in that episode where the Centre locks down and Briggie plans to blow up Mr. Parker's helicopters... Parker had to hear and see her MR Parker cry for Catherine before she continued on to save his life. This theory goes along with Parker always talking about the emotional umbilical between Sydney and Jarod and Jarod jumps right in to ask about snapping. I think Jarod not wanting to talk about Miuna when Parker mentioned her could have been misinterpreatated by Parker as Jarod not caring about the girl.
The verbal assaults are the same fear-anger chain reactions we've seen in the past from them. Jarod went a little too far tho cos he's desperate and we've seen Parker visibly wounded before like that, and it would hurt something awful when she's already vulnerable like this.. with her plans being messed up by Lyle's arrival and her not believing the reality that Jarod's going back to the Centre, and with this girl's brutal murder, too. We've seen before on the tv that she has a lot of sympathy and humanity for someone who is supposed to be so bad ass so this murder would bother her. Parker is right about ending up like her mother, and was right in the car limo in Scotland too. They were surrounded by guns, outgunned.
Lyle was perfectly in character, too. Wow. Amazing, Mirage.
That last line means Jarod will be giving them big trouble I bet. I can't wait. Jarod back in the Centre. No last minute escapes, gun fights, or his dad swinging in like Tarzan. Brilliantly done.
Reviewer: Jami Signed
Oh, snap! I love how crime-mystery-suspense this is and in this day when police brutality is everywhere it's appropriate. I love that Miss Parker is take-no-prisoners. You always put these characters where they need to be in a plausible and sometimes frightening way. *BOWS* Please write more of this and please please add a Forces of Nature and Cirlces of Hell sequel and continue Devil's Advocate and The Return. Have a great winter festivus!Reviewer: Jami Signed
Please update this soon. It's so freaking intriguing and I want to know more about the woman Jarod met. I have a question for you. I'm thinking about how it is to meet the actors from this series. Are they nice? Friendly? Were you scared to meet any of them? Is Michael scary or nice? I really want to meet him. I'm really nervous about meeting him. Is he scary or anything?! Tell me what to do please....and please please update your work.
Reviewer: Jami Signed
Ooh so juicy and so noir-ish. I really liked Miuna. Her youth is evident, and she had so much courage and strength. My grandmum is Finnish so I enjoy seeing some of her language. You're really keeping it real and your writing voice is powerful... it's like I can see everything going on. I should be writing my own stuff but I live love yours so damn much I can't stop reading!Reviewer: Jami Signed
Ahhh yes. You've definitely pegged Jarod and I can tell he's in a little roadside diner ... isn't he? How do you write something this profound with only 80 words? I'm blown away again by your gifts. This needed to be written so badly. Thank you thank you thank you so so much.Reviewer: Jami Signed
A last resort
Oooh, the wise and talented Mirage grabbing my hand and yanking me in again. You're a wordsmith! Listen tho, I've read everything here, my own stuff included, and you are a star. I'm hooked with your first sentence and you hold my attention and you know how to write and tell a story. But something else you do like a PRO is you KNOW these characters. Reading you is like being there and watching these people up close. This could esaily be the continuation picking up where IOTH left us so disappointed, and nevermind the reboot that was even more disappointing.
You capture the characters and dynamics brilliantly and bring the characters to life and your descriptive work is amazing. You set the scene beautifully. The action in this is bar none perfection. The chemistry is off the charts and you capture that like a boss. The movements and interactions between the characters are so awesomely written and you transition like a pro for ease of reading. I love it.
You understand the assignment, Mirage. This is classic Jarod tho "
love!! I want more. Now.
Thanks, Jami.Reviewer: Jami Signed
This is what I'm talking about! I didn't expect another update so quickly.Am in love ðŸ’•. More!Reviewer: Jami Signed
More! I love this. Wow, you're a wordsmith and awesome storyteller.
Thanks, Jami.Reviewer: Jami Signed
You know Jarod will want to blow up something of Lyle's instead of any other options. Does this mean Broots is going to have a fake death in the explosion? I can't wait for more. Thank you to the moon and back for sharing your gifts with us. ðŸ’•Reviewer: Jami Signed
The pursuit for Jarod turns deadly in this present day Dystopia. Who will die and who will live?
Let's find out.
well done âœ…. The idea to put dogs in hot dogs must have been Asmet "dr." Oz the mass dog killer's idea.? This needed to be written and I'm ashamed I didn't think of it myself.Reviewer: Jami Signed