The hell just continues and continues... blast.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 08:41 pm
Just re-read Gone but not forgotten. Been a while since the story was updated, but I still hope that it will be finished some day ;)
It's a very good and well-written story and it desereves an ending.
Author's Response: thanks so much! I promise it will get an ending.!! Thanks for the feedback, it is always aprpeciated! Reviewer: jen Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/12/07 03:14 pm
Hold your horses.
Stop the presses.
Just a darn minute.
Abort the mission.
Tsk. Tsk. Tsk. We betas work our fingers to the bone cleaning up the mess you call punctuation, grammar, spelling, vocabulary, sentences, storylines, punctuation, etc. just so you look good and readers are fooled into thinking you're actually literate and know how to put more than two words together. lol
(Said with dripping sarcasm.) And then, Jacci, my friend, I'm soooo saddened (holding tongue in cheek so excuse mumbling) accuses us of the delay??? Well, okay, perfection does take a little time. (Drops of sarcasm and tears falling on my shoe, ugh - get it off!)
And then you, my friend KatieQ, do not come to our defense??? I'm crushed. (which makes talking even harder, when you're flat as a pancake, like Jay tosses in the air.) sniff, sniff (wipes nose on sleeve - not mine, Ken's. lol)
You'll both just have to make a public (pretender fan public only - others would think it's weird) apology to me here and I'll expect a glowing testimonial in the next A/N for ch.13 for which, as you know, your muse called on the great manatees in the sky for guidance. (You can say thanks to Onisius too, if you want.) So do I win the prize for most run-on sentences in a review? BTW, great chapter.
Nothing left to say, except I'm going for a hike in Topanga Canyon. hehe lmao hahaha lol
Author's Response: you made me laugh.. i have no idea waht you speak off oh wise gramatically correct manatee lover, esq Reviewer: Scapegoat (single tear escaping down cheek) Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/08/07 02:04 pm
yay, another chapter!! pls tell me you've got more, the wait is killing me inside!
Author's Response: there will be more..I promise!! I'll try and be as quick as possible!!
Date: 05/08/07 11:34 pm
Finally! Very intriguing chapter. Cox is an interesting addition and I can't wait to see what Miss Parker has up her sleeve for Lyle. Keep it up keep it up!
Author's Response: thanks :).... i'm trying to squeeze the writing in whenever i can!! Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/07 03:13 pm
(yawn) Well, it's been so long KatieQ I almost forgot where I left off. (stiffling another yawn) It seems your Muse has been hibernating like Sarah's. (pausing to take a sip of coffee while eyeing my sharp pointy stick that sits patienly in the corner) I suppose to you want a reveiw huh?
Well ... in that case, it was good, very good. Like the interaction between Broots and Jay. And that slice of Miss Parker/Lyle interaction was priceless, even the mastercard ads can't beat it! Henrik is still a little wessel, and I worry about Lys. OK, I suppose (hope, demand, pray for) the next chapter to be a kick ass one?
Author's Response: How kind of you to leave a review, despite the pathetic wait time... i hope you shall enjoy the next chapter.. a lot of things shall start to unravel.. so we'll discuss them..say in two months time?? (just kidding. .i hope anyways) Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/07/07 02:31 pm
Love it! Better late than never! Need more soon. Creepy old man is really starting to freak me out. It's so good, I've lost the ability to write complete sentences;)
Author's Response: i will do my very best to bring more soon. I'm glad visser is creeping everyone out.. he's doing the job he is supposed to! Thanks for the review
Date: 31/07/07 08:08 am
Oh intriguing
So many new questions added to the mix, will be looking forward to the answers
Author's Response: Thanks Sarah.. i promise all shall be answered.. :) Reviewer: Manoline Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/07/07 03:28 am
Great chapter, almost worth the wait. The story keeps getting better and better. And to quote someone else: more please.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed Tina!! I have to make up for the fact Jarod keeps getting away in Nothing Means Something in this one ;).. but thanks for the review and hopefully le muse will cooperate better this time around..
Date: 30/07/07 10:43 pm
