"She'd kill me if I left much scarring." Lol. Spending this Saturday catching up to fan favorites. This first chapter is so cool. I'm really enjoying the read.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/02/18 11:37 pm
There are many story lines/episodes that in my opinion would benefit from redaction but Donoterase stands out among them all (well that and The Inner Sense and definitely IOTH - I know you're working on those too, right? *smiles* And the ending to the show as well?)
I love the power struggle, albeit brief, between Jarod and old man Parker, that was well played, nightowl, and so Jarodesque "if you love her..." - but of course you nailed Jarod, you nailed them all! The flight, Jarod's thoughts, all of it, splendid.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/06/11 03:04 am
One of the best stories written for the pretender. Love where you went with the characters especially Miss Parker or can i say Cario.
Reviewer: SAN Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/11/10 05:25 pm
So, as promised, I'm here to beg for an update. I just read the entire story (again) and it is begging for continuation. The plot is amazing and to be honest, it should have gone down exacly this way instead of J leaving her to die. *bad genius, bad!*
Your characterizations were spot on perfect, the dialogue was brilliant, it's amazingly well written. What typos? There are none. So please...What happens next? Does the Centre find out and interfere? Will Jarod just wait patiently for her? Will Jem and the gang try to break her out or take down the Centre?
I know you can do it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your encouragement and for your own stories. I do have the next chapter started but have had to put it aside for a bit due to real life stuff, I will finish it.
I absolutely want it finished. My big fear is that I will not be able to live up to all those wonderful reviews that I'll screw up the ending. So I'm trying very hard to get it right! As soon as I think I can tackle it again ..soon I hope... I want to try and finish it. Although I tend to write long chapters so it may take 2 or 3 more managable chapters to finish the story..
Thank you, as you know it is always nice to know people out there are reading and care enough to let you know it. It's food for the fanfic writer, without it our muse dies! Mine has been faking it for a while so she could vacation, but I think I got her back.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/10 09:20 am
Hi Nightowl,
This was a really good chapter, and well worth the wait! I like the way the relationship between Jarod and Parker has developed over the chapters. Your writing is so descriptive, that it really makes me feel as though I am watching a Pretender episode. I hope we won't have to wait too long for the next chapter. I am so anxious to see what is going to happen next! Thanks for a such an intersting and intriguing story.
Twingirl
Author's Response:
Hello Twingirl10,
Thank you for the reviews. Yes there does seem to be a longer time between chapters as the chapters have been growing in length. It seems there is so much ground work to put in before the next chapter. We are nearing the end so if I can hold your attention just a little longer! Thank you for staying with the story.
nightowl
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/08 02:39 am
Hi! I'm really enjoying your story. I agree with others, the jellyfish part was quite amusing. LOL! I can't wait until you post more. Good job.
Twingirl :)
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/04/08 10:12 pm
Hi! I'm really enjoying your story. I agree with others, the jellyfish part was quite amusing. LOL! I can't wait until you post more. Good job.
Twingirl :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your thoughts, I will tell you the jellyfish part was the most fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Don't think I can do that one again. But I will look for reasons to add amusing parts to the story.
The only way I know you enjoy a part of the story is if you let me know, so thank you for taking the time to do that.
nightowl
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/04/08 10:12 pm
Hurrah for chapter 6 - well done!! This is so well written; the characters come alive and I am left wanting to read more and more!! I loved the Donoterase episode - it is my favourite but it always leaves me feeling a bit disappointed - now I don't have to be!!! Hopefully, I don't have to wait long for the next chapter ....please!!!!
You have real talent, nightowl ...keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
How kind! I can only hope to live up to your praise. Frankly, I don't know how! The chapter I'm working on now is proving to be difficult to get it the way I'm picturing it in my mind--and I certainly don't want to let the readers that are enjoying the story down.
Thank you Phoebe for the kind response.
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/01/08 07:39 am
This is really very good indeed! When can we expect to read the next chapter ? You have captured the personalities of the characters so well and I can hardly wait to read the next instalment. Hurry, please!!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/08 06:49 am
I loved this idea. That episode always bothered me. My question is--now what happens?
I will be watching for the answer. Good idea, good writing.
[Report This]Date: 22/12/07 12:54 pm
Very interesting twist to Donoterase, will be interesting to see where you take this *waits for next chapter to magically appear :P *
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 21/12/07 10:52 am
the writing is GREAT! the story is very interesting and seems really promising. keep up with the good work :o)
can't wait to read more of this one :o)
peace!
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/07 02:05 am
AT LAST! Terrific finally seeing this coming together. Hopefully the next chapter will be along soon--this is a great idea, and well done.
Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/12/07 10:23 pm
