Great chapter. Caught me unawares, I actually went back to read the prev chapt. ;-) Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: See what happens when you have a slow muse? Glad you enjoyed it and am working faster on the next chapter.
Date: 12/02/08 01:15 am
Oh this chapter (11) is the best by far! More please! (and notice I did say Please! No threats with pointy sharp sticks)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 16/11/07 02:06 pm
This is wonderful! I really like the last two chapters. great job and so many good lines. Very worth the wait and so many possiblities! Did I say nicely done? (wink)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/06/07 09:54 pm
Oh so bold. Very clever. And it's good to see Sydney helping out and actually doing something for Jarod for once. Keep up your great pace!
Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]Date: 18/06/07 01:42 pm
Oh that was most intriguing. What i liked most was how 'in episode' it was. Have to rush to work now but when i get hom e will be checking out next chappie.
Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 30/05/07 08:16 pm
Loved it. I hope that there's more. I liked that Sydney was the one that put the thought of escaping the Centre into Jarod's head by giving him the sim.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/07 12:27 pm
hey tina!!
wonderful start... i'm interested to see how you fill in those 'three' weeks (i think it was 3 anyways!)..it's a story that's been begging for someone to write, and i cannnot wait to read more!
write quiickly :P
- K
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/07 06:28 am
Please, can I have some more? Don't leave me hanging. LOL
Reviewer: Joy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/07 02:49 am
Oh Tinanaz, I'm liking this so far. But then again, I've always been very interested in trying to figure out the untold details involving the whole Damon/escape-thing.
I think I have a pretty good idea what the new SIM contains, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see for next chapter (which I'm hoping is soon).
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/07 01:29 am
interesting take on a possible scenario after Damon. Liked it.
Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/07 01:19 am