An update?

Just perfect. My, my.

Oooh. Oh my god!

I hesitate to use the word evil Jarod. He is being Jarod imo. He hasn't always treated her that well on the tv series. They bring out the worst in each other so many times. This is a realistic take on what's on my dvds. I'm in awe.

I hope you don't mind so many reviews all at once but I joined months ago and didn't have time to read and now I'm quarantined and binge reading lol! This is hands down my favorite pretender christmas story. It's beautiful and sweet but not so much that christmas cheer prevents Miss Parker from doing what she should have done a long time ago. I can think of no greater gift. I love this. It's like one of those christmas ghosts stories but with a centre styling.

I'm late to the party. Oops. Oh, Mirage, each piece you write is irresistible and satisfying. I read you compulsively. The characters... how do you write them so in character? I can't get enough. The topic is important and controversial and so original. You're tackling it gracefully.

Oomph. Profound, horrific.

In your stories Miss Parker usually saves herself. The majority of the time she does. We see her trying to do that here, basically trying to move her hand in a sawing action to make the knife slice the rest of the way through her hand so she can be free. But she doesn't succeed.

Jarod coming in surprised me. You leave it to my imagination to how Jarod arrives and I'm going to say that he and Sydney were in contact. Jarod may have even bugged Sydney's phone. Or Broots begged him to follow Miss Parker when she discovered another victim and went to free the victim.

I think the only reason Jarod didn't end Lyle is because Miss Parker wasn't breathing, ya know? I hope I'm right about my theories. I love this darkness. Please add the rest. Thank you for all of these missing pieces.

I love the wit, intelligence, and excitement you pack into each story. The pages are already flying so to speak. I eagerly await future chapters!

Oh snap! Why didn't I find you sooner? I'm on board so late in the game here. I've got many stories to catch up on.

I'm loving what I'm reading and you know what you're doing. The characters are so on point it's scary. It's also amazing, mind you, but it is scary too.

I'm enthralled and enamored of you.

I have the audacity to ask for more. Please. 🥺 ❤️

"Jarod believed that Eminem added another dimension to Beethoven, and that tying Lyle to Margaret's boat, towing him out to sea, and leaving him to die would be a delightful deviation from monotony."

lol. I love it, Jarod's thoughts going from one thing to another. That's the way he thinks.

I love that Jarod wanted some hustle from the app too. We've all been there trying to get our app to call home cos it's an emergency and the stupid app doesn't know the difference between regular calling home and emergency calling home. A scathing review? No one wants a scathing review from Jarod. Do they, Mirage? Do you ever worry about scathing reviews or scathing reviews from the actors? I'm really curious now. I'd be terrified to post my Pretender fics online. I think I'd die if I got a bad review from MTW. But I would like to write some. I don't know how to write at all. You inspire me so much and really make me want to try.  Please post more. The characters are ...exactly in character and it's scary the way you do this.

EPIC! I love this chapter. OMG the library. "Contentious ghost and secret passage" and then boom Jarod has secret passages. OMG!! Gothic trifecta achieved. I love it. Damn, girl, you rule. Glad to see you back again too. So much to love. Thank you so much for updating this.

Wow, you knocked this one right out of the ballpark, and every single character and word was pretender perfect. You keep on raising the freaking bar. You keep me craving more. I love it.

Never change. Never stop writing. We need you. Jarod will never get any rest if you keep writing him, hint hint cough cough. Keep writing please.