This is short. And on point, too. Doesn't need one word more and is just great.
Reviewer: shaack Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/10/21 08:12 pm
This is short on words, and strong on quality. Is this complete? I would like to read more. You're off to strong, terrific start.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/10/21 02:27 am
Terrific! You could continue this hint hint psst psst. We would all love it if you did.
Reviewer: Kels Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/21 09:55 pm
Date: 28/09/21 01:55 am
Ow.
Terrific job. Any chance of a continuation?
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/21 04:52 am
Pretender ghost stories are the coolest. I detect your influences slightly. I think I'm catching the writing bug finally too after so many years. This is really good. I'm glad you shared it and that I read it. I don't go giving out ten star ratings to everyone. You really earned it.
Reviewer: Contessa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/09/21 04:21 am
No reason to be terrified dear. You're among family. This was bittersweet and perfect for Halloween. It's already Halloween in case you didn't know and has been forever. I'm interested in reading more if you've got more and you could keep this going in a supernatral way. Very nicely done. You earned a 10 and a favorite.
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed [Report This]Date: 21/09/21 05:01 am