Penname: Jami [Contact]

Real name: Jami Shaw

Member Since: 06/10/21

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm here to blow off steam and have fun. Kids shouldn't read my writing.


 


 




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In Color by Mirage
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Angelo, Other Centre Character
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: Dreams
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 451
Read Count: 2246
[Report This] Published: 24/06/09 Updated: 24/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: In Color

So I'm giving you a standing ovation. I can walk and type on my phone at the same time so it's all good.

I got chill bumps.

I got tears.

Mirage., you are a genius. Like I said in another review of another story of yours earlier you are versatile. I'm over here thinking you're the queen of smut but no, I think that was just to appease some of the readers considering how much you don't ship Jarod and Parker and say you hate writing smut. This was beautiful, succinct, poignant. It's so Angelo.

 

"And yet, in his waking hours, the vents surrounding Angelo undulated in shades of grey and silence. 

Grey.

But he dreamed in color."

I'm so blown away. In tears. You made me weep.

 

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/09/22
Retired
Nemesis by Mirage
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary:

In 2002, the corporation known as the Centre was infiltrated by various law enforcement agencies that acted in a synchronized global effort to eradicate the organization. And then one day, Jarod's huntress ran away.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73516
Read Count: 272849
[Report This] Published: 23/11/09 Updated: 24/05/11


Title: Chapter 1: And Then One Day

ooih God I love this already.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/10/22
Title: Chapter 2: Bait

I'm loving me some Janeane. Are you Janeane? or Celeste? I love all your original characters!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/10/22
Kiss of Death by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Miss Parker. Jarod. A kiss. Death.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 593
Read Count: 2794
[Report This] Published: 27/07/10 Updated: 27/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Kiss of Death

This is freaking amazing! I love how you use Jarod's allergy and Parker's knowledge of it. so original and I...wow, I would've never have thought of this! You're a genius!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/23
Combustion by Mirage
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Twincest. With a twist!

 



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1539
Read Count: 9576
[Report This] Published: 24/09/11 Updated: 24/09/11


Title: Chapter 1: Going Down in Flames

Wait what? You are versatile as... Jarod. Are you a pretender, Mirage? Where has this been all of my life. I love this. I hope you don' t mind me having a Mirageathon over here but you're addictive and you're the one author that holds my attention and keeps me coming back.  My God tho Woman you have written a masterpiece.

 

"No," Murmured Jarod, his voice strained and tremulous, the command directed not at Parker, but at himself. Jarod wouldn't regret his disobedience, the absence of discipline, propriety's fierce and glorious death."

"Surrender burned white hot, tasted bittersweet; the blaze roared through their bodies, their condemned hearts.

Moral atrophy felt strangely righteous.

There was an abject honesty in the collapse of convention, a brilliant truth in the lies they had been told.

Logic defied logic; the pieces fiteven if they weren't supposed to."

Holy hellfire! Compelling and brilliant. You've outdone yourself.You always outdo yourself. And then that song at the end by Muse, one of my fav bands, to crown it all off. You're the queen.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/09/22
Title: Chapter 1: Going Down in Flames

one more thing. SEQUEL!

SEQUEL SEQUEL!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/09/22
Summary:


Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Return
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 39350
Read Count: 5075
[Report This] Published: 04/11/16 Updated: 04/08/22


Title: Chapter 11: Trust

By now I would have thought you'd be converted to shipping Jarod and Parker. Brilliant writing. More please?

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/22
Title: Chapter 11: Trust

oh!! oh wowsers I love this. just read this entire series all parts and will have to go back and review those lol got so lost and addicted I just kept clicking next instead of reviewing. I love this and want more now please!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/22
Oblivion by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 398]
Summary:

A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45131
Read Count: 50631
[Report This] Published: 24/12/16 Updated: 24/03/23


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

checking in...are you ok??? not mad just hoping all is well and if you need an ear...you got my email ady from all the times I reviewed you that way.

you've always been there for me and many of us... to listen, advise, help with fics

, and you would listen and help anyone even Jarod 😉😜..and every now and then maybe you

need someone too??? I love this story and will patiently wait . take care of you.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/23
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh yeah! You boldly go where no one has before. I love this. Some of us ship incest ships because the of the way series on tv played with incest and planted the thought in us. Your end notes were spot on. Lyle and Jarod should be siblings and should be together. But Jarod being Parker's bio dad is freaking awesome too. You kind of make me sick how well you write and how addictive you are. I need to be writing my own fics instead of reading yours over and over! Rah! Let them be bio father and daughter. Let them stay together. I love it.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/03/23
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome job. I love your work!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/11/21
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am going to review every chapter but right now gotta say my mind is blown out of my head....how do you even write like that???! It's so perfect and I am envious. Please continue it's been a pleasure.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/04/22
Lacunae by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 211]
Summary:

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Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 35200
Read Count: 62441
[Report This] Published: 25/03/18 Updated: 19/05/22


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy goddesses woman you are kicking *ss! You are a natural and so amazing. They are always like I remember them when you write them. I just want more and more. Please?

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/05/22
Asphyxia by Mirage
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Wild Horses prequel.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1957
Read Count: 445
[Report This] Published: 22/12/18 Updated: 22/12/18


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Impressive as always. Plausible, perfect. You rule

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/09/22
Slumber by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Nothing like her mother.



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Catherine Parker, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 89
Read Count: 500
[Report This] Published: 03/12/21 Updated: 03/12/21


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn I mean... damn.

mind=blown

No more words needed

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Jami.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/12/21
Blindsided by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary:

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 6059
Read Count: 1754
[Report This] Published: 23/12/21 Updated: 11/05/23


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oooh o oo! So Parker takes Jarod in?! Oh, wow. He's not going to break back out in the next chapter is he.. it's always disapointing when he doesn't get to stay for awhile.

So I'm trying to unbox all of this and... what a perfect gift box you've arranged for us Mirage!! THANK YOU AGAIN before I continue...

So... in the second sentence we see that Parker is in disbelief just like Jarod is. She can't believe it's happening either ... suggesting she didn't expect Lyle to show up. She thought she'd break Jarod out and... let him go?? She's always let Jarod go. It's like their thing, their unspoken arrangement. She caught him, brought him to her house for the hypnosis and let him walk away.... which was hella surprising for someone who wants him back so bad so this... her disbelief in the second sentence is based on always letting him go.

Her next move is to give him fuel...his goal is fuel too, again both of them are insync with his plans to have the energy to escape.

She's got so much confusion in her mind...trying not to answer his questions, just wanting to get through it. Then he asks if she thinks he's dangerous after Carthis, she interrupted before he talked about the almostKISS, and I think she's disassociating here, but I also think... maybe she wonders if Jarod's guilty? Do you know in that episode where the Centre locks down and Briggie plans to blow up Mr. Parker's helicopters... Parker had to hear and see her MR Parker cry for Catherine before she continued on to save his life. This theory goes along with Parker always talking about the emotional umbilical between Sydney and Jarod and Jarod jumps right in to ask about snapping. I think Jarod not wanting to talk about Miuna when Parker mentioned her could have been misinterpreatated by Parker as Jarod not caring about the girl.

The verbal assaults are the same fear-anger chain reactions we've seen in the past from them. Jarod went a little too far tho cos he's desperate and we've seen Parker visibly wounded before like that, and it would hurt something awful when she's already vulnerable like this.. with her plans being messed up by Lyle's arrival and her not believing the reality that Jarod's going back to the Centre, and with this girl's brutal murder, too. We've seen before on the tv that she has a lot of sympathy and humanity for someone who is supposed to be so bad ass so this murder would bother her. Parker is right about ending up like her mother, and was right in the car limo in Scotland too. They were surrounded by guns, outgunned.

Lyle was perfectly in character, too. Wow. Amazing, Mirage.

That last line means Jarod will be giving them big trouble I bet. I can't wait. Jarod back in the Centre. No last minute escapes, gun fights, or his dad swinging in like Tarzan. Brilliantly done.

 

 

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/23
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, snap! I love how crime-mystery-suspense this is and in this day when police brutality is everywhere it's appropriate. I love that Miss Parker is take-no-prisoners. You always put these characters where they need to be in a plausible and sometimes frightening way. *BOWS* Please write more of this and please please add a Forces of Nature and Cirlces of Hell sequel and continue Devil's Advocate and The Return. Have a great winter festivus!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/12/21
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Please update this soon. It's so freaking intriguing and I want to know more about the woman Jarod met.  I have a question for you. I'm thinking about how it is to meet the actors from this series. Are they nice? Friendly? Were you scared to meet any of them? Is Michael scary or nice? I really want to meet him. I'm really nervous about meeting him. Is he scary or anything?! Tell me what to do please....and please please update your work.



Author's Response:
Nice, yes. No, I wasn't scared. None of them seem scary.
 
I can't tell you what to do, Jami.
 
If you're too nervous to meet them you don't have to. No pressure.
If you want to meet them while also being nervous it's certainly an option.
Or if you one day decide that you want to meet them more than you're nervous about meeting them that's okay, too.
If you want to unpack, demystify, and resolve what you're nervous about that's cool, too (some people are shy, some people don't know how to approach them, it's the fame thing that worries some people, and a couple of fandomly members have mentioned being intimidated by taller people. No one's judging).

Thanks for reading and for the review.

 

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/23
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooh so juicy and so noir-ish. I really liked Miuna. Her youth is evident, and she had so much courage and strength. My grandmum is Finnish so I enjoy seeing some of her language. You're really keeping it real and your writing voice is powerful... it's like I can see everything going on. I should be writing my own stuff but I live love yours so damn much I can't stop reading!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/23
Sine Qua Non by Mirage
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Finished business.



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 82
Read Count: 403
[Report This] Published: 30/06/22 Updated: 30/06/22


Title: Chapter 1: Justice

Ahhh yes. You've definitely pegged Jarod and I can tell he's in a little roadside diner ... isn't he? How do you write something this profound with only 80 words? I'm blown away again by your gifts. This needed to be written so badly. Thank you thank you thank you so so much.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/22
Pis Aller by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 141]
Summary:

A last resort



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 7734
Read Count: 1689
[Report This] Published: 28/09/22 Updated: 28/01/23


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, the wise and talented Mirage grabbing my hand and yanking me in again. You're a wordsmith! Listen tho, I've read everything here, my own stuff included, and you are a star. I'm hooked with your first sentence and you hold my attention and you know how to write and tell a story. But something else you do like a PRO is you KNOW these characters. Reading you is like being there and watching these people up close. This could esaily be the continuation picking up where IOTH left us so disappointed, and nevermind the reboot that was even more disappointing.

You capture the characters and dynamics brilliantly and bring the characters to life and your descriptive work is amazing. You set the scene beautifully. The action in this is bar none perfection. The chemistry is off the charts and you capture that like a boss. The movements and interactions between the characters are so awesomely written and you transition like a pro for ease of reading. I love it.

You understand the assignment, Mirage. This is classic Jarod tho "

"... observed Jarod shake the magazine from the gun, and ensure the chamber was clear.

"Oh, right, protection," Jarod purred, nonchalantly tossing the gun aside. He sidled closer to Parker, and whispered into her hair, "Protection. Tell me," he drawled, "how's that working out for you, hmm?"

 

love!! I want more. Now.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jami.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/09/22
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is what I'm talking about! I didn't expect another update so quickly.Am in love ’. More!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/22
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

More! I love this. Wow, you're a wordsmith and awesome storyteller.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jami.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/10/22
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You know Jarod will want to blow up something of Lyle's instead of any other options. Does this mean Broots is going to have a fake death in the explosion? I can't wait for more. Thank you to the moon and back for sharing your gifts with us. ’

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/10/22
Summary:

The pursuit for Jarod turns deadly in this present day Dystopia. Who will die and who will live?

Let's find out.



Categories: Post IOTH, Post Rebirth
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Musing, Comedy, Drama, Romance, Smut, Suspence/Mystery, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1448
Read Count: 92
[Report This] Published: 08/10/22 Updated: 08/10/22


Title: Chapter 1: Fallen Angels in the Satan's Playground

well done ….  The idea to put dogs in hot dogs must have been Asmet "dr." Oz the mass dog killer's idea.? This needed to be written and I'm ashamed I didn't think of it myself.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/22